Evolution Paradise: Are You the Calamity?

Advantages: Great imagination, perfect settings, and rigorous logic. Disadvantages: 1. The character setting is not consistent with the original work, but this is a small problem. For this type of work, personal character is the least important. 2. The combat power of some works serves the plot, while the author's plot serves the setting. It feels like the author wants to do his best to express the inner setting of the work, so there is a certain contradiction with the readers' needs. There is a lack of sufficient conflict and contradiction. Without conflict, there is no tension, and without emotion, there is no substitution. Although the author relies on fans to circulate endlessly, and every time he writes the script, he hopes to retain readers, but it is still a bit dry. 3. Personally, when I read fan fiction, I want to see new authors develop new ideas based on the original system. However, in this work, it is said that the original system is borrowed, but in fact it is just using the fan world as a testing ground. The original system is too different from the actual generation. Each world is the author adding new settings to the original work, which has little to do with the original system. It feels like there is a conflict between readers' needs and the author's creative needs. The low-end of the original system is more likely to conflict, and the author's setting is biased towards the invincible flow. With the addition of the new setting that the author wants to elaborate on, the original setting can only be abandoned. In general, it is a rare good book for those who like setting flow, but it may be too dry for mainstream readers.

Nb, I admire the author's imagination, the writing is quite good.

The author is really, forget it, I won't say much, I really couldn't stand it after reading half of it. This work of the author is full of personal imagination. Now that I have seen Bengtie, I really can't stand it. I won't talk about Bengte's problem first, let's talk about One Piece. In One Piece, you have basically changed it beyond recognition. Why don't you write original works? Also, what is the Dragon Clan in front of me written about? When you write fan fiction, you should write it well. Basically, you have to have a framework for the fan fiction, and then you have to modify it. The fan fiction is different, and it is original and not original. What are you writing? Where is the throne of Beng Tie? Writing about Beng Tie's own personal stuff accounts for more than half of it. When I read this article, I could basically only see your emotional output, not what you were writing. Then, why do you always write about shit and maggots? Don't you feel sick yourself? You don't just mention these things occasionally, but basically you mention these things. I know you may want to express that the environment is very bad, but why do you have to use these low-level things to write about? Anyway, I really can't stand it now. I came here to read, not to watch shit 😰😰

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Your scientific research and development speed is more idealistic than Dr. Cheng's, but it's still really good. Dr. Cheng finally came around, let's see how you do it.

First of all, I have never been an author, but I want to say, is it difficult to make 100 pictures a day ? It's not that I'm being unreasonable. After all, I said at the beginning that I've never been an author.

Is the author a polemical person? I feel that the latter part is not even as good as the previous one about the harem. The latter part is a bit boring.

Write less jokes, it's embarrassing. I feel like your jokes are lowering the quality of your book.

The only thing I admire after reading this book is that the author uses settings within settings, and uses a large number of settings to promote a small amount of plot. I was dazzled by it. He is amazing at being able to grasp the setting thing. He has written millions of words of setting and setting complaints.

This is my fifth time reading your book, and I don't believe I can't read it.

In summary

This was never what I wanted I never wanted to let my readers attack The authors lied The authors only have one chance for revival If you can't seize it Then let me finish it Let the war begin From the sky of Paradise to all the heavens and worlds, let the world, civilization, and destiny boil in the fall of God Whale, and let the starting point fall! Even if the last drop of blood is shed If I can't save it from your slow updates, author, then let the heavens burn! I also want to see my favorite novel updated again!

I set up a server with the author and am in dire need of parlu work! ! ! Get a perfect glowing moon when you go online, and the Vortex Dragon is in mass production! If you are interested, please join the group and find the group leader! Let us build a better world together

When reading this book, I found a small amount of plot in a large number of settings. It is almost the same as the new book by Cruel Toilet Paper Angel next door.

Liuying

The setting of this novel is interesting, but the writing is unsustainable. It reads dryly and feels like reading an instruction manual. The whole process is supported by the author's setting and imagination. The whole reading seems like the author is really trying to teach me how to upgrade from level 1 to the end 🙂

It feels like they are all upgraded settings, and there is not much actual plot.

