A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality: I'm No Good at Cultivation, but I Know a Few Martial Arts

Stop calling this "mortal cultivation," this is "cheat-powered cultivation." Or rather, it's the author who's cheating. Han Laomo has consumed so many Dragon Scale Fruits and cultivated advanced body techniques for over a hundred years before achieving any results, and he has never had a direct confrontation with someone from a higher realm.

This is incredible! Author, you're amazing! Cultivation realms are not only divided into physical cultivation and magical cultivation. The Core Formation stage alone is divided into 15 realms! Early stage of Core Formation / Middle stage / Later stage / Peak stage / Great Perfection. What are you thinking?

The protagonist cultivates the most expensive techniques in the poorest place, and is also the poorest cultivator. It's incredibly awkward. First, he doesn't know the four arts of immortal cultivation; second, he has no cheat codes; and third, he lacks the resources to cultivate body cultivation, which requires rare and precious treasures for advancement.

The Legend of Mortal Cultivation has many seemingly insignificant settings, but once accepted, the number of novels you can read will gradually decrease. For example: 1. When encountering a strong enemy, one should run away instead of unleashing one's inner power, awakening mysterious strength, having an epiphany in battle, or breaking through.

Having read over a hundred chapters, this book is so closely tied to the theme, really, it's all about the theme! He can't refine weapons, he can't form formations, he can't make talismans, and as for alchemy, he only managed to refine some basic hand-rolled pills at the beginning, and that was it for him. All he has left is a body of muscle, just the life of a protector.

Would the Hidden Moon Sect accept someone who isn't handsome? The Hidden Moon Sect is supposed to only accept handsome men and beautiful women. Your protagonist isn't handsome, yet he joins the sect—it's jarring. He doesn't even have a Heavenly Spiritual Root or a Different Spiritual Root, and this book is still so popular, making the author money. It's more painful than death for him to recklessly change the established settings.

I rewatched "A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality" and found that the plots of the journey to the Void Heaven Palace and the journey to the River Styx in the Spirit Realm are almost identical, even down to the functions of the Heaven-Mending Pill and the River Styx Divine Milk at the end.

Damn it, couldn't you have looked at the original work before writing it? Did Zi Ling's mother even know about her constitution? It's disgusting to read.

The problem with this book is that the realms are too verbose. Realms like "late stage of Nascent Soul" are the most annoying. And then, is there going to be a "mid-stage of early stage of Half-Step Incarnation"?

This body cultivator seems so weak, not at all invincible among his peers. While he might win against opponents of the same level, he just comes across as incredibly weak. Also, body cultivation is notoriously difficult; how can someone with the body of a level 5 dragon possibly cultivate to the Golden Core realm? Are you kidding me?