Swallowed Star: The Blade God King

To be honest, there is no need for you, the author, to work so hard. Give yourself a little buffer space. There is no need to keep forcing yourself to update intensively for the sake of fans. After all, we hope that quality is greater than quantity. This is my immature idea. Okay, I'm done. It's been quite a while since this chapter was released. Are you done? After the break, please update as soon as possible! The donkeys in the production team don't dare to rest like this (how well did I copy it)

The protagonist is now at the cosmic level. As a time traveler, he should remember the plot of the original work clearly. After all, practice can improve memory, and it is impossible to forget the plot of the original work in just a few decades. Also, it is best for the protagonist to cultivate the essence of the Law of Time. However, the protagonist of the latest chapter directly begins to comprehend the second level of the Ancestor Chaos Monument without comprehending the essence of the Law at all. This does not conform to the logic of a time traveler. The author has been very good in the past, but recently he has always unconsciously written the protagonist, a time traveler, as an indigenous person. This is not good and will reduce the reader's sense of involvement. Other aspects are very good, the logic is rigorous, the setting is good, and the plot is smooth. It is worth recommending.

After reading forty chapters, let me share my opinion. The author can clearly see the newbie. The first is the shortcomings: daily descriptions are too protracted and not concise enough. There are almost no battle descriptions. The whole story is narrated (the climax of the battle between geniuses is actually written in one stroke)... The good thing is that the logic is online, the narrative is clear, and the alien starts... Generally speaking, it is average. Let's see if we can improve in the later stages...

The protagonist is at the level of a universe-level domain. If he can survive, he is considered a genius in the immortal force. There is a high probability that the immortal will be able to break through the talent of the domain master. However, in 150 years, he breaks through from the first star to the eighth-level cosmic-level force and is still in the cosmic-level force. His mother's head was caught in the door before he could write this operation. It is normal to say that he is thirty to fifty thousand years old. One or two thousand years to be able to break through to the eighth level of the universe is already considered very good among immortal-level forces. Generally immortal, the direct disciples of the world lord are only at this level. They are not qualified to become the disciples of the world lord or even the domain lord. He can only become a universe-level disciple. This already shows that his talent is very small even if he becomes the domain lord level. The author will give a summary. The one hundred and fifty-year-old cosmic level, when he is Luo Feng, Luo Feng's own talent is already considered to be pretty good when he is at the planet level. Geniuses in the field of planet level understanding are rare among the immortal forces, and he has received most of the legacy of the immortals who are reluctant to become princes. He has enough money to buy treasures and it took more than a hundred years to break through to the cosmic level. Even with enough resources, he can quickly reach the cosmic level. Breaking through the Realm Lord quickly, but it is meaningless. Using Luo Feng as a cosmic-level comprehender as a template is ridiculous. This setting is simply unbearable. It is better to set up a character who has never appeared in the original work. Furthermore, if the cosmic trainee mercenary mission does not buy a few Universe-level enslavements and enslave a group of Star-levels, it will be a disgrace to the World Lord's legacy. I really can't stand it anymore. Goodbye.

Baikalluo in the original book was a cosmic-level person who had lived for tens of thousands or even tens of thousands of years when he first appeared. How could he participate in Luo Feng's genius competition?

To actually create such a garbage clone, there is no arrangement for inheritance. In other words, there is no way to achieve perfect genes before the Lord of the Universe. Even if you can divide dozens of clones into useful ones, even one of the behemoths in the starry sky will have a claw bigger than yours. How can you compete with others? Don't brag about how awesome this clone is. If it was really that awesome, the Dragon King would already be the top overlord. The secret talent you get at the beginning can only be used by the Realm Lord. I would call it the weakest talent secret in history.

I just read a few chapters, and I feel pretty good. The only bad thing is that many paragraphs are too long, which makes me a little tired. It would be nice if they could be divided into several shorter paragraphs...

The universe-level 100,000-year-old has a lifespan of 100,000. It was already at the universe-level when the original novel appeared. It should not be the same as Luo Feng.

Not bad, keep it up, don't put poison, it can cause fire

Ask the author, why didn't the Huanguang Realm Master sell the golden leaf for a treasure that can help the immortal master break through to extend his life? A treasure that can help the immortal strongman break through can easily be sold for hundreds of millions of mixed yuan units, but can't he buy some treasure that can help the immortal master break through? Starting lightning strike🙂