A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality: Starting Five Hundred Years Ago
凡人：从五百年前开始
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 2.3M Words
- Genre
- Xianxia
- Subgenre
- Fantasy Cultivation
- Updated
- 1d ago
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554Chapters
266Monthly votes
38.9kRecommendations
146.7kFans
8 ch/weekPace
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Master Le
Saintess of Mulan
Chu Wuji
AI-generated
Chapter 420: Saving Money: He went to great lengths to avoid affecting Han Li's fate, made a plate of dumplings just to appease Nangong Wan, and then finished summarizing.
Master Le
Plain-colored palace dress
Ancient method of water character count, suppressing combat power
The protagonist is a complete waste. He possesses a wind spirit root comparable to a heavenly spirit root, along with enlightenment and prophetic abilities, yet he's still only in the mid-Nascent Soul stage after 400 years. His combat power is drastically suppressed, all for the sake of mindlessly entering the third Void Heaven Palace plot. Han Li, on the other hand, has a pseudo-spiritual root.
Discussion
Currently, the female lead is set up as Master Yue, but her relationship with the protagonist is not harmonious, even showing tension and antagonism. The subsequent development of their relationship might feel abrupt. Perhaps adding some plot elements to strengthen their bond, such as having offspring.
It's highly likely the story will fall apart later on. It's already incredibly padded, and several chapters were bonus chapters for monthly votes, but what kind of terrible plot was that? They specifically wrote chapters about saving mortals and hiding opportunities, but these bonus chapters are a waste of monthly votes.
As of now
Before the border station, and after the Fallen Demon Land, Song Yu revolved entirely around the protagonist. The protagonist not only gifted her valuable treasures but also saved her life, practically branding her as the "female lead." Sigh~, the author's portrayal of female characters always revolves around the old hero-saves-the-damsel trope; it's nothing new.
The water is finished
The plot is so long and drawn-out, we haven't even gotten to Yellow Maple Valley yet. Getting there will probably take several more days of padding before we even reach the Crimson Forbidden Land, and then the Crimson Forbidden Land plot will take another few days of padding before we finally get to it. Do you think this is the original novel? This lousy plot is so long and tedious!
Slicing tofu with a knife—it should be smooth on both sides; if done incorrectly, you'll end up pleasing neither!
The book was originally set to feature a single female lead, Song Yu, but the choice was changed after the previous round of voting. Changing the original female lead within the framework of a single female lead inherently carries considerable risk.