The Bizarre Calendar

The latest two chapters are really good. One sentence is enough to publish two chapters.

First of all, let me state that if you can write to the last degree, it means your skills are not bad. Therefore, this post will not talk about the good parts, but the bad parts. After all, there is always no shortage of praise, but criticism runs the risk of being disliked. However, criticism is a more important part of the evaluation of a work than praise, so I posted this post for this purpose to summarize some mistakes that can be seen from the reader's perspective, hoping to be helpful to the author. The following—— To put it bluntly, this book is written at the same level as the author's previous works such as "The Immortal Name of Disease", "The Doomsday of Differences", "The Demon King is Strong but Too Diligent", and "I Really Don't Want to Be Taken Away". In other words, they have the same advantages, but they all have the same shortcomings: in the early stage, the writing is smooth and smooth, and it makes me cry with precise control. The planning skills are astonishing, and the 10,000-word chapter even surprises the readers. However, after several climaxes, it starts to feel weak. The specific manifestation is that there is no clear explanation of the follow-up arrangements in the outline. It can be seen from the lines that there is no clue. The key turning point is that between Chapter 305 and Chapter 308, there is a gap in the plot narrative. A big problem is that the narrative from Qin Ze's perspective was avoided for a long time after the battle to defeat the demons, and what Qin Ze and Qiao Wei did during their escape in the Old Calendar Realm was simply omitted. As a result, the Qin Ze who appeared later was already unfamiliar to me. How can a reader of a book not recognize the protagonist? The sense of fragmentation is severe and the sense of substitution disappears, so I cannot look at the subsequent plot with an optimistic attitude, and I can't help but find faults to try to prove the concept that "the article is poorly written". However, there are also many problems that cannot be denied in the thorns picked out by subjective bias. For example, the plot in the later stage was written too quickly, killing the Lord of Immortality to break through the world, mountains and seas, so he parachuted into many things that had never been seen before. There is no foreshadowing for the Old Chroniclers, and then there are no more than ten chapters between the introduction of their names and the recollection of their lives to their death. Shiva and Amaterasu died just after they met, and the eleven brothers in the prison of the Tribulation Prison did not even have names but were killed just to let Qin Ze escape. In my personal opinion, I don't have a vivid and vivid impression of them at all, even if it is sensational, it has little effect. It is undoubtedly poor writing. To sum up, the plot direction starting from Chapter 305 is a bit too "macro". Except for the sensational part, the published text is basically based on the outline, and the handling of details is much worse than the text written in the early stage of the novel. This is not my personal bias, this is definitely a real problem. Compared to the later stages of Mopin, first of all, the people who fight are all people they know, and secondly, enough intrigue is retained to reveal the secrets laid out during hundreds of chapters, and then the fight between strong men is written, creating crises and turning points in the fluctuations of the battle situation, and bringing out the mystery of each character. The dynamic movements and moves are all written down in detail, how well written it is, so I suggest the author to re-read "The Doomsday Jigsaw Puzzle" written by Geng Zongxin, a writer of the Twelve Heavenly Kings in 2021 (this is a heartfelt statement). As long as you write it like when you write a puzzle, you will definitely not fall into the street! I wish your thoughts will flow freely when you write the article. Don't make the story too big, and write something with a happy ending!

Anyway, almost all the calendars are booked. I just said a few words to you to break the permanent ban. No wonder I can't become a great writer. This is the pattern.

Does the author have any special hobbies? I haven't read the second half, but the first half can be summarized as the story of the protagonist, his wife and his wife's dog-licking. This is a male love video, not a cuckold video or a special fetish video.

I have read about 30 pieces. The author's setting is very good, but the story is not very attractive to me personally. In fact, looking at the setting, I'm really looking forward to a story that's supernatural, scary, curious, and a little bit fun. It doesn't matter if it's not that exciting. With the development of online writing, more and more competition is based on interlocking and fascinating plots. For example, Dao Wei Xian, Lord of Mysteries, is really not a traditional novel, but the plot is addictive. In my opinion, this article is more of a love story. Harem romance novels are easy to break down in the middle and later stages of writing. Even some similar articles have to sell meat or revolve around female characters in order to maintain subscriptions in the later stage because plot readers are screened out. For example, "I was trapped by a demon" which once surprised me at the beginning and collapsed in the middle and later stages. There are many similar works that I will not name. In today's personalized era, readers are pursuing more personalized self-expression and more self-expression. The main line of this story is basically connected by the male protagonist's wife. Many of the male protagonist's behavioral motivations are because of his wife. The male protagonist has almost become a tool of the wife's role. When I watched it, I felt innately very uncomfortable, unspectacular, unattractive, and without personalized expression. (This kind of character might be quite good as a supporting role). Love stories and harem stories actually have an audience, but I personally feel that they are not very popular. To put it bluntly, the plot is king, and a confidante is just an enhancement to the novel. Many male authors cannot write female characters well, which makes the novel more toxic. (Personal humble opinion) I quite like the author's first novel, and I have subscribed to part of it on another reading account (in the middle, the male protagonist fell in love with the heroine in a mental hospital and then abandoned the novel). Maybe this story just didn't connect with me. I wish the author a long-lasting success and see you in the next book.

Suddenly I found that I fell into the same person's trap over and over again╯▂╰ The author of this book is actually more sincere, how could it be him? , The last book, the last book is so bad, help me, I also highly praised the weird calendar, how dare I, mud, if this book continues to suck, this will be the last time I die in this pit, I promise

I subscribed to a chapter just to be able to talk here! Introduction: An old almanac came, but the wedding was a Christian wedding (commonly known as a Western wedding) and a dog priest was asked to witness it. This contradiction is disgusting! Withdraw❗

How to say it? Generally speaking, I have read almost every book since Doomsday Puzzle Game. Although this one is not considered a cut, it has more than 300 pictures. Is it really good? The more I write, the less it becomes. Is it not suitable for this subject matter? It's time to step out of your comfort zone

You must finish this novel. I really don't read your novel in The Eunuch. The writing was good and the plot was good. Why is it always the eunuch?

For old book friends who came from Immortality and Doomsday, once the author starts to interrupt and delay updates at irregular intervals, it is a sign that he is preparing to scribble the ending.