Pillow Blade

It's so damn good-looking, it's already a god in the early stages. I can't find a martial arts novel like this in the entire online literature. I would like to give the author a suggestion. If you run out of ideas, you can finish it directly and divide it into several parts. Gu Long did the same thing in the past. Instead of writing millions of words in one breath, a book of hundreds of thousands of words can maintain the quality of the book, his character, and his popularity.

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The writing is good. From one chapter to the release, there are too many fights and killings. The early stage is very attractive, but it is a bit boring in the end, just like going to work. You also want to talk about love travel, right? The world is not just about killing and planning, but also adventures, the love and sorrow of children, and the joy and hatred of wandering in the world. The author should balance it out because there are too many fights and kills, and put some breaks in between, otherwise it will be boring!

I was wrong. I mistakenly thought that Ye Gong was a mess. Who would have thought that he would write such a masterpiece?

Among the female characters in Gu Long's books, Shangguan Xiaoxian is definitely my personal favorite. In addition to her regrettable life experience, what is even more heart-warming is that she dared to fight for her destiny in the face of adversity and did not regret it even though she died. When I read this book, I hoped that Shangguan Xiaoxian would have a good ending, and the author also said that there was no heroine, so I thought of a way to get the best of both worlds. My personal opinion, 1. Given the current situation of the protagonist, since he was not an invincible stream at the beginning, struggling to survive and surrounded by enemies, I don't know how lonely it will be when the protagonist grows up to be invincible. The human body is only a hundred years old, and the status, rights, and wealth earned through hard work in the first half of life always need heirs, and the prerequisite for a good heir is that both men and women are very good and at the best age for pregnancy. 2. Before the protagonist is invincible, he has no time to find a woman and may not even have the ability to protect her, so a good heir can only find a woman with scheming, means, martial arts, and power at the right time. Even if there is no love, Shangguan Xiaoxian has the conditions 3. As time goes by, the protagonist becomes more and more powerful, and the probability that Shangguan Xiaoxian wants to kill the protagonist becomes smaller and smaller. However, Shangguan Xiaoxian's character will never give up. According to the Protagonist Law, the protagonist basically spends his time killing and has no time to cultivate his own heirs, so the task of cultivating his heirs falls on the woman. Therefore, the protagonist can give her a child by mistake at the right time and lay the groundwork. 4. Since he can't beat the protagonist, as time goes by, Shangguan Xiaoxian will most likely place his hopes on his children, and then become both mother and father, trying his best to cultivate the protagonist's children, and this not-so-good heir will come. 5. There are two possible endings: 1. The happy reunion. As the children grow up, the protagonist and Shangguan Xiaoxian finally come together, help each other, grow old together, and their hegemony also has an heir. 2. It is a little regretful that the love and hatred between the two people will continue to be entangled until the end of one's life is approaching decades later. Maybe by that time, there will be very few old friends and enemies left, and all grudges can be put aside. The two finally meet and feel relieved. They swim together with arms, sleep together in life, and die in the same hole. The two people's inheritance still has an heir.

The white snow and the freezing cold wind make it difficult for people to meet each other. The kindness of food is hidden in the heart, and the sword of gold is ringed in determination. There is no defeat in the world, but death and grace are no more. Only the tripod peak and the green dragon can show Shangguan Dai. A hero is nothing more than an ant. I am lonely and lonely, and ghosts and gods avoid it. After a thousand dynasties of humiliation, you can obtain forbidden laws and reap utilitarian benefits at your fingertips. The power of Jinling rises, allies all over the world, and dragons enter the sea. Killing the temples, I am the only one who dominates, and the gods of martial arts are in the sky. {"NickName":"Yansantu","UserId":1553625} Add refinement

Laughing to death, I'm not interested in other titles

This book ranks among the top three Gu Long fans I have read, and in terms of writing style alone, it ranks first. The reason why it cannot be ranked first overall is because one of them reverses too much, which will lead to failure; the rhythm of the two is too tight and cannot be relaxed, which is not bad, mainly because it is combined with the former factor, and it becomes very bad. The other two are by Ku Kong Sanren. Ku Kong Sanren has written three Gu Long fanfics. The first one is too young and you can skip reading it. The second one is the best. The third one I am writing now is slightly inferior to the second one. I rate it as simpler and more coquettish. Of course, it may be that this book and the third volume of Ku Kong San Ren are both unfinished, so the only completed one ranks first in my heart. I have also watched The Melon Swordsman. It is neither ancient dragon nor martial arts. It takes a relaxed and cheerful way, but because of this, it has a wider audience.

The 200,000 Gu Long earned from writing articles before byd has not been spent yet, right? No new book has been released yet.

Accept them all or write them both to death. Shangguan was killed after being pregnant for ten months. Li Yaoshi died again to save Li Muchan. He died behind Li Muchan's back. Finally, on an unnamed island overseas, Li Muchan, who was left with half a hand, took the Wu family boy Wu Ming as his disciple with his two children. It's a literary youth, it's a pity, or else it should be written like this. Interesting writing