Doomsday America

It's the latest chapter (220), please code it. The rhythm is very steady, the details are full of realism, the writing is smooth and not stiff, the characters are distinct, and the description of North American society and people is not obviously inconsistent. It can be seen that the author has indeed thought about and deduced the impact of the apocalypse on people, the various social conditions under the impact of the apocalypse, and the survival and development paths of survivors after the apocalypse, etc., And has also tried hard to describe them in the article. This is the best part. Because this is the most fundamental feature of the doomsday theme - that is, the devastating disaster reshuffles the social order and the reconstruction of a new order adapted to the doomsday. From this perspective, this book is actually a bit like "Lingao Qiming". A reader's interest in apocalyptic themes will most likely include an appreciation of the picture of "the collapse of the existing order and everyone surviving according to their own abilities." On the other hand, most apocalyptic novels mostly talk about evolution, which is actually not interesting. If it develops, it will become a shell-changing and upgrade novel. So the restraint on "evolution" in this book is very good and should be maintained. People don't want to evolve. Even if they open more cheats, the protagonist's aura is overflowing with luck, etc., They don't want to evolve abilities. Even zombies don't have to evolve too much. The current style of group consciousness division of labor is actually almost enough. What's not enough can be filled with conflicts and struggles between humans. The most dangerous thing is always the human being, and the most important thing to write about is always the human being, not the evolved monster - whether the monster is evolved from a zombie or the protagonist. There is indeed too much dialogue, which is not unacceptable as a style, but after more than 1.2 Million words, it still seems repetitive with fk and fk. However, if you change the writing style rashly, reduce the interaction of details, and zoom out the camera, there will be a danger. "What should come has not come, and what should not go has gone" will be embarrassing. Of course, as its power grows, Assassin's Creed will probably slowly transition to map coloring sooner or later. It can be seen that as the number of people in the camp increases, the protagonist's perspective has changed somewhat from the original comprehensive perspective. It is currently in a period of change. The author chose to maintain the main line development of the protagonist's participation and the detail granularity of the new direction of the camp, and reduced the ink on the daily tasks and existing character templates that have been described. The most worrying thing is the decrease in readers caused by the slow pace, which in turn may affect the author's creative enthusiasm and mentality. 20 Hours after the last chapter was updated, 200 people were still able to read it, which shows that this book is still relatively niche. With this kind of subject matter and development potential, if the author can maintain his status, there is still a lot of content that can be written, and he can really reshape the entire world. It would be a pity if you were rejected because your results were not as good as expected. Come on, author.

As the title states, this is the first time I have read a novel about a doomsday mortal (probably a mortal?). I also liked reading doomsday novels before, but now they are basically some systematic novels, lacking logic, and the characters are flat What I like most about this novel is every character portrayed by the author, from the calm and powerful protagonist who commands the overall situation, to the loyal and courageous, a bit ghostly Mo serves as the deputy of the mediator, and then meets the utilitarian but principled Eugene for the first time, the timid and panic-stricken William and the kid's mother (I can't remember the name at the moment), and the sensible and lovable kid... Each of them left a deep impression on me. Although I have not watched The Walking Dead, the novel created for me a picture of hope as one united in the despair of the doomsday. The plot is smooth but a bit rough. I agree that the large amount of language description can reflect the character's personality and the apocalyptic atmosphere, but it will make the plot a bit dragging. Also, I have to complain about my personal thoughts. I am not very optimistic about the design of the astronaut plot. I don't know how the author will arrange it later. Finally, come on, come on, I believe the author is great, please write at your own pace. Readers' ideas are important, but they are only for reference.

The half-Chinese and half-foreign curse words, the excessive dialogue, and the foreign names make it extremely confusing to read. It can be seen that the author has watched some American movies and TV shows and deliberately imitated them, but written works and film and TV works are obviously not the same thing. The author's skills are not enough to put the scenes he imagined in his mind into words, so there is such a confusing situation. After reading more than 20 chapters, I couldn't stand it anymore and gave up.

