Becoming the Pirate King, Starting with Konosuba

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It really fits. One Piece has now entered the era of great gods. It's really hard to survive without a god.

The author is a worthless guy, and the protagonist actually dislikes Wei Zi because she is an undead😡😡😡Although I am an Equator Coin, I don't approve of this kind of protagonist, and I am very angry now 😡😡

The protagonist is so pitiful, I wish the author has such a life

This plain eye-catching smell is too strong, it really makes me exhausted 😒 It's too desperate to take on the perspective of the male protagonist, forget it, I won't bring it in, just to have fun 🙂

That's probably it

Who still remembers that the protagonist initially vowed to take revenge on the red hair, but now he is tortured to the point where it doesn't matter anymore 😁

The most regrettable thing so far is that the first one chosen is not Onion Tou, but Lao Sha, The first one is very intuitive, by the number of words, If you choose Feizhai, there is no such a big kingdom to seize power and a series of descriptions, Time to be released , probably happened to be a group of funny people who helped Fat Zhai heal a little bit and regain some of his youth. It just happened to be on the shelves, and he could write a small wave of passion and climax, For example, Fat Zhai burst into tears, with a completely different mood, and vowed to kill Kaido again, Just in time, it can also strengthen the motivations of the main plot and the protagonist and his group, "Go to Wano Country to fight Kaido", Because an important partner has a blood feud with Kaido, What the group of people are working hard for, and after some practice, it becomes very reasonable. There are many, No matter how godlike they are, this group of people can still empathize, have some sense, and do not exude chaotic evil in business (except Aqua) The other persona is much more suitable than Lao Sha. He values friendship, is surprisingly easy to talk to, and the team and the whole group are also doing it. The atmosphere of laughter, on the one hand, is much more moral and perfect than Lao Sha, and on the other hand, the style of painting matches the protagonist's line. Princess Mononoke, the surgeons, too, and a certain wretched person with a transparent fruit, the highlight, this one can completely blend in The three protagonists can be Sanji's stand-ins for the protagonists, and even copy some of the original works The only flaw is that it didn't have a good reputation at first, but with the plot of Onion going to Blackbeard alone for revenge, and the follow-up of Momonosuke Oden and a bunch of gods, it has become a little bit It's harmless, The only thing that's not easy to write is that you have to avoid the minotaur and not let the other person covet the protagonist's harem, otherwise the tragedy of Momonosuke will be written. Of course, you can also write that the protagonist can easily control the other person, and then portray the other person's greed for the harem within the limits, and then Later, he was tortured by the protagonist in various ways, or another way of writing it. He was greedy at first, but after discovering that it was a group of gods and men, he was so scared. Instead, he was entangled in various ways, and his life was worse than death. It would be very interesting to give him strong treatment for his lust 😏. On the other hand, Lao Sha is really... He only has one shemale, Feng Clay, whose style of painting is more in line with the protagonist's line, and his comedy talent is also very good, and he can create some god-man plot (but the author did not write it at all) Lao Sha is the same, he directly joined the religion, and then his IQ dropped sharply, He almost lost his character. With her physical charm, she has become assimilated into other similar characters... In the follow-up, Weiwei is also very panicked, fearing that she will be assimilated like other gods and completely lose her original personality. In the Barabastan chapter, the specific benefits and actual descriptions are also very unclear. Finally, I mined, how is it? I mentioned before that we need to change the world, so logically we should at least write a little bit about this aspect, right? But Aqua created a religion and the group left without doing anything. . . The last is the author's description of the battle... Battle, you can't avoid it in One Piece. . . After two battles, I almost couldn't stand it when I watched it... How about trying to write a storyteller? ? For example, in Jojo or Yu-Gi-Oh!, You can use multiple dialogues to buffer them. For example, the characters will fight a few times, say a lot, or add a bunch of funny words, then fight a few more sentences, and then end? It will be much easier than a whole section of fighting. Just write a few core sentences and leave the rest to the characters and dialogue descriptions that you are good at.

