My Cultivation with the Immortal Maidens

The title of the book deletes the words "me" and "me", and it becomes another book.

Opinions from a frail and sick reader: People with a disease like this that cannot do strenuous exercise generally cannot have violent mood swings, such as anger and sadness. Anger will cause the blood in the body to rush to the head and brain, which is strenuous exercise for the body. Sadness will cause heart failure, weakened body functions, and some minor illnesses will occur in the upper body, and then break out together with the disease. So it's a bit unacceptable to see the protagonist venting his emotions, but it's okay. I'll just patch it up later. Come on author💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪

Why do you keep emphasizing on the short life span and low self-esteem? Not to mention that the male protagonist has a system, but just talk about the male protagonist's previous black boss temperament. His character is a bit distorted. He was fine before, but recently he has been really screwed up and bitched. In recent chapters, I heard that someone likes Miss Saint, just like the Japanese male protagonist, but you didn't tell the name or the situation, so you just left it there with low self-esteem, occupying the toilet and not shitting, and became FW. You have to know that the male protagonist you created is a fierce godfather, not an otaku with low self-esteem. Even if you don't let them find a male protagonist so early because of the outline, you can also use family setting events to prevent them from looking for him. Tiantian is full of nonsense, and the more I watch it, the more I feel that the male protagonist is like a scumbag from Japan (Makoto, Yuu, etc.) Who is engaging in pua. The male protagonist can be like Zhishen, but he has to consume the male protagonist's character. Stop doing this and think about it carefully.

I don't agree that the heroine doesn't have Xuanyuan Mingzhu and Xiao Xiyue

I finally understand, this is a stock trading article, everyone, run!

The author may have maliciously influenced the pace of this book. Although the subject matter and routines are relatively old-fashioned, the author's writing style is very good and he has a good grasp of the rhythm. Even though it is not as bad as others say, this book is still very well written.

The heroine's reaction to being possessed is too bland. This is possession. A person has appeared in her body out of thin air, and she is completely deprived of control of her body. Then the protagonist is willing to teach him martial arts in just a few words. To be honest, is this reasonable?

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To be honest, I had sex with someone for 6 hours out of nowhere, and then walked away. During this period, I had to eat and drink, and I had to be taught her martial arts. . . .

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