I Broke Through Again

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Seven Kingdoms

After reading seven chapters in one go, I have to say that this is an experienced author who has written more than five million words. He writes steadily and can hardly find any faults. After the entire seven chapters, the plot, rhythm, and setting are all excellent. The semi-imaginary world view of this book can also be seen from the side that the author's foundation in all aspects is not weak. If I had to say there are any problems, there are probably three points that I feel are a bit regretful and lacking. First, the protagonist has been passively pushed by the plot, with almost no opportunities to express himself. As a result, the shaping of the protagonist in the first seven chapters can only be said to be no problem. Occasionally, there are some interesting psychological activities, but no personality or characteristics. Second, the protagonist has just come back, and the reactions of Lu Buwei and another concubine when they learn that the protagonist is basically incompetent are specially laid out. But what I have seen so far is that the follow-up only shows up with the concubine's child, which doesn't look good, and then directly Lu Buwei learns that the protagonist has become a genius. It feels like the explosive point of the conflict suddenly disappeared, and he punched the cotton. Thirdly, although there is a fox demon line in the outside world, the overall feeling is that it has been framed in the Qin Dynasty monarch and his family for too long. Moreover, in the beginning, this frame was actually designed to be at the level of the country, which makes the plot in the next section even more occluded. It feels like it would be better to lay out some higher-level backgrounds, such as secret battles and games. Looking at it this way, the plot after the protagonist returns to Qin is a bit slow. Overall, the reading and impression is very good. Even the above issues were dealt with after I reviewed it myself. When I read it, I still read it very fluently. The old author's skills are here, and it is definitely enough to fill in the book shortage. That's it, slipped away.

Five stars ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ Only read the first 100 chapters. The speed and training design are very good Perhaps due to the rich history and thoughts, it affects the conciseness and deviates slightly from the word "elegant" in the way of refreshing writing. I, who love to read more popular books, stop at this. Or because of the historical familiarity of the struggle for hegemony in troubled times, readers will have a sense of staleness that I have already seen it this time. It is the author who has combined the fiction of the story with the authentic and unofficial history, which may lead to complaints from some people who do not buy history...

To be honest, just pretending to be an emperor is better than Ying Zheng. If you write about Ying Zheng, you will be scolded if you have a slightly inappropriate grasp of the characters. First add a bookshelf and watch the author perform. Come on!

You write about alcohol disinfection, boiling water and cooking bowls, but nothing is clean. Are you serious? Are you lonely practicing in the world?

I am happy to see her, but I am tired of seeing books. I am depressed all day long, how can I build China?

I have been short of books during this period. I added a lot of books and deleted them all after reading dozens of chapters. This book is the only one that I am still not satisfied with after reading it in one sitting. The author's writing is sophisticated and the plot is interesting and readable. I can give it a 9 out of 10, but the word count is too few. Come on, author.

Seeing that now, no one in the sect looks down on the protagonist, how do they respect the strong? It's been like this the whole time. You have to have the most basic respect for the strong, right?

The royal family of the Qin Dynasty would not call themselves Zhao. Although Qin and Zhao are the same ancestors, calling the first emperor Zhao Zheng seems insulting.

I hope the male protagonist can be like Zheng Ge, with a decisive personality and the personality of a person in power.

After a modern man travels to ancient times, in the ancient environment of three wives and four concubines, unless women have great power, the man will definitely have multiple wives if he is capable and the environment allows. Nowadays, many married men also like to look at beautiful women, but they only look at them because they have no ability and the environment does not allow it. Those men who have power and money are just because the environment does not allow it, but it is hard to say how many confidantes there are out there. In ancient times, there were men who were powerful and enjoyed their lives wholeheartedly. This was also due to the experiences and personalities of both parties. It was because such things were rare that they were recorded to show the loyalty and value of love. Most powerful men had multiple wives. Just like we admire people with high moral character, but few are truly noble.

I found that the villains basically have a superior mentality and are very stubborn. I feel that they are not targeted at King Qin, but at the readers. They want to arouse the readers' emotions so that they can follow the reading. However, the villains have a taste of reducing their intelligence, because I have watched them for so long, and the villains have also been tough-talking for so long. They never learn their lessons, making people think that this is their level of intelligence?

