A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality: I Have a Portable World

It's a bit funny. In the original fairyland chapter, the circle didn't come back in the end. Are you still writing based on the fairy world setting? The reason why you people are afraid of grabbing the little green bottle is because you are afraid that the Time Dao Ancestor will close the loop on his timeline. Who will go and who will die? After all, there is a future Han Li is watching. But I find it funny. In the original work, Ancient or Modern was the first Time Dao Ancestor, so didn't he close the loop of time earlier than Han Li? There is a future, ancient or present, where Han Li will be able to grow up. But Han Li didn't grow up in the same way, and killed the ancient or the present. The setting of time closed loop is wrong. Compared with the setting of closed time loop, I prefer the setting of Great Luo Jinxian, which is to integrate all the bodies in all parts of the world and in each time period into one, to become the Great Luo Jinxian and to be the only one. There is no future body, nor past body, only the present Daluo Jinxian body. There is no possibility of dying after being killed in the past, and there is no possibility of being stronger in the future to protect oneself.

I have read so many mortal harem stories, and this book is the most comfortable one. I come back to read it from time to time.

The female characters in the character list are enough. It was good at the beginning. It was a bit disgusting to include the female characters who appeared as mortals. The master, the senior sister who holds the pots and bowls, and Mrs. Wen were all included. When I saw this, I felt that the book suddenly dropped several levels.

It's well written at the beginning, but after 200 chapters it turns into a pornographic book. I really have no motivation to subscribe. I'm not here to read pornographic books.

Nangong Wan

There are too many female protagonists, and when there are too many, they won't be able to handle the emotional lines, which is boring.

It would be great if a master wrote a supplementary version of this book. I have read the most complete version of this book so far. I would like to prevent the most critical content from being written. If I write the supplements, I can beat those few pornographic novels!

Because I love mortals, I have read all the fanfictions! This book seems to be okay so far, especially the way of treating vials is more reasonable. I hope the author can keep writing. You can learn from the good things of other fans and avoid the bad things! The ones that have been written relatively successfully so far are scientific cultivation of immortality and immortality.       ：，，，！       ：，！       ，（），，！       ，：       1（），，，？ Why can it overcome the three supreme laws? (I think it's only the black hole realm); Why is my magic power deeper than others? Why is the consciousness stronger than others? Why can you defeat others? 2. You can open a harem if you have a heroine, but you can't take up too much of your resources, let alone delay your plan for immortality; 3. Your IQ must be online, don't fall short, and don't make yourself or your enemies mentally retarded. After all, in this cruel world, no one is simple; 4. You can be forewarned and you can take advantage of Han Tianzun, but you can't steal too many opportunities from Old Demon Han and you can't affect his trajectory, but you can't be indifferent to opportunities. You have to write down the reasons why you don't want to grab them or you can't grab them; 5. You can appropriately expand the opportunities that Han Li didn't encounter or the maps that he didn't open, not too many, and not too many; 6. The fighting must be exciting and the plot must be reasonable. This is where Wangyu is better than others! 7. As a time-traveling party, we must always maintain the thinking of modern people and ask more questions for those who have not time-traveled. For example, what is spiritual root? How is each level different? What does this world look like? How is it different from the cognitive solar system? Etc! Keep satisfying readers' appetites!

There are more and more women in the future, and it feels like the facial makeup has become more complex, which is also a common problem in harem stories🤣

Author, I really want to ask why novels about mortals are basically half-step licking, so you have to find the original pig's feet. Without him, wouldn't you be able to write? And every so-called transaction is where the protagonist suffers a big loss just to gain the so-called favor. So you read the novel just to be a licking dog? So far, there is only one Mortal novel that has done well. It doesn't describe Han Li very much. There are few transactions and the main character takes advantage of it. The results are still the best among the Mortal novels. Facts have proved that if you don't describe too many scenes of Han Li, the protagonist is not a virgin, and your butt should be straight, the results will naturally be good.