I Build the Jade Capital with the Netherworld

It's not that it doesn't look good, it's just a bit messy. The protagonist ran around and tried various ways, such as Netherworld, Taiyin, Sword, Fire, Ranzhen, etc. However, Netherworld, as the fundamental one, has not been significantly improved. What effect will the subsequent avenues have on the protagonist? Is it used to improve one's realm for fighting, or is it useful when reenacting the Netherworld later? Is the writing too cryptic and the layout too deep? Or is the author just thinking about it in his mind and we need to figure it out ourselves? When the author wrote the plot of the protagonist pretending to be a flower and willow demon cultivator and spreading infectious diseases everywhere, did he remember the title of this book?

The look and feel is very poor. At the beginning, the protagonist seizes opportunities and causes the old Taoist priest's family to be destroyed. Later, the protagonist feeds the old Taoist priest's soul to a human skin book and scatters his soul. The problem lies here. Except for the three words "Human Skin Book", there is no other side or explicit statement that the old Taoist priest is a bad person. On the contrary, the actions of the protagonist are more like bad. The beginning is more visually unfolded through the eyes of the little Taoist boy (that is, the youngest disciple of the old Taoist priest). In the little Taoist boy, except for the master who is a little crazy, the master, the senior brother and the third brother are all good, and all three of them were killed by the protagonist. Human skin books are not just made by oneself, they can also be obtained by accident. The author writes as if he came by accident, and the beginning is a bit poisonous. The author explained that this poisonous spot was created by an old Taoist priest with human life in more than ten chapters 😅 However, it is stated in the first chapter after the end of the opening plot that it cannot be so poisonous. Later we arrived at the Mountain God... Frog Fun! Author, how did you set up and describe the protagonist... He is simply a scoundrel and makes people have a very bad impression of the protagonist.

It's a very subtle feeling. Monsters don't look like monsters, and ghosts don't have that scary feeling. They are closer to people. People in cultivating immortals share half of their heads. The protagonist doesn't know what to do. I really don't know how to praise him. If I really have to describe it, I would say it is tasteless, tasteless to eat, and a pity to throw away. There are many books to read

I feel like most current authors like overly emotional writing. Doesn't anyone think that being too emotional is a sign of immaturity? There are a lot of inner narrations, all kinds of complaints, and all kinds of inexplicable emotions in the book. Readers with a certain level of experience probably won't like this way of writing.

The more I write, the harder it becomes to read. I don't know if you feel this way

It was quite creative at first, although it had some intellectual and spiritual effects, but when I arrived in the spiritual world, a barbarian and a golden man suddenly came to me. You could also write a monster. This was the thing before time travel, and it is still the same thing after time travel. Isn't that time traveling in vain? I can't tell whether it's time traveling or not. It just happened to be on the shelves.

From the moment he disguised himself to send food in the room, he was jumping around with a hammer and a stick. What on earth are you going to do? It makes me tired to watch.

It's a good idea at the beginning, but it's a mess later on.

There are too many things that have been repaired in a mess, and they are mixed but not refined.

Why not develop the world in the book? ? ?