I Prove the Dao and Attain Longevity Through Divine Powers

Having read up to chapter 15, what's with the loot distribution? After several hard-fought chapters, finally reaching the climax, and now the loot is just going to be whoever grabs it? The protagonist clearly saved his younger brother's life; in fact, if his brother hadn't died, the entire family would have suffered.

I just have to get this off my chest. In Chapter 22, the character is only one step away from the sixth level of Qi Refining, and has even cultivated body tempering, yet his physical strength is only slightly over 300 jin. In reality, there's no such thing as extraordinary strength; most people have much more than 300 jin. This one chapter is just so incredibly low-level.

One manor has 9 supernatural powers, cultivating barren land. First, find a lowly errand boy or something similar and contact all 20+ manors in the family, copying the easy ones first and the difficult ones later, at least 50 supernatural powers. After winning a county, find a reason like everyone's blessing to search the entire county, at least 200 supernatural powers.

This protagonist is, to put it simply, a 50/50 god of war. No matter who he fights, it's always a 50/50 battle, with everyone giving their all. The story always starts by praising his amazing magical skills, his dual cultivation of magic and body, and his numerous cheat codes. He sets traps and ambushes beforehand, then any random monster or rogue cultivator comes along and they all struggle, making it a painful watch. All those cheat codes seem to go to waste.

This guy, Xie, has been skipping through so many chapters, he just won't die and keeps causing trouble for the protagonist. The protagonist just smiles slightly when he sees him, and then continues to be targeted. Author, do you really think the protagonist is cool like this? It's infuriating!

In summary, the biggest problem with this book is that the protagonist's overly powerful abilities lead to an overabundance of supernatural powers. It seems like the protagonist is constantly learning new ones. Moreover, each power is designed to be incredibly complex, often with three or four effects—can you believe it?

It would be better if this family were wiped out. Zhong Shan made a mistake, and the protagonist tried to make amends, but in the end, not only was he not punished, but he also received a huge reward. What kind of message is the author trying to convey? Are you a Japanese spy here to spread ideology?

Before its release, the quality was top-notch, but after release, the quality plummeted, and idiotic plots became frequent. I was initially drawn in by the fight scenes before release—prepared battles unfolded seamlessly, without a single word exchanged; after killing someone, you carefully finished them off and looted their supplies.

Author, you've added too much preaching and personal bias; it's even affecting the opening plot and the main character's personality. Furthermore, stop designing all these rogue villains as treasure chests just to write action scenes. Writing action scenes is already a thankless task. Letting the protagonist kill them instantly is the right way. It's exciting, doesn't require much brainpower, and everyone likes to watch it.

I feel there's too much preaching, and too many real-life examples that are out of place in the story. You've transferred your real-life story to the realm of cultivation, so stop with the preaching and make it more fun, right? Too much depth doesn't fit into a relaxing setting. Just be a cultivator, that's all.