I Prove the Dao and Attain Longevity Through Divine Powers

When I read Chapter 15, what the hell is the distribution of the spoils? I worked hard for several chapters and finally reached the climax. Who gets the spoils? It was obviously the protagonist who saved the life of his younger brother. If the protagonist's younger brother hadn't died, the family would have suffered disaster. Moreover, this younger brother secretly prevented the protagonist from finding opportunities and being plotted. How could the spoils be distributed like this after the war? To save a man's life, the protagonist basically killed the fire fox and the man, but after the war, the fire fox and half of the things were returned to his brother. Is this a licking-dog story? The kind where men lick men

I really hate it. In Chapter 22, the fifth level of Qi refining is only one step away from the sixth level of Qi refining. I also practiced physical training, but my physical strength is only more than 300 kilograms. In reality, there is no extraordinary strength. People with strong strength are more than 300 kilograms. This picture is really too low.

A villa with 9 magical powers and a field for growing hair. First, find a hard job like running errands. Contact all the 20 or so villas in the family. Copy the ones that are easy to copy first and the ones that are difficult to copy at the back. At least 50 magical powers. After a subsequent county wins, find a reason such as everyone's blessing, and search the entire county for at least 200 magical powers. Go to several countries in the sect and look for at least 10,000 magical powers. It's all bugs and the author said he has a framework in mind...

I can only say that this protagonist is a 50-50 God of War. No matter who he fights, he will try his best to win a 50-50 battle. He will always brag about how good the protagonist's spells are. He has both legal and physical skills, and a lot of plug-ins. He arranges traps in advance for sneak attacks, and then random monsters and casual cultivators will try their best to fight. It's very difficult to watch. It hurts to watch. So many mistakes have been made to the dog.

How many chapters has a Qiu Xie skipped, and he still couldn't die and still made trouble for the protagonist? The protagonist just smiled slightly when he saw him, and then continued to be targeted by him. Author, don't you think the protagonist is handsome like this? It's poisonous to people.

After summarizing, the biggest problem with this book is that the golden finger is too wide, which leads to the proliferation of magical powers. It seems like the protagonist is always learning new magical powers. Moreover, each magical power is very complex in design, and usually has three or four effects. You can believe it. To be honest, the author's writing skills are not up to the comprehensive effect of using these magical powers to fit the plot without appearing cluttered. As I write, I find that old magical powers are often left in the warehouse to gather dust without being used much, and then new magical powers come along, and the effect of one magical power is more exaggerated than the other. To put it bluntly, it is a harvest article. It is nothing more than constantly harvesting new magical powers. Back then, I read an article about being able to harvest unlimited opportunities through luck and system guidance. Opportunities of different colors can be harvested. This article reads like that. To put it bluntly, it is a bit like a combination of upgrade flow and treasure hunt flow. It focuses on a feeling of upgrading and a feeling of treasure hunting and harvesting, and this book focuses on the feeling of replicating magical powers and harvesting. If you want to say that the writing is not good, that is not the case. The plot is really good. But if you think about how well written it is, this plug-in is really too big and makes the protagonist seem useless. I can't remember the protagonist at all, because the protagonist has no special qualities and I can't remember it at all.

It would be better for this family to be wiped out. Zhongshan made a mistake and the protagonist made up for it. In the end, there was no punishment, not to mention the reward was so high. What thoughts is the author expressing? Are you an undercover agent of the little devil to engage in ideological propaganda?

The quality was very good before it was released. After it was released, the quality dropped all the way, and then the wits appeared frequently. I was attracted by the fighting scenes before it was released. The battles were prepared one after another, without saying a word. After killing the person, be careful to touch the last touch and lick the bag. I like this style very much. There is no special situation where I speak when I am desperate. Whenever I speak, I am beaten to death. But the fighting after it was released was very mindless. Not only was the fighting very satisfying, but there were also a bunch of idiots standing there who were shocked, and there was also a pile of water. The author did not have time to polish the article in order to update it, so he replaced it with someone else. I hope the author will write the next book.

Author, you have too many personal sermons, which even affect the opening plot and the protagonist's character. And don't design all these casual villains into treasure chests for the sake of writing fight scenes. Writing fight scenes is already thankless. Directly letting the protagonist kill him instantly is the right way. It is refreshing and effortless, and everyone likes to watch it.

I feel that there are a lot of sermons, and there are also many real-life chestnuts in dramas. Your real-life story has been transferred. If you are cultivating immortality, don't preach so much and have more fun, right? If it is too profound and is not suitable for cultivating immortality in leisure, just cultivate it.