The writing is very good. I like this theme myself, America + zombies + farm + farming. In addition, the protagonist's IQ is online and he doesn't mess around with women. The supporting characters are also flesh and blood, and the characters are clearly drawn.

The characters are very fleshed out and the writing is excellent. By the way, I would like to give you a suggestion, don't add evolutionary settings to zombies. Now this zombie is already a super model. It takes only a few seconds to be infected, and the speed is comparable to Bolt. If it evolves again, you can't imagine how other people can survive.

Beautiful, love watching. It's been a long time since I've seen this kind of apocalyptic novel with no system, no supernatural powers, and no Virgin! But how should I put it, this kind of doomsday... No, it should be, all doomsday novels have a big drawback. The early confrontation between people and zombies, the kind of survival under the threat of zombies, is always the most exciting and interesting part. However, after establishing a base (fixed) instead of a camp (unfixed), the zombies are greatly weakened, and the confrontation between people becomes the main line. At this time, it will be very boring. Killing one after another, there will always be new enemies... Just like the back of The Walking Dead. Of course this does not mean that there will be no confrontation between people in the early stage, but zombies will always be number one in the early stage. I hope this book can write something different! Get out of the base pit of a doomsday novel! Of course I personally feel there is little hope 🙂🙂🙂

There is a problem. They don't evolve and have no superpowers. How do zombies and beasts defeat modern armies?

It fits the Ami ecology that Lao A and Lao Zhen say. There is a cult next door, college students have to find godfathers to pay their student loans, ordinary people cannot afford antibiotics and veterinary drugs, farmers have private soldiers who have children (cowboy training), the protagonist relies on foresight and natural power to become a star, and if the family has money and does not take back loans, he can escape execution and kill other farmers wantonly; the only difference is that the white aunt does not cook white food It is a pity that the chat ratio is too high, so there is not much desire to watch.

It is really rare to find such a high-quality apocalyptic novel. It is no exaggeration to say that this is one of the top five apocalyptic zombie novels in the past few years. The protagonist has no system, no superpowers, and no mutations. He only has some world-class physical fitness when traveling through time. The most important thing is to rely on his mind. I have not seen this tradition in a long time, relying solely on plot and character arcs to support the direction of the entire novel. Another point is that the protagonist has a lovable personality, neither a virgin nor ruthless and selfish, and has a bit of humanity and kindness in his determination. It's good So far, all the characters described by the author have their own characteristics, the character arcs are full, and the plot rhythm is moving steadily in all directions. There are no particularly obvious poisonous points. It is pretty good up to more than 100 chapters. The only thing that some people may not accept is that the dialogue between the characters is very abundant and watery, with obvious characteristics of American dramas. I guess if you like watching American dramas, you can accept it. As long as you don't jump in the back, at least it's a quality base! The only bad thing is that I read this book too early and it's still a seedling🌱It's so annoying (#`n´)

It was so overwhelming right from the beginning. Several supporting characters could scold each other for several pages.

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Overall it's great, but there are still a lot of minor flaws, especially at the end. Did the author get too excited? What's there to gain from two male prisoners? Do you think the camp environment is great? She still got wet, and so did the girl with the big balls. The original writing made people think she was aggrieved by being forced, but it turned out that she took the initiative to get into bed with that wretched man when they first met. The style of the painting was a bit disconnected, and it made people feel that they were the same as the two men. It also had a negative impact on the overall atmosphere of the camp. It felt like a big family was living a good life, but one day suddenly hired three criminals (not even explaining their crimes) to be servants. Let's see how it is dealt with.

The content of the book and the character's IQ are online throughout, and each character is distinct. The author's quality is very good, and the rhythm is very comfortable. Many people say it is not good, but it is actually because the plot advances slowly, but there is no unnecessary plot in the article, the rhythm is well controlled, and it is very comfortable to read. Strong recommendation

The author has the ability to write well, but he is super good at writing. I am convinced.

To be honest, there is too much nonsense, and it relies entirely on dialogue to advance the plot. I wrote a lot of meaningless nonsense in an episode of American TV dramas, gags between the protagonists, and meaningless exchanges, etc., Into the novel.

