My Sworn Enemy Became My Dao Companion

First of all, I have never been an author, but I want to say, is it difficult to write 100 chapters a day? It's not that I am being unreasonable. After all, I said at the beginning that I have never been an author.

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I think the quality of this novel cannot be better because of this label. It is a martial arts novel about gratification and revenge, with a little bit of bad taste in training enemies. The subject matter itself is very novel, and the author's writing style is also unique. I also feel pity for the little fox in the novel, but how can he be classified in a light novel? Do you know how I found this book? I wanted to read some Japanese light novels or anime, and among a bunch of campus romances, I suddenly came across a light novel that didn't look like a romance novel. I clicked in to read it out of curiosity. The title of this book is Tang. When I first started reading, I just read this book with the idea of ​​seeing how Xiaobai writes martial arts light novels. I can continue watching it because I am concerned about where the little fox will go in the future and whether he will be treated well by the male protagonist. Who knew that the author's writing was sharp, and he wrote about the grievances of the little fox being left behind, the confusion of being trapped in the enemy's house and unable to see the future, and the protagonist's slightly perverted but very enjoyable desire to possess and control the little fox and other good women. When the middle cult found the little fox, I thought the little fox would run away, but when he reported it to the protagonist instead, I suddenly realized that the little fox had almost been transformed into his shape by the male protagonist. Although the other female characters in the novel are not as deeply portrayed as the little fox, I think it is mainly because the little fox appears longer and meets earlier, so the portrayal is deeper, rather than the author's lack of writing power that cannot portray the Taoist priest, master, and heroine brilliantly. This book has a lot of fun and benefits, as well as a plot and a portrayal of the character's psychology that gradually changes as he gets along with the protagonist. You can see the character's mood at that time from the small things. For example, the little fox is no longer afraid of the protagonist hugging him to sleep at night. For example, the little fox begins to dare to make requests to the protagonist instead of being obedient like when he first came here. In this book, I can find the strange feeling of having a little girl growing up and falling in love. It feels like getting married first. It has the feeling of late love, but it is more delicate than those written by female channel authors. The female protagonist is not mindless but helpless. The male protagonist is not a mating machine but gradually falls in love with this poor egg who was the enemy in the past life while getting along with the cute little fox, and is determined to possess her. This book may not reach the heights of JX masters and Guan Guan masters, but I think it is still a good book worth spending money to read. I am very happy to follow the book during this period, and I sympathize with the author's plight. I will give you all the monthly recommendation votes I can give. I also hope that the author will not supervise the book or the book will be unfinished, so that the book can be launched smoothly, so that we can be lucky enough to see the ending of the lovely characters like the little fox. This is my biggest expectation for the author.

I'm so tired from reading this book that I'm going to complain about it. I have reached chapter 307. Except for Ming Ning, none of the other female protagonists are sincere, let alone Zhu E. She is the result of pure demon sect brainwashing and identity worship. The male protagonist looks like a trainer throughout the whole process. No matter how much the author defends the process of first hating and then falling in love, in my opinion, it is Stockholm. I really didn't have the courage to continue watching it. The subject matter itself was very interesting, but the writing style and character design were awkward and awkward. I still wanted to watch some love dramas where the relationship between men and women develops normally and equally. Finally, I would like to give you a piece of advice based on my personal opinion. If you want to write a story about hating first and then loving, don't make the status of the male and female protagonists unequal. Otherwise, no matter how you send candy later, I will feel that it is the result of the male protagonist's pua. For example, the little fox, Nu Guan and Zhu E in the book. Especially the little fox, who obeys her words and lowers her eyebrows and nods. Although she looks docile and obedient, it also conceals her true face. Which gentleness is pretended and which is true feelings? I can't tell the reader, it's like there's a thorn stuck in it, and the character's personality makes it difficult to trust no matter how much love is said in the future. This can be regarded as a point of abandonment of the book. The author's writing style is still good, and the emotions are very delicate. I can only say that it is suitable for the right people to read. Come on, I look forward to your next work.