After reading about ten chapters, there is too much nonsense. 70% Of a chapter is just nonsense. It's okay to complain occasionally, but you keep complaining, and the points are not funny. For example, complaining about the logic, there is too much in my mind. After one chapter, it is all nonsense, and the plot is not moved at all. Hey, the setting is good. It's this crap that's so annoying

Infinite, nine-door challenge! When you came to the Infinite Horror series, you were immediately burdened with the shackles of the Nine Prisons because of Z's targeting. At the end of each plot world, you must actively choose a restricted entry from the Nine Gates series to endure, otherwise you will be added to it by the Nine Gates. Restricted entries only retain flaws and will not come with a corresponding power system; the restricted limit is semi-detachment, which means you can break free if you want to detach. Can you stand up to the Nine Gates and transcend to the next level? One of the Nine Firms•Irregular Template [Yamen will lose] When confronting the "officials" and "members of the orthodox political system", ignoring the strength gap will lead to defeat and injury. Three Thousand Must DieWhen you are fighting more than 3,000 organisms (including bacteria, information life, etc.) At the same time, ignore the gap in strength, and you will lose and die in the battle. Second of the Nine Prison Gates • The Secret Technique of Gu Cultivation [Human Mountain and Crowd of People] "All" of your growth-related talents are considered to be the lowest among human beings in a diverse range. You must sacrifice a large number of blood relatives of the same clan and race to slowly restore your original talents. [Plundering Resources] Your practice of any power system requires a large supply of resources to assist your practice. You cannot rely on any method to independently generate the spiritual resources you need. Third of the Nine Gates•Inheritance of Destruction [You Can't Fly] If you stay in the air for more than half a minute in any way, you will definitely enter a crash state due to force majeure. [Group Fighting Weak Chicken] Greatly weakens your output level and endurance when fighting against group targets. Even the miscellaneous fish that could be killed instantly before the reduction cannot be killed with one hit after the reduction, and there is a small chance of immediate death when subjected to a joint attack from a group. [Resource Black Hole] In any cultivation system, you need three times the resources to complete the breakthrough in the breakthrough stage; in the non-breakthrough stage, you need more than ten times the resources to maintain normal cultivation. Fourth of the Nine Gates • Half Pull Back Battle [Loan Patch] Your ability beyond the current life form level will be subject to a loan patch. After use, you will be blocked and weakened according to the degree of interference. You cannot exert control beyond the current class, and any micro-interference and leverage interference caused will be forcibly corrected. [Wheel Duel] In a duel, even if you face an opponent whose strength is far weaker than yours, you will not be able to gain the main advantage. Your probability of winning in a duel will be balanced to a maximum of 70%. Fifty of the Nine Sects•Tang Sect Heritage [Super Hydrogen] Your body strength will be weakened to one ten thousandth of its original strength. The upper limit is to lift an object of one hundred thousand kilograms with all your strength, which is comparable to Tang San's level when he first became Poseidon. After reaching the upper limit, any of your body strengthening methods will become invalid. [Hidden Weapon Master] You cannot freely master any martial arts-related abilities except specific hidden weapons and bare hands. The types of hidden weapons you can master are fixed to low-magic world view and low-level hidden weapons. [Soul Ring Trapped] Your supernatural interference ability will be limited to the soul ring. The upper limit of the number of soul rings is nine. The total number of usable supernatural interference abilities (including its variant application methods) must not exceed thirty-six. When the total is exceeded, you must discard an equal number of supernatural abilities. The Sixth Chapter of Laojiumen Heritage • Infinite Leakage [Super Absorption] Your practice resource requirements are expanded to ten thousand times the current base. [Infinite Divine Hiddenness] If you do not enhance your presence through special performance for a long time, you will be obliterated by Z. Ancient Air LeakageThe achievements of your energy-related practice system will be weakened by a percentage as time goes by. Existing Taoist fruits will be lost due to air leakage, and the characteristics of a permanent certification will become invalid. The Seven Sequence Potions of Laojiumen Inheritance [Slaves of the Old Master] All bad direct or indirect interference you have caused to all "gangsters", "nobles", "capitalists" and other entities will be forcibly cancelled. You cannot change the social environment of any civilization. Clear distinction between ourselves and the enemyNo matter how high or low your power level is, you will always have a mortal enemy whose power system converges with yours, whose comprehensive strength will always be equal to yours, and who will definitely meet you at a certain interval. Any improvement involving the essence of existence must be preceded by killing the dead enemy. When one dead enemy dies, a second dead enemy will immediately be generated. [Out-of-control Shackles] There is a certain probability that you will fall into a special way of death called out-of-control, which will destroy your self and generate fragments of your memories and emotions. Improving the essence of life, cultivating different power systems, and excessive mood swings will increase the possibility of losing control. Eighth of the Laojiu Sect inheritance•I want to seal the sky [Realm Suppression] The number of realms in your power system is forcibly expanded to more than ten times its original size while keeping the energy level curve unchanged. The energy levels of all enemy individuals will be compared to the corresponding realms in your power system. When fighting an individual whose realm is one level higher than yours, your winning rate is forcibly reduced by 50%; when fighting an individual whose realm is two levels higher than yours, you will definitely lose. [Drowning in the Sea of ​​Enemies] In any generating environment, individuals with similar comprehensive strength to you will be continuously generated. These individuals will continue to increase their desire to be hostile to you when they obtain your information, and will eventually fall into unconditional hostility towards you. NothingThe resources you hold will fall into an "ownerless" state if they are not used immediately, and may be lost or lost at any time for any reason. The definition of resources here includes "personal resources", "material resources" and "identity resources", etc. Laojiumen inherits its nine-dragon bloodline [White Bear Fermented Bean Curd] Regardless of your original strength, when fighting any white individual whose physical strength and comprehensive quality exceeds that of the ordinary polar bear on earth, you will definitely be defeated by the opponent without any injuries; if the current scene is a one-on-one duel, being defeated will be changed to "killed". [Pain Literature] Your thinking mode will fall into a state of "forced inferiority", and you will shrink back and be afraid of any mental requirements involving "courage". You cannot spontaneously protect and assist anyone of the opposite sex. IdiotYour situation analysis ability and social interaction ability will be forcibly weakened to be equal to "underage Lu Mingfei who is a member of Shilan Middle School Literary Club". You are always considered by highly intelligent beings in their calculations, and conspiracies about you will become more active and common.