A sound apocalyptic team should have three elements: 1. Stability 2. Sustainability 3. Risk resistance 1. Stability: The early survival stage requires a strong consensus, a unified goal and a leader who obeys the crowd; a certain degree of purity of the team should be ensured. For example, it is appropriate to recruit members on a single basis to ensure that the leader has the absolute right to speak. In the later stabilization stage, depending on the size of the team from small to large, the following should be adopted: 1. A small team system with clear division of labor, unified opinions, and complementary personal abilities. The total number of team members should be maintained at 7 or less. 2. A family partnership system where partners, relatives, associates, etc. Are the bond, and the total number of team members is maintained at 7-15 people. 3. For a medium-sized team with clear division of responsibilities and a basic management system, the total number of team members should be maintained at around 15 to 30 people. 4. A large team with a clear management system and a sound management system, with a total team size of more than 30 people. 2. Sustainability: In the early stage, the main purpose is to search for supplies. In the later stage, depending on the size of the team, one or more capabilities of farming, fishing, hunting, and breeding should be developed; at the same time, a full-time combat team composed of young adults should be maintained, responsible for maintaining team order, fighting against external enemies, and searching for resources that cannot be produced. If necessary, you can consider expanding personnel recruitment channels, such as recruiting survivors through radio broadcasts, merging other teams, etc. 3. Risk resistance; 1. External risks: Full consideration should be given to various risks such as zombies, survivors, casualties, attrition, and resource shortages. Establish complete survival plans and emergency plans to enhance risk resistance. 2. Internal risks: A complete material distribution system and management system should be established. Medium and large teams should consider warehousing management and internal and external transactions of materials. Small team materials should be privately owned by individuals or families depending on the team's situation; or a primitive communal system that allocates all resources in the team according to work and needs based on the system and the leader's personal judgment.

In the short term, the population of the camp will increase dramatically The current main plot 1. Open up new strongholds (prisons, "explosives" in oil production plants) 2. Explore the laws of zombies (long term) 3. Camp construction (increase guard posts, camp organization power structure) 4. Solve threats near the camp (cult > zombies) 5. Astronaut landing It is not realistic to open multiple lines simultaneously. 1/4, should be the short-term main line. 2 may make a leap after the occurrence of 5 2/3 is mostly interspersed with 1/4. Recommendations 1. Reasonable camp personnel composition based on Texas population data. However, the apocalypse has been around for some time, so most survivors should be good at learning, have a certain amount of courage and exploration spirit, have better economic conditions, and at the same time, have special skills. According to the book, if a virus breaks out at night, the survivors should have a better living environment, the room safety should be guaranteed, and they should not have too many bad habits, and they should not hang out at night, do nightclubs, or open banks (the protagonist nb point is reasonable) In summary, the proportion of Asians and traditional red necks will be higher 2. Power structure issues Gavin currently has a tendency to be deified, and the Holy Son in the previous chapter may have revealed some of the author's tendencies, that is, the integration of politics and religion. However, there is a problem that is difficult to bypass. Even if Gavin becomes a god, he cannot avoid being bitten and getting infected. Gods who are weak lose their reverence. So I prefer to start building a formal organization when there are about 50 people in the camp (to ensure that Gavin's leadership takes into account both efficiency and democracy. "America's national conditions are here, but in fact, they are not opposed to dictatorship, if it can bring a good life.") Gavin must control the distribution of personnel and materials, as well as the command of the field, the loyalty of the interior, and the love of the logistics. Leader (1 person) │ ┌─ ┼ ──┐ │ │                                                                                                                                                                                                         been not been not been 2 teams 1 team (10 people/team) (5 people/team) (10 people/team) It will be detailed later. Gavin should have direct command authority over each team. The so-called captain is the supervisor of the execution of Gavin's orders And a slogan must be proposed, similar to the goal of the camp, except for survival (at present, it is less difficult to simply survive, so it is difficult to promote the plot reasonably). For example, "rebuilding the home", "freeing the next generation from threats", "finding the truth and eliminating the source" 3. The author lacks certain professional knowledge This is not a derogatory sense. In fact, there can no longer be generalists in the world, so it is unreasonable to ask an author to do so ① Gavin's manor is very, very solid according to the description. The current sub-base development is not necessary. It is impossible for the mentioned tens of thousands of zombies to surround and collapse the house and cause structural damage to the house. Gavin Manor is a low-rise building with multiple levels of basements dug and underground water extracted. Unless Gavin himself does not care about the construction of the manor, the foundation of the manor will be very strong. It is not difficult to build a dozen floors according to national standards. Secondly, (one hundred thousand zombies, whichever is more) 100000*80/1000=8000 tons, Gavin Manor (how big is the residential area) has not been explicitly mentioned yet. Take a look at the known wealthy manors, which are at least 3,000 square meters+. Even if all the zombies climb to the top of the building, they will only bear less than three tons per square meter. Moreover, based on the current settings in the book, the weight of the zombies will decrease, and they must be stacked to get to the top of the building. That would be even more impossible. Gavin's glass is all multi-layer laminated bullet-proof glass. From the conversation, it seems to be the premium version of Promax, which should be at least 15 layers. Gavin cares about safety very much and is willing to spend money. The glass is impossible to break (top-level 1.8T per square meter). 🐉🐉🐉 ② Strengthen zombies The current focus on new types of zombies is gone forever, which is true and the most direct, but not dangerous enough. Go to the National Guard to buy some heavy-duty riot control vehicles and clear the customs directly 1. A large number of zombies gathering for a long time will cause the spore concentration in a single area to be extremely high and airborne transmission will occur. So, it's basically difficult to live in a big city. One hundred thousand zombies besieged Gavin, and Gavin wanted G to give him more reasonable motivation to open a new base. For example, Gavin got in touch with other camps, and then that camp was besieged. He thought he was safe, but in the end he was directly infected by the partition wall 2. The fungal secretions are acidic and will accelerate the aging of the fence. Don't be too exaggerated, it just increases the zombie's offensive ability. That's about it. I hope the author can make little progress in his writing, and the novel will get better as he writes

