The Immortal Daoist Master Had No Ambition to Compete for Supremacy

Is it okay to become a Jiahao without learning swordsmanship? Also, your writing style is not as good as what you came in for. It's just a novice writing style, but you still want to create a plot where you can see your heart clearly and rely on epiphany to survive a desperate situation in the early stage. It's not as good as an old-fashioned plot where you have experience in sending monsters all the time.

Exploding the sense of existence "Pleiades Star Official's Monster Hunt"

The first 5 chapters must be rewritten. I guess the first few chapters have dissuaded many people. If it weren't for being really boring, I would never read the next few chapters after reading them normally. In fact, the plot of After Becoming a God is pretty good, but I guess many readers abandoned the book without even reading it. A good beginning, and the three golden chapters are so important. In addition, there are fewer kinds of enlightenment, practice, self-enlightenment and self-sublimation. First of all, readers may not agree with the principles of self-enlightenment. Even if they agree, except for the plot content, the others will still make people feel weak.