Holy Grail War? Dragon Ball War!

I think the biggest problem with these two volumes is their homogenization. The Inuyasha arc suffers from character homogenization, with most characters being similar demons and having largely similar backgrounds. The JoJo arc, on the other hand, suffers from skill homogenization, with a plethora of time-based techniques used repeatedly without much innovation.

Of all the novels I've read that feature anime characters battling it out in the Holy Grail War, yours is the best, miles ahead of the rest.

The Holy Grail War series attracted a majority of readers who had read or were familiar with Fate, but the second volume suddenly jumped to Inuyasha, leaving Fate readers completely bewildered. It seems a more gradual approach would have been better; at least the Night War should have been written first, followed by a few Lostbelt events before transitioning to other worlds.

There's no main character, and the main storyline is just the Fourth Holy Grail War; I feel like this book won't last long.

It's really too chaotic. To be fair, the idea of ​​an intergalactic Holy Grail War is great; it makes sense whether it's making up for past regrets or creating a chaotic free-for-all. But why is the first volume considered the author's peak? The biggest reason is that the Masters in the first volume are the same as those in the original work, belonging to the same worldview.

This book doesn't even have a minor, decorative main character? I can't stand this type of book.

To be honest, author, your choice of Inuyasha and JoJo's Bizarre Adventure arcs was poor. Let me analyze it from my personal perspective. Inuyasha lacks popularity; I only watched that anime as a child, and now that you've written this, I've forgotten the plot and characters.

The ending was a mess; some characters just coasted along, while others were killed off by plot devices. The final battle offered no surprises whatsoever, leaving me with a feeling of: "Oh, really? Just as I expected—boring." The first volume is the best written. In the Inuyasha arc, the scene where Nurarihyon enters is just a boss fight, which is quite boring.

The author shouldn't fall into habitual thinking; they shouldn't assume that the later parts should be stronger. Some lower and middle levels are also quite interesting.

Case solved! The author must really love jjxx (a slang term for someone who is overly enthusiastic about anime), to the point that they can even pull off a 2.5-Year-old version of Satoru. Do they really think everyone hasn't watched much anime? Most of the anime people read about have already seen.