Holy Grail War? Dragon Ball War!

In fact, I think the biggest problem in these two volumes is the homogeneity. In the Inuyasha chapter, the characters are homogeneous. Most of them are similar monster characters, and the backgrounds of the characters are very different. The Jojo chapter is about the homogeneity of skills. There is nothing new in using a large number of time-based skills. The first volume is completely different. The character backgrounds and skill sets of the parties are basically not similar, and the collision can produce different excitement. In my opinion, since this book has chosen this kind of brawling route, it has to be wild. It doesn't matter where the battlefield world is. What matters is the different characteristics of the characters on each side. You are the numerical monster and I am the mechanical monster. You are the hot-blooded type and I am the funny type. You are born to cheat and I have someone above me. Only then can we truly write a wonderful duel.

I have read some novels in which anime characters fight in the Holy Grail War, and yours is the best, beating them by a few blocks.

Most of the readers attracted by Holy Grail War have seen or know Fate, but the second volume suddenly jumps to Inuyasha, leaving Fate readers confused. I feel like it should be done step by step. At least the night battles should be written first. After a few Lostbelts, it will be suitable to jump to other worlds.

There is no protagonist, and the main storyline is just the Four Holy Grail Wars. I feel like this book won't be long.

It's really too messy. To be fair, the Cross-Universe Holy Grail War is a very good idea, whether it's to make up for regrets or to play Super Smash Bros., But why is the author's peak in the first volume? The biggest reason is that the Master in the first volume is the Master in the original work, and they are from the same world view. Even if the heroic spirits come from different worlds, they can be integrated into an organic whole under the guidance of the Master. For example, the light that saves Sakura, and the uniquely charming Emperor Lelouch, we can Feeling the bonds between people from different worlds and the changes they bring to the world However, later on it became more and more like a big fight, especially after the Jojo chapter, it was just a group of people fighting with their own abilities, and there was no longer the aura of the first volume.

This book doesn't even have a vase protagonist with a small role. I can't love this type of movie.

To be honest, the author, you did not choose the InuYasha chapter and JOJO well. Why is it not good? Let me analyze it from a personal point of view. InuYasha is not popular. I only watched this anime when I was a child. Now that you are writing this, I have forgotten what the plot is and what characters there are. To put it simply, the popularity of the book is low and passers-by cannot understand it. InuYasha fans alone cannot increase the popularity of the book. The problem with the JOJO chapter is that you added a lot of characters that are too buggy. Jotaro and DIO can't even stop for 15 seconds in total. You have a few characters who can stop for more than 10 minutes at a time, and you also added Accelerator and 100 Fighters who are absolutely defensive. The fighting power of Sun Wukong, the original characters in JOJO almost have no sense of existence. Originally, the biggest attraction of JOJO is the battle of wits and the plot. Once you start the fight, you stop the characters to use their skills, and only a few people can move. It is really boring to watch, and it is not as well written as the first fate. The advantages of your fate chapter are: first, the character creation is faithful to the original work, and the combat power is not too broken; second, the work is popular and popular with the public, and everyone can understand it; third, the famous battle theme, the magic tube. So I recommend a few ideas to you based on the advantages of the first article. For the first idea, you can write One Piece + Death + Naruto, refer to the 7vs7 Heroic Spirit War, let Naruto and Pirates each have 7 masters, and then pull 14 people from Death to fight the Heroic Spirit War. The second idea is to summon fate heroic spirits from ordinary comic characters, such as Great Teacher summoning heroic spirits, Brother Lu summoning heroic spirits for a big battle, etc. The third idea for Gundam Brawl is to find a few characters from UC, Seed, 00, and Iron-Blooded Orphans, and then let them summon each other, such as Amuro summoning Livontz, Mikazuki summoning Setsuna, etc., And lie to them that if they don't win the Dragon Ball War, your universe will be destroyed.

The ending is a mess, the plot is plot-killing and the plot-killing is plot-killing. There was no surprise in the final battle. After watching it, I felt like: Oh, yeah, it was just as boring as I thought. The first volume is the best written. InuYasha volume, when the Slippery Ghost enters the scene, it is just a boss fight plot, which is very boring. The jojo volume unexpectedly introduces the extraordinary combat power of Paradise Dio, and the ending is plot-killing, with some surprises. Conan volume, I was originally looking forward to the chaos and melee, but I didn't write it clearly. It was too martial arts, and it was not finished. I felt that the effort was hit on cotton, and then disappeared. Overall, it was not bad. overlord volume, a lump. When cheating characters were introduced in the casting, there was no check and balance on the cheating characters. The non-cheating characters were all just for show (calling the eldest lady by name, what is she here for, and it is useless to set up a foreshadowing). The theme is about a brave man fighting a demon king. The plot kills an important demon king, which gives a very poor impression. There was nothing surprising about the final battle, and it was already over in terms of settings. Even if it's going to be a Demon King vs. A Hero, why not Rimuru vs. Seiya? What everyone likes to see in the melee novels is the Zhuxian game and the Immortal game in front of the cheating characters, rather than the dimensionality reduction attack. The viewing experience is very poor, and it is the least surprising volume. With improved writing skills, the look and feel is even worse than the InuYasha roll. Problems that should be avoided in the next volume: 1. I also said in a previous post that those who cheat and those who don't cheat should not sit at the same table. An overly unbalanced character setting will cause obvious discomfort, and you will need to patch it even if you want to choose. For example, in this volume, Gin is patched, and he happens to have the Soul King fragment that Aizen is studying. This at least gives a chance to disrupt the situation, instead of everyone just going through the motions. 2. Melee, battle, and their respective highlights must be written down, and they should be the main stage. In this volume, the battles between Sasuke, Gin, and the eldest lady are very good, why not write more about them. The author's own setting is that God started the war just for fun. For this setting, he even changed the ending in the JoJo volume. According to this setting, there shouldn't be so many orthodox and boring stories.

The author should not fall into inertial thinking. Don't think that the further you go, the stronger you should be. Some low-level and middle-level ones are also very interesting.

The case has been solved. The author must like jjxx very much. He can write this kind of shit like 2.5 Chapters normally. I really think you haven't read the episode. I've seen most of the episodes of this type of article.