Killing the United States online, what day will not be the end? Free America, gunfights every day!

The zombies are just like in the book, with a disease rate of 95%, 100 meters in 8 seconds, excellent hearing, not tired, and can be chased along the route. And you live on the second floor, with 10 people in a class and a dormitory, and the camp is far away from cities and villages. I find it difficult: 1. Maybe you were still asleep when it broke out? 2. The dormitory is so dark that you don't know or can't react to your roommate's disease, or you are not sure whether it is a disease? 3. How to escape from a narrow dormitory? 4. How to ensure that you are the first to escape from the dormitory? Because the later the night, the more people there are in the corridor, and they will be attacked from both sides. 5. How to escape from the camp while being chased by a large number of zombies that can reach 100 meters and 8 seconds? Surrounded by walls and iron mesh, it is impossible to climb over the walls. There are also zombies on duty guarding the gate of the camp, and the door is also closed. 6. How to open the warehouse and get weapons? The warehouse door is locked. The zombie who took the key has gone somewhere. There are still a lot of zombies in the camp.

Brother, you said that the car started in one or two seconds, and you wrote thousands of words in those two seconds. Do you think it is reasonable? ? ? ?

This book is very well written, but the biggest problem so far is water, too watery! It's only been 24 hours since they were all released! Two hundred thousand words were written in one day and one night!

Is there any similar book? 😒 Damn, this word count is not satisfying at all. There are really too few pure zombie apocalypse books. I still have one on my bookshelf, but the Chinese version of Morde Gun is never enough...

Just write gag dialogue occasionally. Too much meaningless dialogue will slow down the development of the plot. There are more than two hundred chapters. Can you tell me how much time has passed in your book? And are you planning on asking us to remember everyone in the camp? Just write down a few main characters, there is no need to arrange each one clearly.

