Bone Dragon Heavy Industries

Publication-grade fantasy. Read until it's on the shelf, the layout is compact; there are clear main lines, many branch plots, a strong sense of rhythm; and the writing is strong. Great reading experience in one sitting. But the disadvantage is that, as the author said, it is published on an online text platform, so the reading experience is not good. Short reading will destroy the strong sense of rhythm of the novel and make it impossible to fully experience the author's slowly uncovering the world. Definitely worth reading

The author must not compromise with the harem party, the single heroine is the best and purest love! This book is really well written, I'll be sure to follow this writing style🔥

Speechless, the male and female protagonists are all opposite-sex protagonists, is there no neutral protagonist? Tired of seeing them all

Have you ever been a bone dragon? Some things are scribbled and taken for granted.

Viola

The author mentioned in the preface that his techniques may be outdated, but I think there are no outdated techniques, only outdated stories, or in other words, outdated beliefs in literature. I think the foundation of literature is faith. The ability of works such as "The Divine Comedy", "Odyssey" and "Li Sao" to shine brightly in human history does not rely on narrative or rhetorical techniques. They rely on faith and the huge passion brought by faith. Faith does not mean religion here. Don't regard literature as a magical stick. You can apply Kierkegaard's definition of "leap of faith". This faith prompts people to burst out their passion between trustworthiness and disbelief, and guides people to plunge into the ethereal and mirage-like landscape in this wilderness. I read a lot and then looked back at your preface. I only read about twenty chapters before I gave you five monthly votes. I think there is a knowable (arcane throne setting?) But uncertain romance in your creation. Passion will burst out from this uncertainty at this time, and it will be great. It seems that I am saying it wrongly, but my suggestion is, don't read the book reviews. Why not click on this new book and enter the author's world to take a look?

The best description of the official is not to describe it. Just contact it and don't describe it in detail. This can avoid poisonous points and maintain the original mysterious majesty.

First of all, I have read less than in previous years. I am distracted by other things and my taste has become more and more picky. The last time I felt this way was in "We Live in Nanjing", a science fiction short story about the end of the world. To summarize my thoughts, firstly, the setting is rigorous. I have to express my feelings after reading a lot of competing products that just write the setting chapters and then use them as wipes. If you are better, you will change it if you listen to the advice. If you don't, you will simply not be able to stand it anymore. The second is that the writing is good, the plot is relatively substantial, and the sense of connection is strong. Many old authors have problems with hydrology, but this book only took me three days to read the two volumes. After reading more, similar situations seem more comfortable. The third point is even more valuable. Many newcomers are not good at it, and the pace is even very fast. They are invincible in the world within two volumes, and then they forcefully change the map and the enemy comes from the sky. The experience of following up may not be strong at this point, but if you read continuously, you can feel that the rhythm control is understandable. The interludes of love and food plots are also more able to relieve the tension of battle/preparation. This may be considered water in a sense, but I still understand it here. Fourthly, the plot foreshadowing in online articles is relatively sketchy. If you look carefully at many of the later plots, there are hints of it over and over again. This point directly stands out from many fast food articles. In terms of plot, this book mainly focuses on the collision between earth science and technology and otherworldly magic technology. Common interesting points in this genre are the use of technological products to suppress local indigenous people, and national power to suppress medieval magic. These elements are present, but the performance is also relatively restrained in the early stages to make room for the development of the plot. At present, the first volume after escaping from the dead is actually more of a road story. However, with the deepening of the development of technology in the two worlds and the intervention of national forces, it seems that it will be more difficult to write without switching to farming. If farming, the change will be relatively large. I don't know how the story line will be arranged. If it is to be extended to a genre of millions of words, the later period will probably be incomparable with the current one, and it will be too long to be unbearable. Let's talk about the spoilers, the first volume is about escaping, the second volume is sailing on the sea to gain a foothold and reveal the mastermind behind the scenes (I personally think the fight at the beginning of the second volume is a bit extreme), the third volume is driving a train to rob a prison to obtain resources and learn more about the mastermind, and the fourth volume is currently watching In the future, we will fight the Dragon Cavalry and cause some deep damage to the mastermind behind the scenes. The old church may be destroyed in this volume or wait until the fifth volume. By the fifth or sixth volume, it will basically be the decisive battle. If it is delayed any longer, it may still be a good online novel, but it will definitely not be a good story.

I feel that the level of force in the other world is too low, and the two sides are not equal at all. I feel that if the logistics can keep up, a Wu Zhi can go sideways.

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