My Romance Is a Little Unusual

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Dear friends, is there any novel about chasing your husband in the crematorium? I feel like I am addicted to it. The more I look at it, the more I look up to it

The persona has collapsed. The antonym of aloof is short and hot. So does Senior Su need to have an amputation surgery first?

Many people think that the breakup plot is "inexplicable" or poisonous But I think this is the essence of the book. The most appropriate sentence to use is the junior student's sentence "Is it a misunderstanding, does it matter?" Yes, the male protagonist shows the emotions that a person should have. Why do I have to forgive if it is a misunderstanding? Although it was a misunderstanding, Yunqing did have to bear the consequences for his mistakes. In the end, Yunqing also understood what true possession is because of loss. In my opinion, it is a very good sublimation. In reality, I have an intuition that without this breakup plot, it would be impossible for the male protagonist and Yun Qing to achieve success. Some comments say that the male protagonist's character is vague, but in my opinion it is very clear. This male protagonist is very shrewd and knows how to calculate, but he is not a tool man, neither a rational tool man nor a systematic tool man. Because the male protagonist written by the author has emotions that the male protagonists in many works do not have, this emotion is very important. He shows us a person whose EQ and IQ are slightly higher than human beings, rather than a tool to show off and slap in the face or to advance the plot of attacking girls. I find every emotion of the male protagonist excusable. If I put myself in his shoes, I might also feel the same emotion in this situation. Compared with the Empress's book, this book has indeed improved a lot. It has improved by leaps and bounds. I would like to ask how the author has improved so much? After reading some comment areas, I found that some people have a misunderstanding, that is, why do you require men to have pure intentions when pursuing women? Yes, the protagonist started pursuing Yunqing because of the system's mission, but is this wrong? The protagonist neither cheated for money nor cheated for sex. I don't know how to tell that it hurt. If the protagonist later gives up, you can say that this is wrong, but what is wrong is the behavior of starting to give up, not the pursuit that is not simple. But here there is only pursuit that is not pure, and there is no behavior of starting from chaos and finally giving up. This is also done by Yunqing himself, so the protagonist is right. To be honest, it is simply embarrassing for you to demand that the pursuer's purpose be pure. 100% Of the people in the world cannot be pure when pursuing someone. Yes, that is 100%. After all, it was just the pursuit stage. If you are really pure, you need to be careful not to be a licker. Only licking a dog will make you feel pure.

Today two of my good friends broke up (one male and one female). Don't think wrongly. I successfully persuaded him and her by relying on the knowledge in the author's book. Sure enough, reading novels is still useful. Although I have been single for 19 years, women will only affect my hand speed in playing games 🤓🤓🤓

Xiao Yi clung to Code Ziji's body with difficulty. "Can you please stop clinging to me all the time? It's very heavy." Codeword Ji shook her hair and said softly to Xiao Yi. Xiao Yi stayed there quietly without making a sound. The rain suddenly started falling and fell on the ground, making a pitter-patter sound. "You are so heavy, can you please stop being on me?" Codeword Ji spoke out again. "But..." Xiao Yi lowered his head and said aggrievedly: "I want to protect you from the rain."

