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Brother, if you are not good at writing emotional scenes, then write less. Forcibly writing them will make people feel bad. Moreover, I feel that this secretary has too many scenes, and there are not as many serious plots as her

I have read Chapter 99 so far, and found that the protagonist only has the True Flame Remnant Seal, the Yuling Seal, and the Linghuan Seal. Anyway, all the protagonist encounters are these three seals. I am really convinced. I don't believe there are no other seals 🤔🤔🤔

Reading this novel is really a waste of money! The protagonist is like a monkey from the moment he joins the Black Armored Army! The Black Armored Army is like a circus!

Is it all done? Playing old tricks, doing the same routine for each level of Mysterious Seal, until level 100, it becomes a thick novel.

The multi-line development may be to increase interest, but if it goes too far, it becomes a confusing and bad article.

First of all, this is undoubtedly a book that can be read with your brain. But in the middle of the story, it feels like it's just pretending for the sake of pretending. Maybe people these days just accept this? Forcing the boss behind the scenes, forcing the drama... Secondly, there is a setting in this analysis that I don't understand. What the author means is that in the early stage, Goldfinger weakly analyzed something (divine blood) and could not complete the analysis. Then why don't you find something related to analyze it later? According to the setting, every time you upgrade to a level, you can have sex for free again? It really depends on the author's mood. In the end, this is also the reason why I gave up reading. Is the author a bit psychological? ? It's hard to say, anyway, he kills people quite casually. He is not like Da Ai Xianzun who writes about the dark world of cultivation, because he kills decisively for profit. He kills people casually. In the early stage, he buries a chess piece and kills someone for the puppet. Later, someone raises the price of food and directly kills the person. I read about Dream Master, and killing is all that matters. After all, the other party has done many evil things, and he still has to write how to insult the other party. As a law student who majored in criminal psychology, I really recommend the author to see a psychologist. The psychological portrayal of a time traveler on a 14-year-old boy is almost like shit.

Anecdotes can only be used as embellishments. If they overshadow the main content, it will be a failure. Repeatedly, it is either a mistake or a poor word count.

I quite like it, but I need to spell it out more.

What the hell is this? It's not interesting at all.

Now I understand. Anyway, you can level up by replying with 15 words, and you can also earn experience. Upgrading requires experience, so I copied this sentence. Not bad. Very well written.

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Next time 5 passes v0 h88 points i separate i. BBS40 (Cherish only when you are familiar with it 7

I wrote it too slowly, I saved it for a long time, and I finished reading it in just a few moments. . . .

It's unconstrained and beautiful. Dealing with conspiracies and scheming, crushing them with absolute strength, it feels good to watch. In this way, absolute success will be achieved.

1. A very interesting novel. The world view is well set and refreshing. The author seems to be a science student and has done a good job in the small details of life. So far, there are no poisonous points. 2. The rhythm is extremely comfortable. The golden finger of the novel is actually quite generous. What is rare is that the author has a good grasp of the plot and does not fall into the cliche. Moreover, the daily life in the novel is quite interesting and is rarely seen in fantasy novels. 3. A small complaint. There is something wrong with the second half of the novel's introduction. When I clicked on the introduction, I thought it was a fantasy novel. I didn't expect it to be a traditional fantasy. It's quite unexpected. It's not surprising that this novel is classified as "fantasy".

Come, the author reads with me My solemn oath: starting from today, I will never update. I will not watch dramas, travel, or get sick. I will play no games, no hydrology. Strict self-discipline, cherishing time like gold, perseverance, hard work, advocating first-class, striving to achieve brilliance, taking pleasure in coding, being refined into steel, worthy of readers, worthy of youth, and worthy of the future. As an author, I solemnly swear: Coding is my bounden duty, I have unlimited potential and am not afraid of hardship!

The protagonist's honorific title can be Dongjun. Dongjun is also the sun god, from the Songs of Chu, and is a male god. Dong Jun is no more powerful than Xi He, the Divine Emperor, and Xi He is a goddess.