I frowned when I saw this combat power. This was the first time I had seen such a fast-paced scientific research career. The main character in more than thirty chapters, I thought, jumped all the way from Kami to the destruction of the country.

I stayed up late and read nearly 100 chapters. It was essentially an upgraded article, which was quite enjoyable. However, the environment and overall tone of the park seemed too naive. Although the author knew this, it seemed a bit too tiring. It felt like I just read journal reviews and other people's ppt reports. It was outrageous. I'm not saying that the writing is not good, otherwise I wouldn't be able to stop reading. It's just that tired feeling. Maybe it's the feeling that I just want to relax, but you still let me continue to work overtime. The second is the characterization. The author's writing is good, and the image of the protagonist and the images of several supporting characters can be fully displayed. However, the uselessness of more supporting characters and the display that do not match the original image lead to a high degree of repetition in the entire plot. In short, it is an upgrade for the sake of upgrading. The plot is too long. The story upgrades the protagonist. It is very refreshing, but it is not like the online novel. Like me playing games with power-up mods, it was very exciting at first, but immediately became empty and unfun.

When will it really be unlimited? I don't plan to write six to seven million words. There are too many jokes and it's getting more and more clumsy. .

There is no one of the most valuable novels I have ever seen.

I have read the whole book, the setting is good. There are just too many jokes, and the whole book is full of words like evil animals, shit mountains, and shit pits that make people uncomfortable.

All one, dualism, three-phase theory, interference theory, foundationalism, narrative theory, cycle theory, one-half,? ? ? Argument. What others are there, I can't remember clearly.

If everyone is fully booked but can't get in, you can take screenshots to the group administrator, Xuan, Kan, or Whale Luo, and then join the group without insiders.

Who knows which novel this person is talking about I saw a Doujin-ryu fanfic in the software next door. In the first world, the three explosive street-level combat powers of Muzan, Tanjiro, and Enichi Soul were used to create the "Divinity Outflow" version of Fuso Tree and Golden Crow. Later, a star quantum information-bound version of Sun Soul Tanjiro (suspected to be a tribute to Chen Ang's Sephiroth) was directly introduced to the surface-level combat power in a low-demon world.