The social distance in the new generation camp in 2025 is still very far, and everyone has independent rooms and only shares a living room. According to the management regulations of the base, except for the guard on guard who holds a pistol, other soldiers have no access to weapons when not on duty. At the same time, guns and ammunition are stored separately, and use requires application. Therefore, if zombies really break out inside, there will be no counterattack except for the guard.

Folks, this is Old Bert Broadcasting. Until the end of time, this is the only way we can understand each other. Yesterday's broadcast seemed very successful, many new people came to our camp, thank God, it felt good to meet new live people! Unfortunately, some unpleasant things happened. The fxck cult actually used our broadcast to intercept survivors near our camp! It seems that not even the damn apocalypse can kill these humanoid cockroaches! But they have survived for a long time, because our idol, the pride of Texas, little Gavin has already gone to implement the pest control plan. I believe that this situation will end soon yesterday. Also, there is some bad news today. Our friends in heaven may be in trouble. Not long ago we were discussing new zombies and mushrooms, but suddenly our discussion was cancelled. To be honest, this classic scene in the movie is really uncomfortable when it happens in front of your eyes. I'm worried about them, after all they are the last scientists we can find. God bless, please keep the fire of civilization, and mankind should not perish.

In the later stages, if there is a migration wave of zombies, it will be impossible to stay in Texas. If you want to hide, you will have to go to places where the zombie wave cannot reach, such as the islands near the Gulf of Mexico. If there are more people who need to be transferred, you can get a few heavy-duty helicopters from the military base or open a land route to the port to get a ship, but this requires flying. Talents such as pilots or crew members require more people to control the ship. They are not suitable for the protagonist's team. They are more suitable for interacting with an external alliance force, such as a small ship group based on an island. Because the island lacks supplies, it is very suitable to provide help and shelter to the protagonist as a material trader. Once again, we can only choose to live temporarily in a remote area like Alaska, which is vast and sparsely populated. In addition, under the setting of this book, the survival probability of seafarers is actually very high, because large ships work in three shifts. When not working, nearly two-thirds of the crew rest in independent cabins, with two people living in one cabin. As long as the infection does not happen to happen during a shift change or similar centralized fire drill, nearly half of the crew can theoretically avoid being suddenly attacked. The compartments and complex environment of the ship can also easily trap infected people.

The writing is really good. It can be said to be the best in the apocalyptic genre in the past few years. All aspects are very reasonable. The background and personality of the characters laid out by the author are also very good. The only drawback is that there is still a little less writing. If I wait until it reaches 300 chapters or about a million words, it will definitely explode.

