The Shattered Apocalypse: My Intel Updates Daily

Investigation report: "Number" - 273 Investigation target: "Collapsed Apocalypse: My Intelligence Daily Update" - Male Protagonist - [Bu Feng] Investigation Result: [Soul Penetration Seizes the Body] Judgment Basis: Abnormal Characteristics: Travel Investigator, as the name suggests Siyi is a profession that investigates and records the travel situations of travelers. It aims to let observers (that is, readers) in all the worlds know in advance the travel situations of travelers in this world. It volunteers to provide observers with a quick query service for travel information If there are any mistakes, Wan Wang will correct me ——All Souls Feast Zhenjun Stay on July 1, 2025

After reading it, let me summarize. The three settings of rebirth, the explosion of the world three months later, and the small world are very novel. One of the shortcomings is the emotional drama, and the other is the plot. I have made the same mistakes that 99% of authors will make. The plot arrangement is too compact. The early stage should focus on development, fighting with others, making enemies, pretending to be cool, and then fighting. The writing style of power and changing maps is already very difficult to attract people. The author should combine the behind-the-scenes writing method and write more relaxedly. An overly compact plot can easily make people tired of aesthetics. In addition, the description, analysis, and expansion of the protagonist's abilities are too sloppy. These main attractions should be described with more pen and ink. Finally, in summary, it is an ordinary work to kill boring time, and it is all due to the problem of writing skills and not considered

From time to time, there will be a meteor shower, and the land will rise.

Not to mention, this time the stuck point rescue gave me a pretty good impression. Most of the stuck points to save people make me feel too deliberate and disgusting.

There is something wrong with the area setting. You have several pieces of land. It's not as big as my house, which is 80 square meters.

It's okay to rush into a South Campus that's not the Heart of the World or the Heart of the Original Conqueror. It's okay to rush dozens of square meters at a time. In the end of the world, if you don't show your strength, you're just talking nonsense.