Opening a Martial Arts School, with Batman as the First Disciple

Batman was his first disciple? To be honest, I don't really like the Batman character. In my opinion, what he did was completely contrary to his goals. Being a superhero isn't actually that useful; Gotham's problems are mainly gangs, corruption, and supervillains. But these aren't problems that a single superhero can solve. And then there's his vow of non-killing.

When I was a kid watching Batman, I always thought it was pedantic that he didn't kill people. Only when I grew up did I begin to appreciate some of his ideas. Discussing only the plot and characters, Batman is certainly worthy of respect. Some have even analyzed why Batman cannot kill, and whether he could use his power to crack down on gangs.

Voldemort arrived on "Planet of the Apes," intending to quickly conquer the world with his little stick, only to discover that many of the Muggle researchers' methods were completely unheard of. What is a virus? "Are genes something that can replicate itself within the human body?" "Can a soul be copied?"

This author is one of the best writers I've seen in this genre! A quick glance around reveals that most authors just over-explain the protagonist's abilities, then have them show off and get humiliated, while the apprentice is treated like a mere plot device.

I would give this book a 9 out of 10. The one point I deducted was for the lack of rigor in the power system. The protagonist endures countless hardships yet remains kind, and despite gaining superpowers (a cheat code), remains serene. He then uses these powers to improve the world, fiercely protecting his own people while ruthlessly eliminating his enemies.

The author's writing style made me feel that the protagonist was a living, breathing person—yes, a truly personal feeling. Many novel protagonists are practically puppets of the author. While the author creates the protagonist, they shouldn't lack their own thoughts, will, and even emotions.

The story could have been told to continue for a few more months. The author messed up the balance between the protagonist and his apprentice. Since the protagonist is so powerful, the focus should have been on the apprentice's growth. At that point, the protagonist could have simply disappeared, allowing the apprentice to forge a different path.

Some people in the comments section, that's enough. If it weren't for Batman and Bruce Wayne, the US government would have abandoned Gotham City long ago. Bruce Wayne also built numerous apartments for the poor, invested in subways, high-speed rail, orphanages, and various clean energy projects—and nobody mentioned any of that?

Has the author lost their touch? Previously, the various settings and characters' inner thoughts didn't take up much space, but now it's getting increasingly padded. Take Dormammu, for example. From his arrival to defeating him, it took three chapters and over 60 points. Almost the entire time was spent on Dormammu and the protagonist's various thoughts, with almost no character interaction.

Can you imagine how desperate I am? This will drop me by at least 500 points, sob sob sob.