Sorry, I only saw Chapter 297 "Countdown to the Scumbag" and gave up. Let's talk about the advantages of this book first: many people are criticizing the male protagonist for being too weak, that's right. But compared to "Long Aotian's Ruthless Harem Harvester", at least I saw something different. The author had his own thinking, so that there was a fierce chemical reaction when facing each heroine, making each heroine an existence independent of the plot and not attached to the protagonist, making every small climax vivid and interesting. Secondly, the author has done a good job in writing the characters of each woman. At least most of them have distinct personalities and can form a picture in their mind. The plot is also remarkable. The ways to pursue each heroine are all based on the plot and are not formulaic, which is also an advantage. The next step is the shortcomings. First of all, there is the issue of character: 1️⃣. Male protagonist: I believe readers have their own evaluation of him, so I don't need to say more. My biggest impression of him is that he has no principles. 2️⃣. Su Yunqing: As the number one heroine, she is actually very important. The height of this role actually indirectly determines the height of subsequent characters. The male protagonist pursues the second female protagonist - flower field + wedding, and the male protagonist pursues the fourth female protagonist - fireworks + peach forest. So what about the male protagonist pursuing the female protagonist? CPU! That's right, it's the CPU! Some readers will argue with me and say, isn't there still stage singing and wooing? The problem is that there is no success. Don't tell me how much effort the male protagonist has wasted, working as an insider, doing whatever he wants, sketching and so on. It's useless. For the readers and the characters themselves, the contrast is suddenly widened. The pursuit of the female lead is indeed too low. That sentence of "Xiao Yi, you won't make me sad again, right?", Of course, good guy, one or two of the girl's roommates turned to the enemy, and her own sister directly bullied her. To sum up this character in one sentence - pure🤡. And this clown mask was put on by the author himself. 3️⃣. Jiang Qingyi: This may be the most successfully created character in this book. The quiet and gentle image appears on the paper in pure white moonlight. The male protagonist's pursuit of her is also logical, and there is really nothing to complain about. But when we come back, we have to spray the first girl again. As the first girl came first, the second girl is almost becoming the main wife. They have a wedding, cohabitation, and transportation to and from get off work. What about the first girl? Become pure again. 4️⃣. Su Yunqing: Personally, I think this is the biggest and biggest poisonous point. The persona of extreme girl control + frigidity + queen can be said to be a complete failure. According to the system's scoring standards, I actually think the moment she took the initiative to climb into the male protagonist's bed should have been 100%. Let's go over it from the beginning. Because of the girl's controlling nature, the male protagonist and the female protagonist are separated → the male protagonist becomes the majority shareholder of her company → they start acting with each other → the memory card is replaced. So far, everything is fine, the characters are complete and the plot is interesting. Then the author started to work hard... After the memory replacement card ended, there was no explanation of the change in the third female protagonist's mentality. There was no description at all, and she began to like the male protagonist. (Actually, it can be seen from the previous plot that the male protagonist deliberately exposed himself to the psychiatrist and acted with Zhao Yaxin. He wanted to dig a hole for the third female protagonist, so that the third female protagonist would feel frustrated and win the queen's character. In the end, he probably failed in writing, and I don't know how he succeeded.) Judging from the result, the third female protagonist suddenly developed a deep interest in the male protagonist. All I can say is: No! Often! Sudden! Wu! Even if you add a little more psychological description, it won't be like this. After that, the attributes of the sister control were not mentioned again, as if the author had forgotten. Then I went to Paris. The author also forgot about the attributes of the queen. He completely followed the template of his sister Su Yunqing, with a (former) queen acting coquettishly and cutely. At the end, there is still no psychological description and she climbs into the bed of the male protagonist (brother-in-law)... I am taking the liberty... The biggest poisonous point is here. After crawling into bed, the woman takes anti-fetal pills every day, trying to secretly give birth to the child behind the male protagonist's back... ! ! ! W! ! ! T! ! ! F? ? ? Even in a novel, having a child is a very serious issue! She can't just say "I won't abort this child, I don't need you to be responsible." First, for a man, it doesn't mean that you can just ignore it if you tell me not to care about it. This doesn't mean that you have to raise a kitten or puppy. They are your own flesh and blood, and they are also a responsibility! Second, for a child, if you can't give her a complete family, why should she suffer? I have discarded many similar novels immediately after seeing this kind of plot. I can only say that when such a woman says such words, she only has herself in mind, and does not consider her husband or children at all. She is so selfish and terrible! The third female in this article did not consider her sister at all. Is this the brain circuit that a listed CEO should have? Explode! Here, female one again 🤡. Summary in one sentence: The character structure has seriously collapsed, the plot connection is poor, and the three views are horribly distorted. 5️⃣. Zhao Yaxin: This character design problem is not big. They are all in the same circle (402 dormitory). The male protagonist's feelings for her are not unknown and there is no sense of surprise. The only problem is that when the male protagonist expresses his love, the fourth female protagonist asks the whole city to know. I really don't understand what kind of operation and psychology this is. I don't even understand why the fourth female protagonist didn't accept the male protagonist before (I humbly ask for advice). The character of the fourth female character is a money worshiper, but she also has a bottom line and dignity. She is well portrayed, so I can't understand her above-mentioned operations. 6️⃣. Xiao Xiaoxiao: 🤡No. 2. She appeared in 1/3 of the plot, and after 1/2 she almost disappeared. What happened? What is not revealed will eventually be forgotten by the author? The protagonist's promises to her are rarely fulfilled (such as a phone call every day), and even the second female lead's wedding bracelet is hers. She really can't bear to change it to another protagonist, right? 