An Immortal Maiden? That's Just My Avatar!

Why do I feel like I am a female cultivator? The realm of cultivation is all abbreviated. It seems empty, how to break through, no insights, experiences, or changes. I have established the foundation without knowing it. Emphasis on narrative, interpersonal relationships, emotions, and realm cultivation methods are all foils. Originally, wouldn't it be a great point to achieve a breakthrough in cultivating immortals? It feels weird to write it like this 😅

Young man, I see that your thinking is clear and your writing is concise. You are a unique book-writing wizard! I leave my dream of becoming a god in one book to you.

The beginning is quite interesting. I thought the author would describe Chen Rui as a selfish villain. I didn't expect that. Just this one twist is much better than the beginning of a bunch of third-rate novels.

Is there any male author who can write about this kind of subject matter? The subject matter is really good, but I can't see any scheming and thinking in this book written by a female author. It's too relaxed. It's like playing a game and you can guess what will be written later.

Take care of your husband, stop being a eunuch, men must rise up!

Are they Japanese? I want to see Japanese ones.

To be honest, it is difficult for female authors to scratch the itch of male readers. Many things that seem to be refreshing are actually poisonous. For example, I just saw the protagonist being despised by a group of people in class. My sister came to cheer up and said that she would give everything to the protagonist. The protagonist looked at the envious eyes of others and felt secretly happy... Not sisters.

Why do I feel like this book smells like female porn? Most of them are daily routines, which are getting more and more ugly. Is this about chapter 108?

The subject matter is very good, I like it very much, but the writing style is that of a female channel. It is not focused on falling in love, which is good, but the wordiness in the story is limited in every aspect, and it is not as domineering and smooth as the male channel Xiu Xian. Thinking too much makes the male lead's performance too immature, which makes me feel uncomfortable watching it.

The new book is a light-hearted novel about immortals and heroes. I don't have much knowledge and I can't write serious things. If you come to read my book, it's mainly for fun! If you have any suggestions, you can speak actively. I will reply after seeing them.