Becoming a God Through Gacha in Swallowed Star

Do you know why your writing is so good, yet your popularity is still so low? There are countless amazing techniques and divine skills in your own country's mythology, why did you choose to choose the Japanese? It's very unpopular; most people would abandon the story after seeing Yagami's part…

Chapter Twenty-Nine was too cruel. Ten times the gene power, plus a precious pearl—definitely stronger than Hong, yet Hong's single sentence left you blank-minded, unable to think, and your mouth uncontrollably spouting off things. Hehehehehe

The beginning was incredibly toxic, and the rest was even more toxic. Why is the system still dragging its feet at the Virtual Universe Company? Why not just spend money to become the Lord of the Universe and then improve other things?

The protagonist, a domain lord, is about to kill an invincible king, and a realm lord is about to kill a venerable one? How come you can kill immortals without writing planetary level? Have you ever calculated how many levels are between a Domain Lord and an Invincible King?

Having read up to chapter 35, I'd like to share my thoughts. First of all, kudos to the author for their hard work. However, as a fanfiction, this book lacks rigor and deviates significantly from the original work. The protagonist is a level 4 planetary being with 121 times the power, plus a genetic level of 10—you're saying there are five people on Earth stronger than him?

The author's writing is decent, among the better fanfictions, and readable. However, this book is not suitable for readers who are particularly interested in the original setting or familiar with the Devouring series, as the power levels are severely inconsistent. To sum it up in one sentence: the protagonist has almost maxed out his fire elemental laws through excessive spending.

This must be what they call a writing disaster! A saintly will, 100,000 times the genetic potential, and 11th-tier combat power?! A novel has a foundation. You've got the biggest, most obtainable bug in the primordial universe, and this is all the combat power you have? You can't expect him to improve his strength through unheard-of methods later on.

It suffers from a common problem: it devours fanfiction, then falls apart as soon as it enters the Origin Continent, turning ultra-fantasy into low-grade martial arts.

Inheriting the Duan Donghe legacy was a mistake! An agreement had already been reached, and he already had several inheritances to manage, yet he insisted on trying to curry favor with the Duan Donghe legacy. He already knew Luo Feng could inherit it, yet he still went to deepen the karmic ties. Did he really think he could transcend this?

It's strange, isn't it? If you have enough power, can't you just print money at will? And with the prevalence of online transactions now, you can simply add a few zeros to your bank account and get any amount of money you want. As long as you don't spend it all at once, the purchasing power of that money won't change. How can this fundamental logical flaw be remedied?