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The book is very enjoyable, but why do I get high blood pressure after taking on the role of the protagonist?😅

Su Qing, the best fan, is in the top three in my mind

The plot is great, but the author doesn't like Wiz

It's a very good book, and I've basically ordered all of it, but I have a few problems recently: 1. There are too many characters in the harem, which makes it difficult to write about them. Recently, many important characters in the early stage have been mentioned briefly or even not at all. This is not against the harem, but to describe the female characters for the harem has been completely carved. I can't draw it, so it's better to simply reduce the important characters. I feel like I can't control it. The composition of Suqing's world should include more than just the characters in the harem. However, after subscribing, I spent a lot of space describing the harem, and even the comedy came later. Compared with the comedy in the early stage, it is really disappointing. 2. The proportion of the plot is unbalanced. Previously, at least Pirates and Suqing were released at 55. As a result, Sand Crocodile was released in 9.1. Deleting the pirate characters has no impact at all. After all, the title of the book still has One Piece, but recently there is no one at all. There is even an extra princess and knight, which feels very abrupt. This has caused the book to change from being funny and good-looking in the early stage to being a daily description now, which reflects The lack of growth of the protagonist also makes the plot design very abrupt, and it is completely lacking the smoothness and novelty of the previous one. I originally thought it was about how the funny character Suqing would interact in the world of One Piece, but it turned out to be a stereotyped daily life in the harem. Even the characters in the One Piece world are just characters instead of pirates. What changes will happen in the world of Suqing? Hawkeye comes to take care of himself, and Sand Crocodile comes to take care of him.

. . . How should I put it? It does have an otaku flavor, but people have already written the two-dimensional, otaku, hot-blooded, nonsensical in the title of the book. You can see it even if you click on the introduction. If you insist on clicking on it, it's just a disease. The audience has already been discussed. If you come in and just curse, you are looking for nothing. Let's talk about mental illness out there. It's okay to say that you are mentally ill. It's better not to attack others. Everyone is in a good mood and comes to read books. I don't have to be a peacemaker. I just think that looking for trouble for nothing is too cheap. What's the difference between this and going to Tianya to ask if this is related to pornography?

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Su Qing is considered an unpopular subject at the starting point. The level 1 author opened an article on Su Qing's subject, and then took the fifth place in the new book. The data is about the same as the third place. The top two of the new book are not in the scope of discussion. It is too strong.

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It would be fun if you don't step into the role of the protagonist, but once you step into the protagonist's perspective, you will find that the protagonist is miserable...

To be honest, I feel that the recent character designs of Baroque Studio are a bit weird. Can we really transport them to another world casually? To be honest, aren't they all big pirates, and they still want to steal the country? How can the protagonist guarantee that they won't do bad things? And it feels a little too close 😥😥

I wonder if the author still has some energy left? Is it a part-time or full-time author? If it's a part-time job, how can 4,000 words a day be enough? Although to be honest, the writing is okay and I prefer to read it, but one day is too little.

Although well written, there was too much interaction with the female characters and too little plot development.

This is a funny world view for One Piece, and the development of the relationship with the Warring States Period is too strange.

Does the author have an outline? Can this book be written to 1 million words? I'm a little worried. I quite like this book.

It's not a high-quality product yet. Suqing's writing is really good.

The author is great. I have been poisoned by short videos. I can't even watch the sword coming to cover the sky in the snow. I can watch this one and find it very interesting. I looked for another Su Qing and found it boring. The level of interest is about the same as that of Qingshan Bear Wolf Dog. Keep your brain awake for more updates.

I suspect the author is a native of Suqing World

Are there normal people in Suqing's world? 😠

The taste of Suqing is so pure that you have to taste it. Added the next 5, there are 19 monthly passes in total this month, which is disrespectful

One question I want to ask is, does the author have any particular point in using the name Lin Bei? I quite like the tone of this novel, but sometimes I feel weird when I see the name Lin Bei, because in my limited understanding, it seems to be equivalent to what you, me, and I mean, so I feel weird when I see this name, and I have no choice but to give up and continue reading.