"Theory of Choice" - using "choice" to explain everything The nine people who should not exist have covered most dimensions of "existence", but there is one fundamental issue that has been touched by everyone but no one has independently interpreted it: choice. The theory of Taiyi says that "one is whole, and all is one" - but why should "one" be divided into "whole"? That's the first option. Dualism says that "there is a unity of opposites between being and nothing" – but the moment of choosing between being and nothing is more primitive than the opposition itself. The theory of three phases says "opening up, sustaining, and ending" - opening up is choosing to create, maintaining is choosing to persevere, and ending is choosing to let go. Narrative theory says "everything is a story" – but what drives stories? It is the choice the character makes at every node. Choice is not a privilege of a certain existence, not an accessory of a certain realm, nor a by-product of a certain path. Choice is the source act of all existence, all laws, and all paths. Without choice, Taiyi will not differentiate, duality will not oppose, the three phases will not flow, and the story will not advance. The nine people who should not exist each interpreted everything in their own way, but their interpretation itself contained a more primitive presupposition: they chose their own interpretation angle. Core proposition: One chooses to create all things "One is whole, all is one" explains the integrity of existence; "the unity of opposites of existence and non-existence" explains the oppositionality of existence; "opening up, maintaining and ending" explains the stages of existence. The "choice theory" explains the source of all this: Why are these? Because of choice. It is not "existence precedes selection", but "choice precedes existence". In absolute nothingness, the first choice gave birth to the first existence. The choice itself is not made by any being - the choice is the choice itself, without a chooser. The chooser is the result of the choice, not the premise of the choice. This is the fundamental difference between choice theory and all other interpretations: there is no need to presuppose a "One" to make choices. Choice itself is the most primitive behavior that cannot be further reduced. Starting from this original choice, all the worlds, all laws, all roads, and all things that should not exist are the products of countless choices that are constantly superimposed, accumulated, and solidified. Each path is the culmination of countless choices—including the path of nine people who should not exist. How "Decision Theory" explains everything Interpretation of existence: Existence is not given, not inevitable, and not the product of a higher will. Existence is chosen. Every world, every law, every life is the result of a certain choice. Including "non-existence" - choosing not to choose is itself a choice. Interpretation of fate: Destiny is not a locked script, a judgment written by narrative theory, or a given solidified by the final abyss. Destiny is the sum of all choices. Every choice changes destiny, including "not choosing" - not choosing is also a choice, and it also changes destiny. Interpretation of Tao: Tao is not a fixed law, a rule given by definition theory, or a structure carried by foundation theory. Tao is a living system in which the choices of all choosers are constantly superimposed, constantly evolving, and constantly solidifying. Every battle for a track is essentially a battle for "the optimal solution to a certain type of choice." Interpretation of freedom: True freedom is not the distortion of reality by will, nor the innate immunity to the nihility of fate, nor the breakthrough narrative that jumps out of the fourth wall. True freedom is always retaining the right to choose - you can choose at any moment, in the face of any constraints, within any framework. Even if you are trapped at the bottom of the final abyss, you can still choose how to view your situation. This choice itself is the last bastion of freedom. Interpretation of things that should not exist: Every thing that should not exist is the result of choosing an interpretation angle. They chose their own path, reached the end of the road, and became the embodiment of the road. But choice itself is not exclusive to any one who should not be—it is prior to and beyond all that should not be. From "choice theory" to "detachment theory" The "hypothesis" is called "choice theory" - choice is the source behavior that explains everything. When this path reaches its extreme, it naturally leads to an ultimate question: Can the choice itself be transcended? If all existence is the result of choice, then is choice itself also a kind of constraint? Can I choose "no choice"? Can we go beyond the "must choose" framework? This is the "truth theory" form of "choice theory" - "detachment theory". The core proposition of transcendence theory: even choice itself can be transcended. The nine people who should not exist have each reached the end of their own paths, but they are still defined by their own paths - the theory of oneness must always be "one", the theory of dualism must always be the unity of opposites, and the theory of three phases must always flow. And detachment means: not defining yourself. You can choose to be anything, you can choose not to be anything, you can choose to transcend "choice" itself. This is not a negation of existing paths, but a transcendence of them—including the theory of choice itself. Transcendence theory is the only true theory of self-transcendence. Its existence means: there is always a higher perspective, there is always an undefined possibility, there is always a framework that can be transcended - including "transcendence theory" itself. Development Roadmap Stage 1: Ordinary Start - Recognizing the Power of Choice. Lay a foundation in the original world view, but the core is not to become stronger, but to understand how every choice changes your