My Cultivation Has Gone Wrong

To be honest, I am also an old bookworm. After reading novels for so many years, I rarely take the initiative to comment on a novel. I had to subscribe to a few to post a comment today. Originally, I just saw this book today. Until the part of Macaque Mountain, I felt that this was another book that attracted me. Until I saw the character Qiqin, it was mentioned in the previous chapter that this is a character famous in the whole country. At that time, I thought this might be a villain, but I did not expect to be such a low-level villain. It is related to the justice of the human race, and the protagonist can kill her. At least this point is written as a fix for this part of the plot. But she eats hearts, especially those of her friend's sister. The author said that he admires her not as a person but for her talent. So if you think about it from a general perspective, let's not talk about the righteousness of family and country. Although you have mentioned in a few sentences before that family and country are righteous and family always comes first. So, do your friends and you, your friend's sister and the protagonist count as a small family? A friend's sister was killed by an enemy, and the protagonist still has to admire the enemy who killed her? In this case, there is only one general mentality: I don't care if you are a good or bad person, but if you kill my friend, then you are worse than a pig or a dog. How can you appreciate this attitude? To be honest, this is one of the few plots that offended me. I have read books for so many years, and I have seen a lot of disgusting plots, but the plot here is not disgusting, at least it makes me feel uncomfortable, as if I am addicted to the world built by the author but was suddenly pulled out, and this person is still you, the author. I won't say much more, I only leave you with good wishes. I hope the author can examine the common values ​​​​in the world he has built, and stop having this kind of private opinion that women with both civil and military skills are worthy of appreciation, which is too uncomfortable. So far, if the author is willing to listen, he is willing to listen. If he is not willing to listen, there is nothing he can do. I will say goodbye to this book for the time being. If I have the fate to read it again, I hope to have a wonderful presentation of the Macaque Mountain section. Goodbye!

I couldn't help but comment when I saw 72. I found that the fan value was 100, so I ordered a few pictures to comment. I know Zuo has a bit of a literary flair, but this is obviously a racial war. In the last picture, he was still eating people's hearts. In the next picture, the protagonist feels inexplicably sorry for her. Art does not respect national boundaries, but this is not a race. The author has a crooked butt.

Has the character changed after more than 30 chapters?

Chapter 63 is a bit disgusting to me. It is said that the students of the college are the most important kindling, but they let people in casually. Don't you worry that the people who come in are ogres? If it is really the last fire, students should be more important than anything else. In order to keep the fire in the safest situation, it is impossible and certainly not to have overflowing sympathy, but this overflowing sympathy makes me a little sick.

Qin's plot feels like there is less foreshadowing. If it were written like this, it would not be poisonous The revised plot: the protagonist accidentally obtains Qin's music score, falls into a dream in advance, and experiences Qin's life in the dream. Then write about Qin eating a heart in the college. The protagonist witnesses this scene. At this time, you can write about the protagonist's inner drama to express his firm stance. After the scene, because the protagonist has experienced her life in advance, although he will firmly stand to kill her, it seems more normal to write about his appreciation of her talents at this time. And when fighting, because I have experienced her life, I can resist the influence of her music like cheating, which adds to the excitement.

It's not that good. The two times I have lived in the dream world add up to nearly fifty years, but my mental IQ is just not online.

U1s1, although I have seen so much before and I have survived the parasite thing, I still want to say that no matter how talented she is, she is still a being that preys on humans. If I were a sheep, no matter how talented the wolf is, as long as she eats sheep, I will only feel fear and want to get rid of him, but I will not be interested in him. Any sympathy and appreciation, unless I am as strong as him or stronger than him, such as a wolf or a tiger, even if I am a sheep stronger than him, I will only feel fear and hatred towards him because his race feeds on my race, and he has already eaten sheep. Only if he has never eaten sheep can I have appreciation.

When I saw this today, I suddenly wanted to say something! 1: I feel very bad about the protagonist's recent character design. After so much experience, it doesn't give me the feeling of growth, which is very bad. In the past, I might not have much say because of my low cultivation level, but now I have established myself as a saint and become a heavenly being. As a human being, I shouldn't hide my clumsiness. 2: Regarding the main plot behind, this is what I think. There is only one purpose, and that must be the evergreen of the human race! ! ! Bai Zhan Dao, Fu Zi, Qi Qin, Xiao Saiwei tribe's boundary world (little uncle Luo Yayang), Hijin tribe's Abagong, Zhan tribe's Lao Yinbi, grand uncle. . . After thousands of years, as a human race, so what if you are full of intrigues and murderous people! ! ! I am going to write about my first head-to-head confrontation with Wanzu in the near future. Should I plan it? It's time! ! ! 3: Based on the heritage of the human race, I personally think it is not too much to let the protagonist fall into dreams dozens or hundreds of times. After all, the conditions for entering a dream are not difficult and only require a representative object. There is no need to write in too much detail (after this, you must look at all races from the perspective of God. How obscure it is without being too obvious depends on the author's writing skills), find the weaknesses of all races, and specifically provoke the connections between all races, win over some, and defeat some. 4: The presence of the system! At this stage, the main performance of the system is falling into a dream, followed by the bound knife. Is it possible to let the system shine? After all, the system has a lot of fancy functions. It should be good to enhance the human race's heritage and increase one's own sense of mystery and voice! 5: 1⃣ Thousands of races compete, 2⃣ Whether to face the way of heaven, 3⃣ Analyze the system to justify itself, 4⃣ The human race is evergreen, 5⃣ The finale. . . . . 3 And 4 can be interchanged. How to write it depends on what the author thinks. ps: The above only represents my personal views and is for reference only. If you have different ideas, please leave a message. I hope it can bring some help to the author and will be adopted as appropriate.

Chapter 72, Chapter 73, I was disgusted from here. The books, texts, and narratives I read today are all to my taste, but only here, the more I read, the more disgusted I am. The description in the previous article was eaten by you. What kind of bullshit talent and beauty can you appreciate the enemy who is stained with the blood of your own race, so as to avoid being whipped to death by others, and just put it down so lightly? What is described above? Can one sentence of talent whiten everything? When I saw it was past two o'clock, I suddenly felt sick. Isn't it just dead? It's light to break bones and raise ashes. Eating flesh and drinking blood is not an exaggeration. I tossed and turned on the bed. The more I thought about it, the more disgusting and uncomfortable I felt. My words were very ordinary and I couldn't fully describe the feeling in my heart. I can only say that I stayed up all night to watch it. You didn't give me a better experience. Instead, you jumped directly to the romance show at eight o'clock in the evening. Do you think I was too happy to watch it?

72,73 Poisonous Points is a good book, provided you can resist the poisonous points Chapter 72: One second you say she is green tea, the next second you fight to the death to lick her face without killing it. The protagonist in Chapter 73 said that she is the only one. She is the only one. Is she more elegant when she is an ogre eating people? When the ogres slaughtered the village in the previous chapters, they also vowed to kill 3,000 ogres. This contrast is too big, isn't it, author?