After reading almost 400 chapters, I felt like the male protagonist was suffering from schizophrenia. His IQ was high and low. He planned everything for a long time and wrote about how smart and smart he was. Finally, he released An Hou directly from the underground palace without any back-up, and the male protagonist continued to be her dog. As for his personality, he is purely bully and afraid of the strong, with no personality charm at all. In this life, Xiao Yin did nothing but had her house confiscated, and then the male protagonist kept bullying her. Da Yin antagonized the male protagonist several times in the early stage, but never to the point of breaking out. She was even willing to help the male protagonist and summon Min He's soul. The real reason she wanted to kill the male protagonist was in Chapter 55. After the male protagonist's master influenced her, she planned to kill the male protagonist. But it was only two times, and they were all played out in just one sentence. The impression given to me as a reader is that she poses no threat to the male protagonist at all. The male protagonist will only show off his power in front of the big and small Yins. The male protagonist's master wants the male protagonist to become a monk. The male protagonist will just gently expose it and say that he will be a slave, and there will be no follow-up. There is also Queen An, who has been disgusting the male protagonist, but in the end, the male protagonist can only lick her. The result is that the image of the male protagonist becomes a bully and a loser who is afraid of the strong. The male protagonist tortures Da Yin without any threat. The hero almost killed King Annan and Queen An, who had always been disgusted by the hero, so the hero could only act like a coward and lick these women obediently. The strong draw their swords at the stronger, and the weak draw their swords at the weaker. The male protagonist does whatever he wants, just like a naughty child running rampant under the protection of his parents (the author), but in essence, he is just a coward who only dares to bully the weak. Second supplement: Is it necessary to write about the four loves? A bit ex. I clicked on this several times and couldn't stand it.

Heart line ceiling. It is no exaggeration to describe the heroines as each having their own merits. Each character is very fleshed out. Enemies turn into lovers, this is the seventh type of love! Without spoiling too much, I can only say that the author has a very good grasp of this twisted emotion, and there are also various palace battles + Shura fields (50% depends on Da Yin). The main thing I want to complain about is the plot. I don't have a good grasp of the map, and I missed something as soon as I left the capital. In fact, entering the underground palace has already begun to take shape, and the transition is very abrupt; the underworld chapter is somewhat passable. When he left the city, he was chased by Magpie Pavilion and collapsed. I always suspect that I missed Chapter 10, resulting in no idea of ​​the new pictures, and a lack of environmental description and foreshadowing. At the same time, the growth of force is not smooth, and the sense of fracture becomes more obvious. "Xi Que Pavilion Chase: Why was he suddenly seriously injured by a group of minions who were killing him in front of him?" "Exterminator: Huh? The big boss that has been prepared for so long is just sent away like this?" Fighting Wu Buyu: What, I am the best in the world? When did the hero lose his heart? Ah, win? What's the point of winning the sword? Isn't it still the best to be beaten?" Then it's crazy. Originally, this aspect was very good in the early stage, and there was basically no redundancy. Even the settings such as Yin Yang Jue of Hatred and Infusing Qi were no longer mentioned after ascending to the fourth level; but later on, various inner demons and obsessions unfolded along with the map. Taiyi swore to ask God to support the anvil, and every word was messed up. Usually I would crush him with one finger, but suddenly a big boss came and I was seriously injured. There was no sense of pressure from an imminent storm, it was quite sudden. The only reason why I can't beat it: the plot requires it. In general, the normal process is a big picture. I usually brush up my favorability of NPC tasks, improve the details of the map, follow the guide to clear one or two small dungeons, and finally defeat the bottom boss. After finishing the game, open a new picture and continue the main story. This book is just a small copy, with no cause and effect connected in series. If you encounter one on the way, you will read it casually, and it will introduce a bunch of unsolved mysteries. Although the details are true, the author's grasp of the overall situation still needs to be strengthened. In fact, if you don't know how to write about big events, you can write less, and it would be nice to have a more cheerful atmosphere. This is really a bit like picking up sesame seeds and throwing away watermelons. The level of martial arts has not improved after 800 chapters. The meaningless battles and bluntly added settings have taken away the emotional scenes that it is good at. I have read the latest 600 chapters so far, and I couldn't bear to abandon the book because the emotional scenes were so good. This is truly a deep responsibility for love!