The overall plot is good, and it can be seen that the author has a general direction. Personnel Arrangement At present, the protagonist group has gathered the basic personnel, and the order of appearance has also been arranged, which logically ensures the smooth development and stability of the camp. (The best friend Lao Mai, a young policeman with a sense of justice, and a veteran of PTSD form the core, and a little girl serves as a supplement to the plot) BackgroundSetting The causes and characteristics of zombies are a bit like a game, but the setting of that game is not very complete. As an apocalyptic novel, the subsequent development of the camp, with the emergence of newborns and the death of the old man, the protagonist will inevitably explore the causes of the apocalypse. The logic setting at that time is particularly critical. Zombie Category In recent chapters, some enhancements have been made to zombies, such as blood seekers and aggregates, as well as the screamers and residents that appeared shortly after the beginning. Especially, zombies have become a new type of creature, with cooperation and the instinct to seek advantages and avoid disadvantages, which is very creative, and provides room for expansion of subsequent plots (for example, a large migration that may be caused by weather) 👏 Above, the author wrote well. 🐉 Refuting some opinions Some people say that the characters have too many dialogues and too much trash talk. I don't agree with this. The dialogue between the characters enriches the character's image. Trash talk is not just hydrology, but reflects the apocalyptic psychological states and pre-apocalyptic identities of different characters. It makes sense. You can't ask a veteran with PTSD to speak crisply, obey orders completely, and live in harmony with others. On the contrary, conflicts between each other are inevitable, and the camp only brings these people together in the apocalypse. What can really build them into a doomsday survival team is the protagonist's personal charm, which will be further strengthened when dealing with conflicts between Eugene and others (Eugene only serves Gavin, and other than that he only cares about his cousin) Some people say that the protagonist's physical fitness is unreasonable First of all, the author's setting of the protagonist's height and weight refers to the world's legendary quarterback, and the protagonist is the Promax version. There is no doubt about this Secondly, sports performance is not just about how big the muscles are, but also depends on the nerve recruitment ability, body coordination, and the ability to train the up, down, and front branches. As a time traveler, Gavin has stronger physical fitness and accurate marksmanship. This is just a necessary trick made by the author. You can't expect a person who has no strength, who makes money through time traveler's foresight, and builds a farm and a villa to get the leadership of the camp. Such a person cannot be the protagonist. You talk about tactics and scheming. Only with the guarantee of force can there be room for display. Otherwise, in the end of the world, a small camp of more than ten people will be easily wiped out physically. And without outstanding personal abilities, how did Gavin quickly establish his leadership authority. If you offer some opinions, the author will listen to them for the time being and combine them with reality without affecting your own writing. 1. The rhythm is moderate, but the overall multi-scene grasp is not very good. "Two flowers bloom, one on each side" is a very important writing technique. At present, 90% of the plot revolves around the protagonist. Of course, there is nothing wrong with it. After all, it is just a small camp now. But later on, as things in the camp increase, it is unrealistic for the protagonist to participate in everything, and the key plot must be promoted/participated by Gavin, which will make the pace slow and the plot lengthy. 2. As for the plot arrangement of each character, I guess the author wants to write a compromise group portrait with Gavin as the protagonist but without portraying the supporting characters. But for now, the author's control is not very good. 🐉 Old Feng's wife, as a member of the apocalypse, she should and must start learning English (the main language of the camp). At the same time, she has to start practicing marksmanship even if she has a baby. . . Not only Lao Feng's wife, but also other support staff. Their scenes are too few, and there is no description for several chapters. This is unreasonable. It doesn't need to be too much. For supporting characters, it is best to have a classic saying that reflects personal characteristics. It is enough to appear once every four or five chapters, rather than being completely invisible (like Sullivan, it feels like he is invisible. I guess the author arranged a sacrificial supporting character later, but even if he waits for him to lose weight, but is completely invisible, when he appears later, there will be some abruptness, including behavior, because the interval between descriptions is too long) 😳😳😳 Finally, the astronauts on the space station Although the author mentioned that they are planning how to land, they have the same problem, and it is unreasonable to disappear completely Guess: The astronauts will land successfully, but many people will die, and 2 may survive to provide intellectual and technical support to the camp, while avoiding being too busy. But in this case, for those who will appear later, it is necessary to gradually portray the image at this time to pave the way for the reaction of the supporting characters when the protagonist rescues them later. 🌹 Written at the end, the author writes carefully and the content is of high quality. However, the author has insufficient grasp of multiple scenes, multiple characters, and multiple lines. I hope the author can improve his ability in this area in the future. After all, this is the only apocalyptic novel that I can read at the moment. It is neither a noob nor a pure novel. One of my favorite highlights is that the protagonist considers himself and the camp, but does not hesitate to provide help without hindering the above two points. The atmosphere of the camp is also biased towards unity and friendship. This is rare in apocalyptic literature. I'm not talking about the protagonist, the Virgin Mother, but that in a situation of material abundance or even extreme excess, people only need to unite to resist zombies and protect their own lives. There is no irreconcilable conflict. In many apocalyptic novels, the protagonist keeps killing people even though the population is already very small. Obviously you can do labor camps, exile, etc. They don't care about precious labor at all, and they don't want to rebuild human civilization. The author just listens to it and sees it. It is still up to you to decide how to write in the future. I am just providing some suggestions and do not affect your writing outline.

There is not even a team that has won three consecutive championships in the Super Bowl... What is the concept of five consecutive championships? Are Asian MVPs so many times? Purely crazy...

I've read Chapter 20. Is there still this kind of long dialogue afterward? I can't stand it anymore.