7️⃣. Shen Chanyi: The author thinks that her portrayal failed, but I actually think it's pretty good. It's just that the author's target is Harley Quinn, which I don't think is appropriate. She is more like a rational person, a pitiful super yandere. If done well, this can be written as another theme of redemption, instead of flocking to the male protagonist for unknown reasons. In this way, the look and feel is more like a sister than a girlfriend. In terms of character design, there is no problem. The problem is the plot, which will be discussed in detail later. Next is the plot. To be honest, there are really many flaws. 1️⃣. The biggest problem in this article is the system. Countless people in the book review area complained about "the system's sense of presence is too low", which is really criticized. The male protagonist said at the beginning of the article that this system seems to want to cultivate him into a scumbag. In addition, the author does not want to be so tough in the male protagonist's design, so the system is obviously a good breakthrough. For example, you clearly have a love cheating device in your mind. After all, this cheating device does not give you the magic tool to increase your favorability, but only gives you the skill to show off and money. Well, talent and money are naturally necessary to chase girls, but these are all indirect! I think Shen Chanyi's recovery card is very "systematic". This is what a scumbag system should do. There is really nothing that other systems should do. Isn't your main job supposed to assist the male protagonist in improving his favorability, or to turn danger into danger in the Shura field that you cannot avoid? Don't even let go of P at the critical moment! What's the use of being proficient in French, Russian, and Kung Fu to help me pursue my sister? Didn't even use it twice! 2️⃣. Inappropriate details. It's hard to say this. Strictly speaking, I don't blame the author. Looking at her PS, it seems that many people at the time thought some of the plots were unprofessional, which also led to the possibility that she could only skip the places where she wanted to show off her talents. For example, the part about Senior Jiang's enemy subduing the law was obviously written very sloppily, as if it was just going through the motions. After reading PS, many people thought she went off topic, so to be fair, just like what the author said, you will get tired of watching the protagonist and the girl getting tired of it every day without foreshadowing, and people don't let her foreshadow it. This is really difficult for an author to handle. This is indeed a problem in the book, but it is not your problem, and I don't blame you. 3️⃣. Deliberately. This is reflected when Su Yunqing climbs on the bed. It is obvious that there are two big hands pushing behind, so that the audience can see the flaw. The consequence of writing this way is that the male protagonist seems to have no bottom line (not just here, but also in various other ways later), and the female protagonist once again becomes 🤡. You have to say that Su Yunqing had any provocative behavior before, or that he had psychological descriptions and struggles, which is fine, but in the end, he didn't, so he started directly. Suddenly, the characters of the three parties were damaged at the same time. There are also younger sisters Xiaoxiao, Shen Chanyi and even female secretary. It seems that the author just abandoned it after he felt it was difficult to write the plot. Not to mention Su Xiaoxiao's immediate disappearance, Shen Chanyi's character design in the early stage is full, both good and evil, a little crazy, sober and cute, and her life experience is a little pitiful. As a result, in the later period, the pure NPC, the classroom - milk, was gone. It wasn't until the author finished dealing with other emotional lines that he thought of her. But even so, Shen Chanyi's description will still not make people feel boring, because many side descriptions are actually very interesting. I helped the male protagonist to cure the villain in the class who was spreading rumors, but because I was worried about the male protagonist, I made a plan to go to the casino alone. I think it's a very charming character. The problem is that there are too few positive descriptions, and there are problems with the psychological description of the male protagonist, which makes the two people not ambiguous at all, more like brother and sister. I think this sense of distance is caused deliberately by the author. To be honest, another male protagonist might be philanthropic, and knowing that she might commit suicide in the future and find a way to save her, he would never avoid it just because of danger. This is not the behavior a male protagonist should do. Why? This is my opinion - because you are writing a harem novel! The first thing the male protagonist of a harem novel has to do is to create a persona that "can't have sex with other people." I have also read the "Female Apprentices All Want to Kill Me" you recommended and subscribed to it. The male protagonist in it is pretty good. This is not the "difference between fairy tales and urban novels", this is the problem of shaping your character, or the same problem - too deliberate. The male protagonist in "Female Apprentice" gives me, the reader, a feeling of "I can't do it", so that I can "convince the crowd (audience)!" Otherwise, if you write a harem novel, readers will have a mentality of "I can do it," and "No! Why should he?" The male protagonist of a harem novel must have a certain degree of personality charm, which can at least be felt by readers. This is what I'm talking about, why no matter who the male protagonist is, he won't stay away from Shen Chanyi. What he did was not what a "male protagonist" should do. In fact, I am a bit mean when I say this. The author's idea is to make the novel as real as possible (this can be seen from her PS). She wants the male protagonist to be more real, more three-dimensional, and more like an ordinary person with real flesh and blood, who can also be afraid and frightened. This idea is very good! But! But. I think you portrayed the character in the wrong place, "If he retreats in such a place, is he still the male protagonist?" The image may be more three-dimensional, but it should be negative... That is, I think this is deliberately based on the character I want to create. The above is my book review. Because I haven't finished reading it, I subscribed to 200 chapters. Thank you for your companionship. Overall, the book "My Love Painting Style is Somewhat Abnormal" is quite good, and the viewing experience is okay. If I were to rate it, I would give it a 4 (5 points). If it weren't for Su Yunqing's major poisonous point, I would definitely finish it. I feel sorry for our most pitiful female lead - Yunqing again, hahahaha.

Senior sister after the collapse

The books written by you female authors are so fucking irritating, I won't read them anymore.