Mortal: Copying the Heaven-Palm Bottle from the Start

Fellow Taoist, you understand!

It's probably the best fanfic I've ever read, just hurry up! Update 😡

Recommended starting point fan fiction: Mortal Zhang Tie's digital counterattack. Reborn Zhang Tie, I don't have a little green bottle. My only advantage is big data optimization. In Qixuan Sect, I optimized martial arts to reach the pinnacle of martial arts in a mortal body. On the road to immortality, I optimized immortalization techniques, and ordinary spells also have the power of heaven. When everyone in the world called me the Dao Ancestor, I looked back and realized that I had already optimized all the methods of the Immortal Dao.

It's so strange that readers nowadays don't care about the plot or writing, but they keep asking the heroine

The plot design is okay, but the writing always feels dry when I read it. It lacks a kind of spirituality and is very stiff. It doesn't have that smooth and natural feeling. It doesn't look like it is AI. Logically, it feels like it was written by a human. It's quite strange. Could it be that the author is a pure-blood science student?

The gold-hand man designed for the protagonist in this book is one who does good deeds and will be rewarded, so the protagonist's character is that of a decent person! The biggest benefit gained from helping Han Li at the beginning is well written and the plot is not muddled. The subsequent plot should be written around the protagonist's golden finger, so that the protagonist can accumulate a large amount of resources by helping others, and then quickly improve his cultivation level, and then help others to form a positive cycle. The mortal world is originally an underworld. With the help of Goldfinger, the protagonist does not need to plunder others, and can even benefit himself by helping others! In the mortal underworld cultivating immortality, the protagonist is a breath of fresh air, which also highlights the protagonist's character characteristics. There are also many plots that can be written and created later. The problem is that the protagonist doesn't feel happy at all after having a baby. The purpose of creating fan fiction from ordinary people is to make up for the regrets and to feel more happy. In the original work, Han Li was already suffering enough. After gaining strength, it was time to take revenge and feel good about it. You also made the protagonist more miserable than Han Li, so you gave the protagonist a golden finger in vain. Stop talking nonsense for a long time, the plot is really boring now. I find that many authors are as creative and imaginative as a farmer who thinks the emperor is a golden hoe for hoeing the ground. I don't have enough imagination and creativity, maybe it's because I'm living too hard in reality, and I have a petty attitude.

This book is very good. Don't listen to me, author. If you really want to write with fewer or no women, it will become increasingly difficult for you to write in the future. The subsequent plots will definitely require more and more creativity. Women can at least give you buffer time. Xuan Gu Zhuan can't write a lesson from the past. Women, as long as there are not too many plots, everyone will understand by then. If there is no buffer, if there is too much water, people will run away. Just be careful about the scale. You can't just give up your backup methods just because of God🐢. When the time comes, you will not be able to write the content and write randomly, and then everyone will be even more disappointed. Compared with your discontinuation of updates, everyone can understand the beauty of writing. Come on.

How could the ancient demon be in the combined stage and be trapped in the lower realm of his body? Yin Yue, who leads Xia Jia in the spirit world, was only in the Void Refining stage at his peak.

Yes, except for the book Xuan Gu and Wen Tianren, this one is the one that suits my taste the most. The pace is moderate and the writing is okay. However, the protagonist's character is too low and has no characteristics, like Han Li, number two. As the young master of the Wanfamen, the B level cannot be too low. The protagonist's personality must be appropriately strong to distinguish him from Han Li. Finally, if the relationship with the Korean model worker continues to be a fair deal, I'm afraid it will be called an old slave novel... The author can adjust the relationship between the two appropriately. It is meaningless and impossible to be a true brother with the model worker. It is best to cheat him from time to time, and give him some benefits appropriately. The degree of friend and enemy must be well controlled to be interesting.

There are so many mortals in this group, there are already more than two hundred books waiting to be read

Can you be more rigorous and differentiate between him and her? Every time you see a female character appear, he is very funny.

Good guy, I haven't subscribed since 280, but after finishing my meal, it's free.

As the title says, Goldfinger and the plot are both pretty good, but the title is really bad. It's a low-quality assimilation text that doesn't reflect the protagonist's cheating. The collection ratio of this book is actually quite high among mortal fans. I suggest that the author change his name and the results should be better. "Mortal: Fellow Taoist, you really have to thank me" "Mortal: I rely on gratitude to cultivate immortality" These and other things, as for the Palm Palm Vase, you can mention it at the beginning of the introduction, it is also an important point. A little suggestion, the author can refer to it

Why doesn't the protagonist copy the cultivation physique? Isn't it possible that golden fingers can copy various physiques? Also, the medicine garden in Xutian Temple only obtained Jiuqu Spiritual Ginseng. Other spiritual medicines lost to the outside world, wouldn't the Spiritual Fruit Tree take it? Among them is the longevity tree. Manbeard is fighting the monsters guarding the longevity fruit tree, hoping to get the longevity fruit on the tree to refine elixirs that increase lifespan. Can the protagonist cut off the root of a longevity fruit tree later? After that, you can cultivate the longevity tree outside and get the longevity fruit to refine the elixir. Pills that increase lifespan are very rare outside, and can be exchanged for a large number of treasures in Nascent Soul. You can also buy sky-high price spiritual stones at outside auctions, or trade various needed items at various trade fairs.

This book is quite good, unlike some books that always come to mind and are read by all women. It's really good. I read so many annoying things, but this is the first time I can read it so smoothly. Whether it's strategy or other aspects, it's still good. I hope you can continue to work hard in the future. The only drawback is that there are so few. All of a sudden it was gone again. I hope the update will be speeded up, otherwise I will just put it in my favorites and gather dust after waiting for a long time. Again, as long as the heroine doesn't charge too much, I feel pretty good. There are more than 80 photos of interactions with the heroine, and they are normal in reality. There is nothing abnormal about them, which is pretty good. Unlike some novels, there are only two or three pictures in less than ten, which is so mindless. This is the real thing, really written for the purpose of cultivating immortality.

Why don't you want to watch Tiannan when you feel it?

Won't you accept Ling Yuling? I really like her.

Xutian Temple is full of chatter about chariots and wheels 😐

Can Mening be taken as a concubine? , The original work was so miserable by Zi Ling pue p

I saw it on Douyin, it looks a bit like it!

If I am a lunatic when ascending, I should seek out Yunlu to obtain the true scriptures, the yin and yang turning method, and there should be bonuses for women in palace costumes and Han Li 😄😄

Song Yu is the most popular book in this book, but so far there is no emotional connection with Song Yu 🙂

So scary

Limited exemption🤭

"Mortal Plum Ningxiu Immortal Biography"

Is the heroine the old demon Yunlu? It's not that I don't watch it

More than 300 of them have not yet reached the spiritual world.

When will the boring plot end?

Mortals make a modified narration system, make pranks, play pranks, make fun of Han Paopao and the natives, plunder resources and cultivate mana

Stone butterfly? Why is it always a stone dish?