I found a problem that I don't know if it is considered a bug. There is a supporting character named "Chen Zhengyang". This is a bit unreasonable. In a world without the sea, there would be no one named Yu Canghai; in a world without stars, there would be no one named Lu Xinghe; in a world without the sun, this person named Chen Zhengyang, is his father also a time traveler?

I'm not happy with the harem, so I'll give it up.

Dear readers, for newbies, reading is so important. Please chase this cute new guy until he is out of breath. Please.

I asked if it would be a harem or a single heroine. I saw 121 and mentioned the privileges of male scholars, and suddenly I had an ominous premonition. Let me ask, if there is a harem later, I will run away in advance.

The previous novels were uninteresting at the beginning, but very exciting at the end. Now the novels are exciting at the beginning, but not interesting at the end. Originally, I was very optimistic about this book, but the subsequent plot development was a bit confusing. It provoked the underworld, provoked the white people, all kinds of naughty tricks continued, and the plot developed intermittently. After seeing the protagonist forcibly helping the heroine to open the Valkyrie, I stopped reading at all. I feel like the author started writing here and there, and the protagonist's plug-in is too big, as if it is omnipotent, not as if, it is omnipotent. After so many things, the protagonist is still like a streetwalker, walking around, touching everything he sees, and then sneaking away in a mysterious and unpredictable manner. I don't know why the more I look at the protagonist, the more I dislike it, and in the end I can only delete everything.

Seriously, what does this heroine do to pig's feet? Wouldn't others think he was possessed by a strange god when he suddenly became so powerful? How could the god-level inheritance be preserved?

This book is very well written, with good writing style and structure. However, I gave up the book after reading it halfway through and felt a little unhappy. How should I put it? Starting from the middle of the series, the author showed a kind of arrogance without foundation. An extraordinary civilization that has been inherited for 30,000 years and relied on war to grow was driven by a fighter jet that was not actually very good and an army formation concept that was as good as the Earth's Iran-Iraq War. This is so magnificent and great. Extraordinary civilization needs a protagonist to break through the ascending path of the warrior class, and it needs a protagonist to break through the foundation of extraordinary beings. When these ideas are presented, it is really boring and can't stand it. The whole world view has been lowered by countless levels. It feels like it has changed from a normal and refreshing article to an intellectual one. The analogy must be that in 2025, the protagonist relied on the heliocentric theory to overthrow the geocentric theory and was elected as an academician of the National Academy of Sciences.

Let's briefly talk about this book Problems: 1. The match between Goldfinger and the plot and setting is not high. The behind-the-scenes trouble-making flow is suitable for Goldfinger who can gain something as long as he does things, but it is not suitable for this kind of omniscient and omnipotent Goldfinger 2. The related settings of Goldfinger are not good. They are all-knowing and omnipotent. As a result, the author is slowly reducing Goldfinger's ability. It's awesome. First, you need various media to deduce the cause and effect of things. Then if there are some obstacles, the deduction will fail. Then you can be discovered by the supernatural god. Furthermore, the supernatural god can also send things to the protagonist through the golden finger. 3. The golden finger becomes useless. You must first meet the conditions before you can perfect the mark, making the plot become like a jigsaw puzzle. Then golden finger The upgrade could have been a highlight, but the author made it useless, saying that the functions were strengthened, but it still served the plot. It was the kind of thing where the author thought it could be deduced and deduced. Otherwise, there was interference that made it impossible to deduc. The spiritual upper limit attached to the upgrade was increased, so I didn't mention it (it was too little, it was optional) 4. Analyze things Things are too random, and there is a feeling that they come up as they come up, whether it is the acquisition of proficiency in analyzing things, or the increase in mental power, and the level and combat power are relatively confusing 5. The school plot has a lot of poisonous points, which is not to say that there are some in reality, but it is not a poisonous point in the novel. For example, pretending to be cool at a class reunion, this is true in reality, but is this a poisonous point? And the school plot is really dispensable. It would not feel too inconsistent to delete other characters except the classmates and the squad leader. 6. The plots of the outpost work and the Black Armored Army assessment are also not good. There are also poisonous points, that is, when the author writes the sensational plot, it is the poisonous point. I basically can't feel the role of the outpost plot and the Black Armored Army plot? Is it to improve social status and become a big shot? Then please don't write too much about interpersonal interactions. If you write about it, it won't be of much use. There will only be water words left 7. Money issues. The author gave the protagonist the title of squad leader for adding money. As a result, I don't see much use of money. The potions and rewards obtained after joining the legion are not very useful. Those potions only add less than one mental power. It is not as much as analyzing a monster to increase mental power 8. Valkyrie plot, one poison point In order to satisfy his wish of "cute girls dancing with big guns", the author has created a poisonous point. Let's put it this way, the deskmate is suitable for auxiliary types, like healing, and the squad leader is suitable for combat types, like Valkyrie. As a result, the author has to match the deskmate for combat types, which is thankless Advantages The writing is okay and readable. The initial setting can attract some people, but in the middle and later stages, it was written as a puzzle decryption game. Although it is a million-dollar book, it is really not attractive.

