The Road to Immortality Begins with a Blind Man at a Medicine Shop

The author's most successful work is still his first book, The Hunter. What makes it successful? First, the premise is very appealing. It starts from humble beginnings, the overpowered abilities are just right, and the concept of ghosts is very interesting, giving the reader a sense of familiarity.

It has quite a few minor flaws, and is much worse than the previous book. What have you been through to cause your writing to deteriorate?

The author has made the same mistake as in his previous two books, insisting on portraying a divide between immortals and mortals. It's a fictional world; the author should have the final say on how to write it. Read more of Chen Dong's novels; even at high levels of combat, characters still possess all human emotions, and these emotions are even more prominent.

Chapter 31 truly disgusted me. So what if you have ulterior motives? It's immoral, but it aligns with male nature. And you have to come up with the excuse of future self-interest, "having no choice" but to marry this beauty. In the previous chapters, you were saying you'd lie low and secretly develop your strength, and now you can't resist showing off your muscles to this beauty?

The author wanted to portray the evil in human nature and highlight the protagonist's predicament, but dude, real life is tough enough as it is, enough is enough.

I'm having a hard time reading chapter 14. Some people in the comments think the protagonist is stupid, and I agree. Or maybe the author has a problem with the writing. I might not be as smart as the protagonist, and I hope he's intelligent, since I'm reading a novel. So far in the story, the protagonist, who has grasped the main information, has failed to handle the problems effectively.

This heartwarming battle-for-dominance story is so satisfying! I haven't read anything this heartwarming in ages. I hate those overpowered protagonists who are always saying they're invincible. They could easily play it safe and develop their strength, but instead they go around causing trouble, provoking enemies everywhere, and spouting nonsense. I've been reading for 15 years, and this is the only book on Qidian that I'm currently paying to read. It's exactly what I've been looking for.

It's so frustrating to read. Other people's stories of unresolved grievances are so captivating, you can't even put them down. This kind of unresolved grievance writing makes me not want to read any further.

What kind of nonsense is this? The protagonist can even have his soul leave his body, and he sees where they hid their money. Why not just gather a few more people to find them? Instead, he's thinking of protecting himself, yet he also wants someone else's martial arts techniques. He only acts rashly when they're almost in prison. 😰😰😰

I'm into the plot, but why is there always this kind of plot? It's one thing for The Hunter, but it's in this one too. I really don't like NTR (Netorare) stories.