Swallowed Star: Zhang Haobai

In the early days of Chaos City, I was too poisonous and oppressed. I was possessed by a halo of wisdom. I knew how much improvement the body of breaking through the laws would have, but I still practiced irrelevant secrets. I just didn't break through. I was really sick. The subsequent pretending to be slapped in the face was too stiff and not at all enjoyable.

The settings that were changed privately are too dramatic, the painting style and original settings are too biased towards martial arts fantasy, and the most essential part of the early and middle stages of Devouring the Stars has been lost.

It's better to watch Swallowing Starry Sky again. What the hell?

There is no beginning or end from the first chapter, and even at the end, the origin of the two-world bead and why the protagonist was chosen are not explained clearly. Originally, it didn't make sense to have a clone in the cosmic sea at the beginning. The whole plot of the earth chapter was written by switching between the original and the clone repeatedly, writing here and there, and you wouldn't know who it was if you didn't pay attention. The universe chapter has always been written around the Skeleton Clan, and some explanatory words are inserted from time to time. Except for the two clan wars that have a bit of plot, the rest is just like a narrative. There is no plot in the universe sea. The clone went directly to the Origin Continent and wrote a lot of "Coffin Carrying Trial" plots. The last chapter ended directly with the Origin vs. Invincible, and the pits dug were ignored.

Randomly changing the settings of the original work

It's not good to watch, the ending sucks, I don't recommend watching it, the setting is too confusing, and the plot is too tight.

Very interesting. The author will continue to publish and learn to swallow the stars.

I think that setting a precedent can be regarded as the originator level for the time being. I don't mind refuting.

It's a mess. I probably won't be able to write it in the middle of writing. The Immortal part has completely collapsed.

The writing is not good, the plot is a dead end.