Swallowed Star: The Blade God King

To be honest, author, you don't need to push yourself so hard. Give yourself some breathing room. There's no need to force yourself to update at such a high intensity just for the sake of your fans. After all, we want quality to outweigh quantity. This is just my immature opinion. Okay, that's all I wanted to say. It's been quite a while since this chapter was posted. Have you rested yet?

The protagonist is now at the cosmic level. As a transmigrator, he should remember the original plot perfectly, since cultivation enhances memory; it's impossible for him to forget the original story in just a few decades. Furthermore, the protagonist should ideally be cultivating the essence of the Time Law, but in the latest chapter, he directly begins comprehending the second level of the…

After reading forty chapters, here are my thoughts. The author is clearly a novice. First, the shortcomings: the daily life descriptions are too drawn out and not concise enough, and there are almost no battle descriptions. The entire story is narrated (even the climactic scene of the genius battle is glossed over)... On the positive side, the logic is sound, the narrative is clear, and it starts with aliens... Overall, it's just average. Let's see if it can improve later...

The protagonist, at the level of a cosmic-level realm, is at best considered a genius within an immortal power, with a relatively high probability of breaking through to the Domain Lord level if he doesn't die. Yet, in 150 years, he breaks through from the Stellar Realm to the eighth level of the cosmic level, still within a cosmic-level power.

In the original work, Bai Kaluo was a cosmic-level being who had lived for tens of thousands of years when he first appeared. How could he possibly participate in the genius battle of Luo Feng's generation?

They actually created such trashy clones and didn't even arrange any heaven-defying inheritance. This means there's no way to achieve perfect genes before becoming a Universe Lord. Even if you could create dozens of clones, what's the use? A single claw of any random star beast is bigger than you; how can you compete?

I've only read a few chapters, and it seems pretty good. The only downside is that many paragraphs are too long, making it a bit tiring to read. It would be better if it could be divided into more shorter paragraphs...

With a lifespan of 100,000 years, he was already at the cosmic level when he appeared in the original work, so he shouldn't be in the same generation as Luo Feng.

Not bad, keep it up, don't spread any harmful content, it can become popular.

I have a question for the author: why didn't the Lord of the Illusionary Light Realm sell the Golden Leaf and buy a treasure to extend his lifespan and break through to immortality? A treasure that can help an immortal powerhouse break through could easily sell for hundreds of millions of Chaos Units. Couldn't he just buy some treasures to break through to the level of an immortal military lord? [Starting with lightning strike 🙂]