I actually vomited when I saw "Zhao Technology". Everyone likes his book because of the theme of the steam age and his hidden strength. His dark side strength is getting lower and lower, and even in the latest chapter, he is the strongest mystic master. No, I just want to ask him whether he has just been promoted to a warrior or a pro. When a soldier enters the door, he has the strength to fight with a mysterious master. You have lost hundreds of cards, and your strength is still at the peak of the mysterious master. You are eating styles. I have tolerated even these. I can tolerate your subsequent tricks. After all, this book is really good in the early stage, but when you are making technology, are you in the head? If you don't really want to ask how many people like to watch it, I really want to give up when I see it. I think most people find it poisonous to death. , And then he reorganized his harem, and continued to wear broken shoes, all kinds of poisonous points, the secret strength in the early stage was so strong, it looked so good, and on the surface it kept rising, but it was not watery. How did you think of ruining such a good plot? I just ruined my big job. It was obviously recommended, but now I'm fine. I just ruined it for myself. I'm really speechless. It's obvious that Hu started the game and turned it into a poisonous article.

I read Chapter 43. It's good. I can read it. Although the protagonist is a student and has no strong strength, he has a good plug-in that allows the protagonist to do things reasonably and safely in a weak and inconvenient position without danger (which is cool). Personally, I think the early stage is okay and the plot is not draggy, and from various supernatural events, it can be seen that a big crisis may appear in this peaceful little secret realm. Well... I don't know what to say (ー_ー)!! That's it.

I thought it was pretty good at first, but once I saw the harem, I didn't want to watch it anymore. I don't understand what the author is thinking. In the current environment, it is obvious that people who don't have a harem or even follow the emotional line will be more popular. After all, if you don't open a harem, people who like to watch it may not give up, but if you want to open a harem, people who don't like it will most likely give up. Moreover, it should be easier to write novels with less emotional lines. I don't know why so many authors are still stuck in this harem routine 😒

To be honest, this book is new and old at the same time. The setting and plot are quite interesting, but I always feel that it doesn't feel right when I read it. I can only say that there is something but not much

Shen Nong is here: The old tricks are even more old-fashioned, and they are nothing Although there was a super big trick in the front, a rookie who knew nothing dared to peep into the secrets of the gods and got a lot of benefits from it emmm reluctantly said it (you are right if you cheat). Then the protagonist pretends to be the mastermind behind the whole picture and fools everyone with his high IQ and applause. He is very childish but can barely fool him (you are right if you hang). But after you arrived at Xuan Palace, you started building fighter jets and bombers without practicing. I really think you don't want to write about it anymore. It's too humorous that you can build a completely magical and mysterious world with no hint of industry and technology in a short time with dozens of people, right? Rely on defense