The Absurd Haunted City

You have to know that your fans love to read dungeons and decryption escape streams, not deus ex machina. I knew the book was finished when I read Er Crying Ridge, and read Sleeper Next Door. Knowing that fans like to read dungeons, I continued to write a dungeon escape stream that is similar to the previous one. At least the results will not be too bad. I think your copy is not worse than his. I don't even have the desire to click on what you are writing now.

I sincerely recommend that scholars should not be too grand in their worldview and not have too many foreshadowings... Past history shows that you are suitable for writing some "simple" stories!

It was fine at the beginning, and it was fine until I finished processing Solitaire👻. As a result, something was not right at the beginning of Ercrying Ridge. The plot was the same as pressing fast forward. Horror Decryption turned into a cheat speedrun, but it was manageable. The end of the story is introduced later, so I don't know what to say. The perspective of each supporting character jumps east and west, and there is an inexplicable reincarnation and change of the timeline, and even the future protagonist is revealed. It feels to me that there are a hundred or two hundred chapters missing in the middle, and it is not the same style as the previous article. Can anyone tell me what's going on now?

You can only focus on writing, please don't let your love brain affect you this time 😭😭😭

Is transformation necessary? It feels not as good as old books 😊

Can't you write about ghost stories about players?

The whole beginning of the mist and the direction of the story are very comfortable, and it slowly enters the story, which is quite scary. The beginning of Guicheng is very good, but it starts to go downhill when it comes to Jielonggui, and Ercrying Ridge is even more... There are too many adjectives, too many scene descriptions. After reading a few chapters, I feel "messy" and "tired". I really want to skip it. I must work hard before putting it on the shelves.

Please update more!

Isn't your writing about Canghai Youyou very good? No more writing

Is this book unfinished again? I've ordered this one, but I won't read it until it's finished. This one doesn't even have a closing statement Don't write a cycle in the new book, the male protagonist's life experience is a mystery, it's really boring Don't be like the players and create too many characters, you don't have enough writing power, you can only rely on offline and twist characters to continue writing Really learn about fighting descriptions and some reasonable logical foundations. I haven't seen any fights in March. This book is a little better but still annoying What you are good at is traditional supernatural escape and reasoning. The theme of the new book may not be horror, but the content must be consistent with the design of the copy. Related to teamwork and decryption Oh, and also, the pacing of your book is not good. The poisonous drug in Children's Crying Mountain is full. It is not until you form a group to fight the tower and write back to the comfort zone that the rhythm becomes normal. To be honest, that is the level you should be at Then I tied it and wanted to raise it, but you were gone. Originally, the horror category is weak, and you yourself are in constant trouble. Xiaolong has transformed into a monthly ticket holder, and the air conditioner is criticized every day, but at least he is in good condition. Oh my god, I really can't see it. These three first-wave fans are all saved by horror novels. You are not bad either. Have a good rest and work hard on the next book. I'll wait until it's finished to watch 🙂