Doomsday America

The characters are very fleshed out and the writing is excellent. By the way, I would like to give you a suggestion, don't add evolutionary settings to zombies. Now this zombie is already a super model. It takes only a few seconds to be infected, and the speed is comparable to Bolt. If it evolves again, you can't imagine how other people can survive.

Beautiful, love watching. It's been a long time since I've seen this kind of apocalyptic novel with no system, no supernatural powers, and no Virgin! But how should I put it, this kind of doomsday... No, it should be, all doomsday novels have a big drawback. The early confrontation between people and zombies, the kind of survival under the threat of zombies, is always the most exciting and interesting part. However, after establishing a base (fixed) instead of a camp (unfixed), the zombies are greatly weakened, and the confrontation between people becomes the main line. At this time, it will be very boring. Killing one after another, there will always be new enemies... Just like the back of The Walking Dead. Of course this does not mean that there will be no confrontation between people in the early stage, but zombies will always be number one in the early stage. I hope this book can write something different! Get out of the base pit of a doomsday novel! Of course I personally feel there is little hope 🙂🙂🙂

It is really rare to find such a high-quality apocalyptic novel. It is no exaggeration to say that this is one of the top five apocalyptic zombie novels in the past few years. The protagonist has no system, no superpowers, and no mutations. He only has some world-class physical fitness when traveling through time. The most important thing is to rely on his mind. I have not seen this tradition in a long time, relying solely on plot and character arcs to support the direction of the entire novel. Another point is that the protagonist has a lovable personality, neither a virgin nor ruthless and selfish, and has a bit of humanity and kindness in his determination. It's good So far, all the characters described by the author have their own characteristics, the character arcs are full, and the plot rhythm is moving steadily in all directions. There are no particularly obvious poisonous points. It is pretty good up to more than 100 chapters. The only thing that some people may not accept is that the dialogue between the characters is very abundant and watery, with obvious characteristics of American dramas. I guess if you like watching American dramas, you can accept it. As long as you don't jump in the back, at least it's a quality base! The only bad thing is that I read this book too early and it's still a seedling🌱It's so annoying (#`n´)

It's the latest chapter (220), please code it. The rhythm is very steady, the details are full of realism, the writing is smooth and not stiff, the characters are distinct, and the description of North American society and people is not obviously inconsistent. It can be seen that the author has indeed thought about and deduced the impact of the apocalypse on people, the various social conditions under the impact of the apocalypse, and the survival and development paths of survivors after the apocalypse, etc., And has also tried hard to describe them in the article. This is the best part. Because this is the most fundamental feature of the doomsday theme - that is, the devastating disaster reshuffles the social order and the reconstruction of a new order adapted to the doomsday. From this perspective, this book is actually a bit like "Lingao Qiming". A reader's interest in apocalyptic themes will most likely include an appreciation of the picture of "the collapse of the existing order and everyone surviving according to their own abilities." On the other hand, most apocalyptic novels mostly talk about evolution, which is actually not interesting. If it develops, it will become a shell-changing and upgrade novel. So the restraint on "evolution" in this book is very good and should be maintained. People don't want to evolve. Even if they open more cheats, the protagonist's aura is overflowing with luck, etc., They don't want to evolve abilities. Even zombies don't have to evolve too much. The current style of group consciousness division of labor is actually almost enough. What's not enough can be filled with conflicts and struggles between humans. The most dangerous thing is always the human being, and the most important thing to write about is always the human being, not the evolved monster - whether the monster is evolved from a zombie or the protagonist. There is indeed too much dialogue, which is not unacceptable as a style, but after more than 1.2 Million words, it still seems repetitive with fk and fk. However, if you change the writing style rashly, reduce the interaction of details, and zoom out the camera, there will be a danger. "What should come has not come, and what should not go has gone" will be embarrassing. Of course, as its power grows, Assassin's Creed will probably slowly transition to map coloring sooner or later. It can be seen that as the number of people in the camp increases, the protagonist's perspective has changed somewhat from the original comprehensive perspective. It is currently in a period of change. The author chose to maintain the main line development of the protagonist's participation and the detail granularity of the new direction of the camp, and reduced the ink on the daily tasks and existing character templates that have been described. The most worrying thing is the decrease in readers caused by the slow pace, which in turn may affect the author's creative enthusiasm and mentality. 20 Hours after the last chapter was updated, 200 people were still able to read it, which shows that this book is still relatively niche. With this kind of subject matter and development potential, if the author can maintain his status, there is still a lot of content that can be written, and he can really reshape the entire world. It would be a pity if you were rejected because your results were not as good as expected. Come on, author.

There is a problem. They don't evolve and have no superpowers. How do zombies and beasts defeat modern armies?

It fits the Ami ecology that Lao A and Lao Zhen say. There is a cult next door, college students have to find godfathers to pay their student loans, ordinary people cannot afford antibiotics and veterinary drugs, farmers have private soldiers who have children (cowboy training), the protagonist relies on foresight and natural power to become a star, and if the family has money and does not take back loans, he can escape execution and kill other farmers wantonly; the only difference is that the white aunt does not cook white food It is a pity that the chat ratio is too high, so there is not much desire to watch.

It was so overwhelming right from the beginning. Several supporting characters could scold each other for several pages.

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Overall it's great, but there are still a lot of minor flaws, especially at the end. Did the author get too excited? What's there to gain from two male prisoners? Do you think the camp environment is great? She still got wet, and so did the girl with the big balls. The original writing made people think she was aggrieved by being forced, but it turned out that she took the initiative to get into bed with that wretched man when they first met. The style of the painting was a bit disconnected, and it made people feel that they were the same as the two men. It also had a negative impact on the overall atmosphere of the camp. It felt like a big family was living a good life, but one day suddenly hired three criminals (not even explaining their crimes) to be servants. Let's see how it is dealt with.

The content of the book and the character's IQ are online throughout, and each character is distinct. The author's quality is very good, and the rhythm is very comfortable. Many people say it is not good, but it is actually because the plot advances slowly, but there is no unnecessary plot in the article, the rhythm is well controlled, and it is very comfortable to read. Strong recommendation