A Blessing of Good Food for My Nun Sister

I feel that it's a bit inconsistent for a nun to be betrayed by her family and give up. It's a bit rude to ignore someone who is not related by blood =_= Princess Wencheng, who clearly knows that five people are sealing evil spirits and locking people in the church for life The five of them took advantage of the cook to go down the mountain to recuperate, and pulled the protagonist to take turns to remove the seal and summon the evil god. Then the evil god and the protagonist restored their divine power and finally overthrew this B world👆 (Purely personal opinion, please continue reading, don't argue, I don't mean to say that this book is bad)

Wc, who said this number will no longer be used?

Anjie

Congratulations on the return of Golden Retriever ✔I am so grateful that I can't express my gratitude in words/@＋——;

This feels quite similar.

After taking a quick look at the previous comments, I can see that the author probably doesn't read the comments very much. From the perspective of reading the book, it feels like the protagonists suddenly pop up one page at a time in the second chapter. The name is not easy to remember either, so it just blinds people. Can't tell who is who, it affects the senses. You have to think that this is not an anime or manga. Just one adjective and the next character will appear. Man, this is a novel. Readers will forget about it after turning two pages. In fact, it is completely possible for the other characters not to appear in the first few chapters, and only the character who chases the male protagonist appears, and then the plot begins and the character image is created. It would be nice if the other characters were introduced slowly later. Of course I am not preaching to the author to do this, I am just asking if there is a better way to start the chapter, and I also want to see what other people have different ideas.

Celebrate, the protagonist is no longer a virgin

I'm just talking about a possibility, just a possibility. The male protagonist doesn't have a character card.

There is nothing wrong with the first chapter. In the second chapter, it can be seen that the author really wanted to briefly outline several female characters, but it felt very strange. When it comes to saying that Anjie is a tsundere, the author doesn't use the power of writing to show it clearly. She is simply willful and has a bad mouth. It's good to be astringent, but the author's use of language is unsatisfactory.

I feel like when I write about Chinese food, I always write that the protagonist only needs one knife to handle everything. But in fact, there are many kinds of kitchen knives to choose from in Chinese food. Some chefs in Chinese restaurants now don't care whether they really have to use Chinese kitchen knives. As long as they are helpful for cooking, they use Western, Japanese, and even more weird ones.