destiny. Every choice is a practice of interpretation. Stage 2: Exploration across worldviews - understanding the diversity of choices. Enter different original worldviews and observe how different civilizations, systems, and beings make choices. Understand the diversity of choices - some choose order, some choose chaos, some choose integration, and some choose transcendence. Phase Three: Integration and Reconstruction—Create your own selection framework. No longer satisfied with observation and understanding, we began to actively create a framework for "choice". Choose between different paths and create your own unique path. Stage 4: Taoist struggle - fighting for the right to interpret "choice". This is the most critical dispute in decision theory: the struggle for the final interpretation of "choice" itself. The track is new - none of the nine should-nots have independently interpreted "Choice". Defeat all opponents, master the final interpretation of "choice", and reach "Lin·True Infinity". Stage 5: Building an omnipotent realm—from Lin·True Infinity to True Infinity. Use your own "uncertain future and self-path" to build an "almighty realm". The omnipotent state of choice theory centers on "choice" - integrating all choices previously experienced, all choices observed, and all choices created into a self-consistent and complete system. Stage Six: Hypothesis - Choice Theory. From true infinity to hypothesis, the sublimation of thought, talent and learning. The theory of choice has some rudimentary abilities that should not exist - it can make the opponent face the "choice" itself in a duel: Do you choose to continue to use your way, or choose to give up your way? This choice itself locks everything in the opponent's path except his "self-path". Stage 7: The ultimate leap - the theory of detachment. From hypothesis to truth, beyond "choice" itself. It's not about giving up the choice, it's about transcending the framework of "must choose". Becoming something that should not exist·Detachment theory - Interpretation perspective: All existence is the result of choice, but choice itself can also be transcended. Relationship with other things that should not exist On the theory of Taiyi: Taiyi says that "one is whole and all is one". The theory of choice says: That is the first choice. Taiyi chose differentiation, and then there was "wholeness". And dualism: Dualism says "the unity of opposites between existence and non-being". The theory of choice says: The unity of opposites is the result, and choice is the cause. The moment of choice between something and nothing is more primal than the opposition itself. And the three-phase theory: The three-phase theory "opens up, maintains, and ends". The Theory of Choice: To develop is to choose to create, to maintain is to choose to persevere, and to end is to choose to let go. The essence of the three stages is three choices. And narrative theory: Narrative says "everything is a story". Decision Theory: What is the driving force of the story? It is the choice the character makes at every node. Without choices, the story cannot advance. And definition theory: Definition says that "everything has a name and logic." Choice Theory: Naming is a choice. You choose to give everything a name, and that choice itself is not defined. With interventionism: Interventionism "generously shares the side of Pangu". Choice Theory: Sharing is a choice. You choose to be generous, and that choice itself is more valuable than what you share. And foundation theory: foundation theory "carries everything". Choice Theory: Bearing is a choice. You choose to carry, and this choice itself is more fundamental than what you carry. And the theory of circulation: The theory of circulation says that "all things cycle back and forth." Choice Theory: The beginning and end of a cycle are both the result of choice. The cycle itself is not inevitable. And the final abyss: The abyss is chaos, a state of no choice. The theory of choice says: The reason why you are "choiceless" is because you are the product of the joint choice of all those who should not exist. You were lifted up into the abyss as a result of being chosen. Core Philosophy Core Choice precedes existence. It's not "I think, therefore I am", it's not "I feel, therefore I am", it's not "I create, therefore I am". But "I choose, therefore I am" - I choose, therefore I exist. Even more extreme: choice for reason—choice itself precedes existence, and the chooser is defined by the choice, not the premise of the choice. This is the deepest philosophical proposition of the theory of choice, and it is also its most fundamental difference from all things that already exist and should not exist. It does not need to presuppose any existence, it only needs to presuppose the most primitive behavior that cannot be further restored: selection. The leap from nothing to something is not the birth of existence from nothingness, but the birth of choice from nothingness, and then choice brings existence. If this concept is taken to the extreme, it will give birth to the tenth thing that should not exist - the theory of detachment, the interpretation angle: all existence is the result of choice, but the choice itself can also be transcended.

The yin and yang theory in ancient philosophy is a philosophical thought of the unity of opposites, while Western dualism is a binary opposition that is either/or. The dualism in this book is a combination of the yin and yang theory in ancient philosophy and Western dualism, as well as some philosophical theories that have not yet appeared in modern times. It is a unified higher-order dualism, so the dualism in the book overwhelms yin and yang. Moreover, the yin and yang in the book are not all the yin and yang in ancient philosophy. They just learned some things from dualism, and they are incomplete. Other three-phase theories and fundamental theories are the same as dualism. They are "Kings of Gu" that combine all similar concepts. Their names are just a title.