The Myriad-Eon Embryonic Transformation Scripture

It actually looks okay, with no big flaws, but the pace is a bit slow. Looking through the opinions in the comment area, some said that there was too much emphasis on the supporting characters, and the other said that cheats had no sense of existence. These two points are actually the same problem, that is, it is not cool enough. In fact, it makes sense. The author's writing style is not very attractive. If it is not exciting enough, it will not be attractive enough to readers. If you can read it, it's not bad. It can be seen that the author really wants to write a good story. But this is an online text, and if you follow it up, you can only read a few thousand words a day. The story is still slow, so it is normal for readers to have opinions. The personal rating is about 77 points. The advantage is that there are not many disadvantages. The disadvantage is that the story is too slow.

When Ma Liu first met, Lu Dabao made it clear that he was a troublemaker. If he expected to help him, would he also ask for help if anything happened? Pure white-eyed wolf, there is no need to invest, just stay away. I helped him so much, but in the end I wanted to kill the protagonist, but in the end he was killed by the protagonist. I don't know what the protagonist was trying to do.

There is a man named Lu Dabao in the book, and it is suspected that the author's father is also named Lu Dabao.

In fact, what I want to see more is reincarnation. The first part is too long. Moreover, the way you write about the fox clan is too strange. It is no different from the human clan. Moreover, you transformed directly not long after you were born. Then you are a monster, so you are just trying to trick people. If you are so eager to become a human, why are you writing about a demon? To be honest, I feel that writing about a group of little foxes without transforming is more beautiful and novel. You are too strong in the smell of sheep-headed dog meat.

If the Heavenly Emperor of the Upper Realm mentioned in your introduction is the Jade Emperor, the Jade Emperor has experienced a total of 1,750 kalpas, each lasting 129,600 years, and the total cultivation time is about 226.8 Million years.

Author, I would like to ask, is Lu Dabao the protagonist's father? Are you so concerned about him? The protagonist is worried about reincarnation. That is to say, the protagonist will be reincarnated as Lu Dabao's grandson in the future. Should he start fulfilling his filial piety now? I had feelings after reading Chapter 13.

From the introduction, reincarnation is the key point, but until now, I have been describing the flying camp and the dog dog in detail, and I feel like I can't distinguish the priorities.

Revealing the biggest secret of his own reincarnation to a fish that must be extraordinary, I don't think there's anything interesting about it. The biggest attraction is the reincarnation into a different species. However, the reincarnation into a fox gave me a very bad impression! What everyone wants to see is that there are too many rules for being a human being, but alien species can grow wildly. As a result, this reincarnation is not even in the shape of a fox, and it is also a slave to others. It is no different from the previous life. It is just that it has a pair of ears and practices fox skills. It's even better to write about being reincarnated and being caught as a demon pet, so at least the look and feel will be novel.

It's too toxic. The author's father's name is Lu Dabao. He protects her from the beginning to Chapter 12. The characters are poorly created. Is the protagonist some kind of Madonna?

Chapter 12: Dissuade! Extremely poisonous, the Holy Mother has given her wisdom. A brain C has nothing to do with the protagonist Mao. The protagonist treats him like his father and does everything for him! Shacha