The book is quite good. Don't listen to some random opinions. No one will really read it until you listen to it. Most people won't comment after reading it. Survivor bias. Only when things are forced will you get things done.

I was tricked into the comment section. The writing is not ugly, but it is quite strange and makes it uncomfortable to read. Almost all the characters in the book are naughty people. The male protagonist is portrayed as a hard-hit person. He has a gentle mind like a woman. He loves and cares for someone at all times. He feels bitter about the sins of his previous life from time to time. He is also keen to replace communication with sudden and forced kisses (really kissing out of nowhere, the tyrant is a man). Forget it. The most unacceptable thing is that the male protagonist has obviously had a fight (with a previous life), but he is passive again and has no initiative at all except to attract girls. I can only say that the comment section is quite strict, but this type of book is indeed rare. Let's have a brainwave with the author, and you will probably find it interesting.

I believe that I, like many people, saw posts saying that this book is non-toxic, and also saw people saying that this book is not good-looking, but someone commented below that "you will know after you read it." Then I read it, and I saw Chapter 450. To be honest, it didn't look good. The more poison points you read after paying, the denser the poison points became (emphasis added: the poison points are dense), so I was so angry that I abandoned the book. The following are the poisonous points that I personally think: 1. The male protagonist is poorly portrayed, he has a nagging character who is born and humble. The early tone of the book is about forcefully accepting girls. Logically speaking, the male protagonist should be stronger. Even if he wants to become gentle, he won't make a 180-degree turn and become a licking dog with caring eyes. But in the later stage, the women were all jealous and vying for the upper hand. The male protagonist tried his best to coax the women. He would only be strong in front of the big and small Yin, and he would not have the majesty of the head of the family in front of other women. In the early stage, the fox was like a concubine and how she succumbed to the male protagonist. In the later stage, the male protagonist was like a concubine and how she succumbed to other female protagonists. 2. The branch line is too lengthy. The branch plots are described in great detail, like a manual. Various settings, environments, characters, and their personalities are described in great detail. There are more than a dozen chapters in length. But it has no impact on the main plot. In Confidence, the male protagonist has not become stronger, the female protagonist has not increased, the relationship has not deepened, and some female characters have not even been seen. Then the main plot only has a few chapters, and this one is over. The writing and ink are far less than the branch plots. 3. I especially like to write about enlightenment, enlightenment, and Zen. In fact, this kind of thing is very boring to us. Even if you tell us, we won't understand it. I came to read the novel, what kind of enlightenment do I want? I want to be happy, can you make me happy? If I want to be educated, can't I read textbooks? 4. The combat power has collapsed, and the male protagonist feels that he has been stuck at level 4 for a century. Before abandoning the book, the male protagonist was still at level 4, and when he first entered level 4, the protagonist could hit three. After reaching level 4, one level 4 plus level 5 could seriously injure the protagonist? 5. Train women in the early stage and train men in the later stage. To be honest, the early stage is just to train Xiao Yin. Then he conquered a queen. Be stronger with them. But then the male protagonist is all kinds of flattering and flattering. In the Shura field, he is afraid of saying the wrong thing or making someone unhappy. If you were the male protagonist in this kind of environment, would you be happy? I personally feel that this kind of plot is extremely unpleasant. I am holding up 5 o'clock. In the early stage, when I enjoyed watching it, I would also vote for the author, and I was very willing to support the author, even if it was a little bit vicious, I would get over it. I write reading points not to disparage, but to enable many readers like me to avoid novels they don't like. After all, this is the starting point, it is paid, and the money cannot be refunded. Many readers are students and spend their parents' money. Only by listing the poisonous points in the book's post in advance can we, the readers, better screen the works. This is my original intention to list the poisonous points of this book.

In fact, I haven't understood the stories you wrote since the protagonist started entering the world. From time to time, a new name will appear, and what is being fought, because I can't understand what is being fought. I just read it at the speed of light and then look at the emotional line.