In Investiture of the Gods, My Clone Is in Journey to the West

This seems to be from a female-oriented online novel. They're all cultivating immortality, yet it's still all about mundane family matters. Disagree? All that cultivation for nothing! Disagree today, and you'll be dead tomorrow! ~_~

Don't later write that Journey to the West is a timeline after Investiture of the Gods; just say they are two separate worlds.

In the world of Journey to the West, immortality does not exist. This is a crucial point to remember. Even Buddha and the Jade Emperor have their time to die; no one can live forever.

It's all so hesitant, sentimental, and petty. What kind of cultivation novel is this? The part about dealing with Su Daji made me physically uncomfortable. The fighting and cultivation are glossed over, the plot is completely contrived, but the lovey-dovey relationships and romantic entanglements are given a lot of attention. Why write a cultivation novel? Write a romance drama instead.

The part where they escorted Daji back to Ji Province was a waste of the protagonist's weak and timid personality, a disservice to Xiong Ba's name.

Instead of focusing on cultivating immortality, they spend their days indulging in romantic entanglements.

Many parts are a bit too modern 🙂. If you're going to write the original story, then write the original story. Now there's a bunch of prehistoric fantasy settings popping up, mixed with some traditional Xianxia elements, which is really strange.

I watched it all in one go. It was quite good, with a brilliant premise and a smooth plot.

Mutual encouragement

Dear godfathers, now that you've finished reading this great author's book, could you take a look at mine? Hehe...