Swallowed Star: Zhang Haobai

In the Earth Chapter in Swallowed Starry Sky, fists are too poisonous. Fighting monsters with knives, guns, and swords can save time and effort. You can use knives to break through the monster's neck, stomach or buttocks. How to fight with fists? Monsters are anywhere from a few meters to tens of meters in length. Can you kill it with several times or even ten times the strength? Just like the golden-horned giant beast, without the knife and gun given by Babata, neither Hong nor Thor could break its belly and seriously injure it. How would the protagonist fight with fists? Can hitting it on the head or belly break its defense?

Doesn't the genius battle require everyone to use the same body, and the test is to understand the rules? . The protagonist's genius battle emphasizes physical strength, and it is definitely not the so-called secret method to bless the body strength, because it is mentioned that the body strength is improved by using the All Souls Purple Blood Juice, and then it is also improved in the genius battle.

The Earth Chapter is by far the best fanfic, it is detailed and realistic. The upgrade makes sense. After entering the universe, the plot feels a bit thin. In fact, when doing training tasks, you can open a few longer dungeons and carefully write several stories and plots. For example, Dragon Tower Star, Xueluo Continent, and Magic Mountain can be written in detail and have more plots. But now it's time to upgrade the Territory Lord. The Territory Lord is in a period of strong military strength. It is recommended to write more copies. The quality of this fanfic seems to be good so far. I hope you can write it patiently and don't have to rush to upgrade it to become a classic work of the fanfic. For example, Lord of All Creations has been written for three years, and it is still very good.

The protagonist's understanding of the law is too slow. Although it is not low, the genius battle is about to begin. If we don't cheat the protagonist, it will be too late. Not to mention defeating Bolan, at least he has to enter the secret realm of Taichu, right?

Chapter 28 of Chapter 7 of the original book Endless Geniuses describes the battle of geniuses: Everyone has the same physical fitness. . If you say that the main character's skills can strengthen the understanding of the law, so I think it's okay, but the more I see the genius battle later, the more wrong it becomes.

Alas, I have gone astray as I write. The plot of Thunder World has reached its peak. In the original universe, when people did not understand the laws, but continued to use all their strength to cultivate the so-called seeds of laws, I had a hunch that the author would never be able to write anymore, because such plot development will only create more and more conflicts with the original plot. Sure enough, I scrolled through the table of contents to the end and looked at the comment area, which directly confirmed my feeling. It is a verification of the taste ability of an old book friend.

At the moment, I personally don't think it's too toxic. Many people criticize Zhang Hao for being a brainless licker and deliberately helping Luo Feng to awaken the spiritual master. I think he no longer regards himself as a villain, so he and Luo Feng are high school classmates, and they will face the Golden Horned Behemoth and future world beasts together. It is not that difficult to accept being friends with Luo Feng. And regarding the slow progress, I think it is because the author has set this up to neither big nor small, so the protagonist grows slowly along with the plot.

While not wanting to be an enemy of Luo Feng, you still find someone to fuck Luo Feng according to the original work. Isn't this sick? He even said that he was afraid of affecting Luo Feng's growth. . .

Tell me what you think about the fandom. Generally speaking, the plot needs to be well designed and interconnected, and the logic only needs to be acceptable on the surface. To use system flow, you need to have clear restrictions, conditions or costs. You cannot increase it too easily, otherwise your combat power will soon be out of balance. For example, a certain system can infinitely improve the perception, which is very exciting at first, but once you reach the universe, you must improve the perception of the laws. As a result, in order to maintain the feeling of pleasure, you have to practice the 10 laws of the star level, which seriously violates the logic of the original work. The same goes for the Earth Chapter. When the system comes in, you have to have subtle movement skills at the beginning, a high-level warrior. If you add it once, you have to have perfect movement skills, a warrior, and specialize in sword skills. If you do it again, you will be a god of war. With such rapid and unlimited improvement, there is no need to enter a martial arts gym, fight monsters, take risks and sell money, improve family life, buy cheat equipment, revenge, elite training camps, or apprenticeships. The system is so fast and awesome. It takes the protagonist a year to develop, and the system recommends the invincible God of War. Doesn't it mean everything? These rich plots have become meaningless and uninteresting due to the rapid improvement of the system. Many fans are like this. They create a system that improves quickly, but they are unwilling to create original plots. The design is to simply follow the original work and copy the original plot. This writing method is outdated. In the past few years, fans with high monthly votes have not written like this. For example, Lord of All Things has a lot of original plots, and the protagonist's cultivation route is also different from that of the original Luo Feng. The current Dou Zhan Yan Shen has a completely original plot and original training logic, and even the human race is separated from it. The levels need to be divided very carefully so that the protagonist always has something to do and is always improving. For example, in addition to the big level, there are also body skills, force generation, and law awareness, and then body skills are divided into proficiency, subtlety, perfection, and artistic conception. The force can be multiplied. The Nine Layers Thunder Knife is divided into nine layers. One layer increases the force by 0.7 Times. Then in the universe, the force in the universe can be up to 100 times, but there are new "levels" such as amplitude and gene multiples. Gene multiples are generally up to 100 times, but special beings can have 10081 times perfect genes, so the protagonist has to climb up the levels little by little for this new level. As a result, when we reach the master of the universe, we still have 100,000 times more genes. Let's keep working hard. I feel that since we are all fans, as long as it conforms to the basic logic of the original work, we can boldly imagine and design a plot and growth direction that is different from the original work. For fans, what everyone is interested in is the world created by the original novel, the gameplay, the plot, the aesthetics, the cool points, etc. Similar to a game, the protagonist of the original book plays it once as a warrior, and the fanfic takes the reader to play it again as a mage or other profession. I think this is one of the values ​​of fandom.

There are so many Devouring fans, but yours is the most novel and not poisonous. I hope the author will write more about the role of the clone to make this more interesting.