My Life Has Narration

My parents are in their 40s and 50s after graduating from college. When my son comes home, his parents don't show any concern. The whole family is disgusted. I really don't understand. Is this a warm and everyday life?

After reading a few pictures, it was really uncomfortable. It is wrapped in the skin of modern life, but the story it writes is out of tune. Although reality does not require logic, I think novels still do.

In fact, I think the biggest failure is that the single female protagonist has to focus on describing the other female protagonists, especially the teacher. It is really difficult to understand. This operation will make any group look distorted. If the harem is not a queen, the single female protagonist describes the ambiguity of others for a long time. Oh, author, think about it yourself.

A group of people who were safe before the narration were uncertain about life and death after the narration.

Let me complain, it's just a small flaw. Does the author have no idea about height and weight? 180 Is only 65 kilograms. You are a telegraph pole, right?

Shen Yi

I've read the first dozen chapters, but not the rest. I don't know what happens next. To be honest, there's nothing that attracts me. It's OK to make family jokes, but it's more or less within limits. It gives me the impression that the whole family is crazy because they've eaten too much mushrooms.

I was curious about what the comments said, so I went to read it. In fact, it's not that bad. It's just that there are too many Internet memes. The family is mentally disturbed. I can barely read it. Normal people can barely read it. It's quite a niche article. I saw Chapter 6. The reason why I didn't read it was that I couldn't accept it and contacted the old A. . It is actually a very serious thing to hang up the phone on the phone in the middle of the night with diarrhea. Even people with poor quality may hang up. . I can't figure out why the author arranged this plot. It will definitely persuade a lot of people to quit. It can only be said that there is something wrong with the author's three views. There is a reason why a million words is so small. The writing and narration are pretty good, but it's a pity. .

The first few chapters are so toxic that I can't stand it anymore. They have to create an image of the protagonist who is disliked by everyone. His friends are rubbish, his parents dislike him, and his sister doesn't even kiss him. Who wants to read this?

People who watch this are going to have a brain hemorrhage. You have a single heroine, so tell me in advance. You describe so many supporting characters with ambiguous partners, and then you only have a single heroine. Either you accept them all, or you just write about the heroine being ambiguous. It's a waste of time.