The Hero Player Who Started by Looting Corpses

Something about it feels off; it has a strange, almost unsettling quality to what early game fanatics do. Honestly, why the obsession with writing things that are hard to understand? Baldy's book was definitely better, except the My Hero Academia part was missing, and then it became difficult to continue.

I now strongly suspect this book was written by AI; it's full of massive amounts of data and meaningless introductions. The plot hasn't progressed an inch in days. Most importantly, the author never replies to comments. I've subscribed to the entire book, and if this continues, I might quit. 😅

There's a reason why you get permanently banned for being long-winded, and why your book doesn't get much attention.

He encountered a lowly soldier and, out of "instinct," threw his staff. What kind of behavior is that? Oh, and one more thing: the protagonist only has this one weapon; and since they're in a monster's lair, it's obvious there's more than one monster. When he said those soldiers weren't brainless, I had a strong hallucination... Could it be that the opposing team is a player, and the main character is an NPC? He's the only one in the whole game who's brainless...

What are these so-called "high-ranking officials" of the Hero's Guild? Are they just a bunch of ordinary people? You could understand if they were S-class heroes, but why would a hero need their permission to do anything? Frankly, they're just ordinary people managing the city for the heroes.

Throughout the entire novel, it felt like the protagonist never got stronger. He used the same tactics to fight weaker enemies, hide behind others, and use the same methods to fight elites and bosses – it was all very strange.

Now we're truly "back to square one." Back in the day, the fanfiction about One-Hit Man was posted right here.

Too much unnecessary talk and too verbose; it often consists of half a chapter of explanation and introduction.

What a piece of trash! Seventy percent of chapters are just explanations. Two or three lines of dialogue and half a chapter is set up. You might as well just read the instruction manual.

The author seems to have a poor grasp of dialogue; it's difficult for characters to engage in meaningful conversation. When supporting characters ask the protagonist questions, the protagonist struggles to respond verbally. A thick barrier exists between the protagonist and the rest of the world; the protagonist and others seem to exist on separate timelines.