Swallowed Star: Rebirth and Rise

Fanfiction already tells us the ending, but why do we read it? It's the process that matters. If the process is engaging, we'll be able to get into it; otherwise, who would read it?

The protagonist's talent is utterly worthless.

This story gets worse and worse with each chapter, becoming increasingly padded. The protagonist has a cheat code but refuses to use it, constantly adding restrictions. For example, the story of a Taiwanese person trying to kill the protagonist adds up to several chapters of filler, and then the person is released in the end. What's the point of writing it like that?

With this kind of power, you only need to take care of the China region. Why force a global alliance? You really think you're a savior.

Nowadays, there are very few female supporting characters or main characters in Swallowed Star fanfiction, resulting in it becoming increasingly boring and uninteresting to read. Plus, the anime has introduced many beautiful female characters. In Swallowed Star fanfiction, the protagonist is the only one cultivating, to the point of becoming mentally impaired.

Setting a fan value of 100 for writing a comment? Dude, I don't need that much. Just to give you a bad review. The protagonist has only been in this world for ten days, and you've already written over 100 chapters. This is ridiculously padded!!! Are you planning to write this for the rest of your life?

Some people are as impatient as monkeys, I don't know what they're in such a hurry for. Take it or leave it. Some people like fast, some like slow. The Earth arc feels more realistic, the universe arc is too fantastical. I find the universe arc, especially after the immortality arc, utterly distasteful; it's too pretentious and empty.

I really don't know how stupid the protagonist is. He knows it's about swallowing the starry sky and has a cheat code, and after 160,000 words, he still hasn't gotten on the fast track of cultivation. What is he thinking?

I've read a lot of fanfiction about Devouring (a fictional entity); I could read it on Earth, but I couldn't read it outside of Earth. This slow-paced one is quite nice.

What a load of rubbish! The protagonist had a cheat ability to stop Li Yao but didn't use it, showing a cowardly and life-saving attitude and lacking courage. He only used it when he was almost dead. And then, when he was supposed to be a Jeet Kune Do master, Li Yao escaped. Hmm, you call yourself a Jeet Kune Do master? I'm more like a Jeet Kune Do apprentice.