The Thirteenth Month of the Dead

Of all the supernatural escape stories I've written right now, yours is the best. Why don't you keep writing? The fire seed next door is already dead.

Just don't end like the previous three books. Each time, you try to build a vast world, but you lose control of the plot, making it feel abrupt, rushed, and chaotic. The characters you develop don't stand out much later on, or they're just glossed over. The characters and plot in the early part of *The Scholar* are good; hopefully, you can maintain that momentum later on.

People always move forward. Hopefully, the author won't be bound by the past. Since horror isn't generating traffic, it's good to change themes. Right now, each dungeon has a different theme, making it feel like an overused work. Let's hope they find a new path soon.

The new book has already caught up with the previous one, and it seems the author is eager to change his image. The book failed to capitalize on its original strengths (a short, thrilling horror story): He Chu's world was poorly written, not only lacking in suspense but also featuring a predictable, clichéd plot. A newer author would have flopped long ago.

I've read all of this author's books, and none of them are properly completed. I even heard he was going to change his name to "The Passionate and Reckless Man" in an attempt to defy fate, but he didn't succeed. 🙂 I remember the author used to write a fantasy novel under a different account, which was also very good; I really liked it.

The writing style is excellent; it reads somewhat like the novel *72 Transformations*. However, I feel some mysteries could have been resolved later; the answers were revealed a bit too early.

Leave your background character's name for a chance to get a pigeon's attention (). Other settings can also be added, but whether they will be used depends on the writer's creative progress.

I used to highly regard Shusheng's abilities, and on many platforms, whenever the topic of "infinite horror novels" came up, I would strongly recommend Shusheng. But book after book, you've disappointed your fans far too many times. Now, "The Thirteen Months of Death" is your last chance in this life. Please fight with your back against the wall, and fight to the death for a chance to survive!

Every book by the author has the potential to become a bestseller. The character development and the excitement of the storylines are both top-notch. However, the reason none of them have truly become bestsellers is because the author often ends the main plot in a weak and unsatisfactory way. I sincerely hope that the author will polish the main plot development in his later books and avoid consistently writing books with disappointing endings.

It's a bit of a shame that the joke was scary; I hope this book can be written more smoothly.