The Thirteenth Month of the Dead

Don't just end like the previous three books. Every time I want to create a huge world view, but I can't control the development of the plot, it always ends up being very abrupt, sloppy and confusing. The characters created have no outstanding performance in the later period or are simply brushed off. The characters and plot in the early stages of Scholar are very good, I hope I can grasp them well in the later stages.

Supernatural escape now. You are the best at writing. Why not keep writing. The kindling next door has become useless.

People always move forward. I hope that the author will no longer be bound by the past. Since horror has no traffic, it is better to change the theme. Now each copy has a different theme, which is very similar to an excessive work. Look forward to it and find a new track as soon as possible.

The number of new books has now reached parity, and I feel like scholars are a bit eager to make a transition. The original advantage (horror and exciting short stories) was not brought into play: the world written in He Chu was very poorly written. Not only was it not thrilling, but the story was also cliched. You could tell the ending just by looking at the beginning. If a new author had jumped in, he would have jumped on the bandwagon. Without the blessing of a horror atmosphere, attention to the story's logical character creation will increase. These happen to be bad (this book only)                        The disadvantages are also expanded: the reading experience is like the last two books (which were unfinished, especially Above the Mist) and kept throwing away the setting. There are no surprises at all. What the reader wants is the secretion of dopamine when following the protagonist to solve the mystery step by step, rather than passively accepting whatever you say. Li Daosheng is like a personal camera, he has no motive for his actions (or rather he is too reluctant and does not have to do it). Especially after Wu Dao appeared, he was a carbon copy of Bai Yanliang and his brother. Bai Yanliang has been established in the early stage, but what about Li Daosheng Let's talk about the character creation issue: being kind for the sake of establishing the character, and being dark for the sake of the plot is too damn deliberate. The kind-hearted person in the sea of ​​people couldn't think of a good example for a while, so let's talk about blackening. The reason why Cheng Xue's two teammates killed their companions is simply outrageous. It's so damn outrageous that they opened the door. It's also hard to comment on why the Virgin was stabbed in the back and turned into a black man who was only good to the protagonist. Has the Holy Mother not been stabbed in the back in so many years? Have you never met a good person who knows how to repay kindness? Being disgusted by some evil people makes you hostile to everyone? Knowing the world but not being worldly, pitying all the people in the world and not regretting it even though it harms myself, what kind of holy mother can I be if I can't do these things? Of course, there are also good places, such as Zhonglu World. I like this the most. The rhythm and Miss Feng are both very good. Unfortunately, Miss Feng is offline. I don't know if she will appear in the future. Other copies feel so-so.

I have read all the books by this author, but none of them have been completed. I heard before that he wanted to change his name to the Passionate Reckless Man in order to change his life against the will of heaven, but he failed 🙂 I remember if the author opened a small account and wrote a reprint. It's a fairy tale, and it's very good-looking. I really like it, but as it was written, it turned into a weird fairy tale, and then disappeared. I really liked the emotional drama of the protagonist in that book. Looking back, it seems that several years have passed. I hope the author can improve to a higher level 🌹

The writing style is very good, and it reads a bit like the Seventy-two Transformations of Disha. However, I feel that some suspense can be solved later, and the answers are given a bit early.

Leave the name of your extra, and you will have a chance to get the attention of pigeons (). Other settings can also be added. Specifically, will the creative situation of a scholar who knows how to read——

In the past, I highly recognized the scholar's ability. Whenever the topic of "infinite horror novels" was discussed on many platforms, I would strongly recommend the scholar. But one book after another, you have disappointed book fans too many times. Now this "Thirteen Months of Death" is your last chance in this life. Please fight with your backs against the odds and survive!

Every book written by Scholar has the potential to become a hit. Whether it is the characterization or the brilliance of the copy, they are all top-notch. However, the reason why they have not really become a hit is because Scholar always likes to write the main plot in an anticlimactic way. I sincerely hope that the subsequent books of Scholar can polish the development of the main plot, and don't always write books that are unfinished.

The scare joke is a bit of a pity, I hope this can be written more smoothly.