Scientific Research in Naruto: Starting with Snake-Style Ninjutsu

I was just passing by and was surprised🙀, how did the Akimichi family get in touch with the beauty 🤔

Can you say that a beautiful girl weighing 300 pounds is not a beautiful girl?😌

Guys, can you give me some feedback? At least let me know how I am writing now, right? Other authors praise and criticize, but I am so quiet here that I don't even know if I am writing about Naruto.

The water that is visible to the naked eye in the previous chapters only looks good until the place where Kakuzu appears after returning from the first mission. However, the scientific research part is very imaginative, and the author put his heart into it. I really like this part. Unfortunately, the author's writing is not very long. I think I can boldly write more than ten chapters of scientific research at once. How about the writing style... It highlights simplicity. The problem of many new authors is that they like to describe in long paragraphs, but this author seems to deliberately avoid detailed descriptions. It is better than those who like descriptions, but without any description at all, they can only rely on the plot to win. But in terms of plot, this book feels bland, and there is no motivation to keep reading. However, it is very comfortable to read. I have written so much so far, and I have not read the kind of poisonous points that make me sick at first sight (except that the protagonist is female, which really needs to be adapted). It gives people this feeling because the author seems to have given brains to all the characters who appear for more than 100 words, whether they are important roles or minor characters. When everyone has a brain and can analyze the pros and cons, conflicts will not happen so easily. But the advantage of writing it this way is that the whole book has a strong sense of atmosphere, and it feels like everyone in this book is trying to survive, like the real Naruto world, and even a little bit of the Naruto story. Choosing a female protagonist and the Akimichi family... I feel like it's a failure. I don't know what the author thinks. If it were a male protagonist, a popular family, or even a commoner, the popularity would be much higher than it is now. Finally, this author's fighting scenes are very good, with back and forth. It is considered top-notch among the Naruto fanfics I have read, and I hope it will continue to be the same.

It's a violation of the book that purifies Obito. It's so fucking disgusting. Only Obito and Itachi deserve to die the most. Why are you so nice to him?

The protagonist leaves everything to Konoha, selflessly gives the content of his research to his friends, and never follows the exchange of equal value. This is the world of ninjas. He thinks this world is too beautiful, but the direction is wrong. Moreover, it seems that the protagonist wants to save everyone. He has to take care of everything.

My imagination is okay... But the success of the "research" is about the same as what I want to achieve with my hands. It is more like my power of thinking than scientific research In addition, the plot and writing are relatively dry. First of all, some of the characters are not reasonable. For example, the Hyuga branch will not learn it because it cannot learn the complete Ba Gua Zhang. And the Uchiha who can open his eyes just by being jealous...? Why would such a genius be thrown away as waste and take the Chunin Exam...? Then there are some unnecessary secondary settings... For example, the Uchiha clan moved from the Kingdom of Thunder to the Kingdom of Fire, and there is also the Zero Magatama Sharingan... To put it simply, there are no big poisons, but there are a lot of small poisons, and food and grass - right?

I hope everyone will comment more.

The picture I ran with SD today that I am quite satisfied with 🙂 may be a bit too mature, let's just treat it as three years later 🙂 Don't pay attention to small details in the pictures produced by AI 🙂

Shouldn't this be a female channel? Why do you appear on a male channel?