I Build the Jade Capital with the Netherworld

It's not that it looks bad, it's just a bit messy. The protagonist travels around, cultivating various Great Daos such as Netherworld, Yin, Sword, Fire, and Dyeing Truth. However, the fundamental Netherworld Dao doesn't seem to offer much improvement. What use are the subsequent Great Daos for the protagonist?

The viewing experience was terrible. At the beginning, the protagonist steals someone's opportunity and causes the old Taoist priest's family to be destroyed. Afterwards, the protagonist even feeds the old Taoist priest's soul to the "human skin book," causing his soul to dissipate.

It's a very subtle feeling. The monsters don't feel like monsters, and the ghosts don't have that terrifying quality; they're more like humans. The cultivators share half a head, and the protagonist's purpose is unclear. It's really hard to know how to praise it. If I had to describe it, my evaluation would be: a bit of a letdown—tasteless, but not worth discarding. Worth reading if you're looking for something to read.

It seems like authors these days love overly emotional writing. Doesn't anyone think that being overly emotional is a sign of immaturity? The book is full of internal monologues, various complaints, and all sorts of inexplicable emotions. Readers with some life experience probably wouldn't like this kind of writing.

It's getting harder and harder to read as I write. I wonder if any of you feel the same way.

It was actually quite creative, though a bit silly and cheesy. But then, in the spirit world, suddenly there were barbarians and golden figures! You could have written a demon story, but it's the same thing before and after the transmigration—what's the point of the transmigration? This makes it hard to tell if I've even transmigrated at all. It's just barely going to be released yet!

From the moment they disguised themselves and went to the room, it's been jumping around aimlessly, all over the place. What are they even trying to do? It's exhausting to watch.

The idea started off well, but the rest was a mess.

There are too many messy and disorganized repairs; they're a hodgepodge rather than a refined product.

Why not develop the world depicted in the book properly?