A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality: I Have a Portable World

It's kind of funny. In the original novel's Immortal Realm arc, the ending didn't even wrap things up properly. And you're still going to write it according to the Immortal Realm arc's setting? The reason you people are afraid to steal the little green bottle is simply because you're afraid that the Time Dao Ancestor has closed his timeline, and whoever goes will die, since there's a future Han…

Of all the harem novels I've read, yours is the most enjoyable. I come back to read it every now and then.

The female characters in the character list were enough, which was fine at first, but it became a bit disgusting to collect all the female characters who appeared in the mortal world. The master who carried the pots and pans, the senior sister, and Madam Wen were all collected. When I saw this, I felt that the book suddenly dropped several levels.

The beginning was fine, but after chapter 200 it turned into erotica. I really lost the motivation to subscribe; I didn't come here to read erotica.

Nangong Wan

There are too many female leads. When there are too many characters, the romantic storylines become difficult to handle, and it becomes uninteresting.

If a great author were to write an "enhanced" version of this book, that would be amazing! It's the most comprehensive fanfiction about collecting female characters I've ever read, but they don't allow the most crucial content to be written. If they wrote an "enhanced" version, it would leave those other erotic novels far behind!

As more and more women appeared, the characters became stereotypical, which is a common problem in harem novels 🤣

Because I love the novel "Mortal Cultivation," I've read all the fanfiction! This one seems alright so far, especially the way it treats Xiao Ping (a character from a fantasy novel), which is quite reasonable. I hope the author continues writing. It's good to learn from the good aspects of other fanfiction and avoid the bad ones!

Author, I really want to ask why so many novels about ordinary people involve characters who are practically simps. Do they have to find the original protagonist and not write the story without him? And in every so-called transaction, the protagonist always suffers a huge loss just to gain some so-called favor. Is reading these novels just about becoming a simp and sucking up to someone?