Myriad Worlds: Starting as a Stand User

No, if you're going to write fanfiction about crossovers, please don't write about those overused anime and movies. The standard Dead/Live Sea and the mixed Marvel stuff are getting a bit nauseating now. The only thing I'd still be interested in is JoJo's Bizarre Adventure. The main problem is that there's already a ton of fanfiction, covering every trope imaginable.

It's still a proper continuation of the seventh part's storyline, which is rare on this platform. But connecting JO7 to Naruto, One Piece, Dragon Ball, and Marvel... That's too audacious. Without any extra power-ups, even if JO7 fully masters the remains, it's only limited to a special continent at most, and that's only for terrain and defense.

Reading *Golden Wind*, the author's writing style hasn't improved much; it's like a diary entry, and the protagonist is still portrayed as a petty bourgeois, showing no signs of growth or enlightenment. The main problem is that the writing is very disorganized, with little connection between the plot points. It's basically just writing whatever comes to mind, and each chapter is rather padded. It's simply a waste of Qidian coins.

What's the use of the Infinity Stones? They're useless outside that universe; they're basically just controllers for that universe.

Here's a suggestion: if you're writing fanfiction, don't write about Dragon Ball. The power levels in Dragon Ball are too inconsistent, which will make it difficult to write a proper battle system later on.

At the beginning, Hazama Sakai kept emphasizing destiny, which I found quite JoJo's Bizarre Adventure-esque and kept me following it. However, I felt the author's writing became less impressive afterward. In many parts, the protagonist seemed rather dim-witted. The Spinning Bolt technique should allow him to use anything that can spin, right?

What the hell is this, especially the Baki arc? It's so awful. The protagonist's fight to reclaim the lost glory of martial arts on the Grand Tournament was well-written, from Hanazono to Shibukawa to Honbu to Pickle to Baki to Miyamoto Musashi, all the way up to Yujiro. But he failed miserably when facing Yujiro.

Here's a tiny, very small piece of advice: don't write about Chinese animation. It's easy to fail miserably due to the art style and readership issues. Also, don't write about overly niche anime. Otherwise, why do you think it's niche? Fanfiction is all about originality and creativity. As long as your idea is original and captivating enough, you can easily write about Bleach, Naruto, or One Piece. But for niche anime, originality alone won't cut it.

It reminded me of elementary school essays written entirely in plain language with no rhetoric whatsoever. Even this part is considered one of the better ones in the whole text.

That "Prince of Tennis" comparison to "JoJo's Bizarre Adventure" is hilarious. If I put a typical "Love Train" president (a character from the anime/manga series) here, even if I dragged the entire Earth plus a nuclear bomb, "Prince of Tennis" couldn't get past him. All attacks aimed at the President will be redirected to a random location in the world.