Tomb Raiding: With a Ghost's Back, I'm a Chosen Ridge-Breaker

Are the Unloading Warriors really just strong and nothing else? Their tools are also very professional. You can't write the protagonist like an idiot, just repeating the original plot, right? Is there no other cheat code besides storage space? No matter how strong you are, you'll still die if you encounter physical traps or self-destruct mechanisms.

The biggest failure of this book is that the author made the protagonist feel like a supporting character. While Hu Bayi is the protagonist in *Ghost Blows Out the Light*, Wang Kaixuan is the protagonist in this book! However, aside from gaining several decades of memories and increased fighting power, Wang Kaixuan's personality is no different from his *Ghost Blows Out the Light* counterpart—all…

Overall, nothing has changed. Fatty is still fat and ugly, still devoted to Hu Bayi, and still a supporting character!

The name "Unloading Warriors" sounds nice, but don't talk about ghosts. Even if you tattooed a Gold Saint on your back, it wouldn't stop the Unloading Warriors from being a bunch of low-skilled laborers.

Decades of experience wasted; not only does he speak incoherently, but he also keeps spewing poison, saying things like "you'll find out soon" and so on, acting like a charlatan. The most interesting thing about time-travel novels is changing the plot and creating subplots; it's best not to reveal things that haven't happened yet. What's even more poisonous is telling the protagonist about future events or blatantly hinting at things to those around him. He's like a pen with no tact whatsoever.

Tomb raiding fanfiction is difficult to write. If the plot armor is too strong, the protagonist becomes a mere extra; if it's too weak, it feels like simply rewriting the original story. The most crucial point is that the loot obtained from the near-death experiences in the original work is essentially just valuables.

If the protagonist were different, the fat guy would have wiped out the entire country.

What is this? I'm increasingly unwilling to read it. It has no leadership qualities whatsoever. In the last few dozen chapters, Wu Xie has been acting as a babysitter. Is he some kind of key figure? Is he that important to you? I read the original novel a few years ago, and he's just a complete idiot. I don't know what he's thinking, constantly acting as his babysitter.

It's good to have multiple female leads; they've all been reborn, but it's boring if they're still timid and hesitant.

There's so much to write about in the world of Ghost Blows Out the Light. All of Ba Chang's later novels are set within this same universe, featuring powerful beings like ancient gods. I remember a giant banyan tree that could make you succumb to its influence with just a glance; it seems like this world has a Heavenly Dao.