The prince of Qin is named Zhao. What do you think?

This book is a masterpiece, and overall it is well written. But there are still several shortcomings and regrets! I won't talk about the advantages. I just want to talk about a few disadvantages, right? 1. Combat Power The background of this book is the prehistoric times, mixed with the fate of the country and the struggle for hegemony. Therefore, this kind of readers have relatively high expectations for the male protagonist's combat power, and the combat power is very high before it is released on the shelves. But it's really cool! But the author suddenly realized that writing this way would end up costing a million dollars, so he started to put the brakes on the male protagonist after he reached his second realm. After the Four Realms, I never mentioned the realm again (maybe it's because I haven't seen the back yet)! Then the monsters from various immortal sects inexplicably came to their senses, and no one paid attention to the male protagonist's immortal appearance! They all despise the male protagonist! That's why it lost some readers not long after it was put on the shelves. Second, partner I don't know if the author has been reported for psychological distress before or something like that? According to me, if an article suddenly shows signs of collapse, the contradiction should be transferred immediately! You can learn from Fairy Very Fierce, which also means that the early and middle stages are about to collapse but the reader is transferred from the main plot to "daily life". The author really feels that women affect the speed of drawing swords, so there is no need to describe the figures of those female generals. This way we won't be teased to the point of getting too high or too low! Nearly a million words have been written with only two women as companions? In the early days, I was depressed about the limit of eighteen, but now... If you don't want to drive, you can just pass it by, instead of feeling like you are neither above nor below. Three, regret? ? Maybe? ! Many people who like to watch the national destiny struggle or the Great Desolation actually like to watch some big scenes! What big scene? The protagonist's upgrade is full of strange phenomena, causing a sensation in all parties! The Sendai Pillar in this book is described a bit in the early stage but then passed over in one stroke... Why do we read this kind of article? Don't you just want to appear holy in front of others? Do all parties kneel and worship? I was still wondering why the data was so bleak? Now it seems that it should open high and go low, right? Summary of personal reading experience: After being put on the shelves, the combat power began to be sealed, the talent was sealed, and people were like some people who were castrated. The book is still attractive, but it is really neither good nor bad! Like tasteless. This book has reached 2 million words and should be almost finished. I hope the author can learn from the experience of this book. If combat power and worldview are not good, then let's just drive, right? You can't do nothing.

Please see if it suits you

Rather than saying that the Qin State is so strong but always being plotted to make it appear weak, it is better to say that these ingenious tricks are so effective that they give people the feeling that they can overturn the situation at any time. When soldiers fight on the border, the effect is not as good as some magical weapons and ghost weapons that can cause bad luck. It stands to reason that the Qin State has reached the stage of one against six, and there should be no shortage of these things.

I feel like it was not written that since Qin is already more powerful than the other six countries, it is the funniest thing to think that a bunch of cats and dogs can come to Qin and damage the country's destiny. A prince is scheming and immersing himself in all kinds of conspiracies every day.

The writing is really good, but the problem is similar to that of the book next door. This is the leader of the country, and the backlash from his ministers is too weak. If high-level people can kill the king at will without any restrictions at all, then the use of the dynasty will be strange. The backlash next door is too strong. Although it's not surprising, it doesn't feel right. But your writing is really good. Come on,

The biggest problem with your book is that "there are too many emotional scenes." Even though you changed your name, who doesn't know that this is Ying Zheng? Ying Zheng also has a lot of concubines, but he is not a person who wastes time on relationships at all. Women are just necessary tools for him to vent his desires and procreate.

Little Beauty

From the establishment of the Qin State by Ying Fei, the son of Qin Fei, to the proclaimed emperor by Qin Shihuang Ying Zheng, the Qin State experienced a total of 38 kings in more than 600 years. Closely related to the annexation of the six kingdoms to complete the unification were the seven kings in the post-Qin period. They were Qin Xiaogong, Qin Huiwen, Qin Wu, Qin Zhaoxiang, Qin Xiaowen, Qin Zhuangxiang, and Qin Wang Yingzheng. 1. Qin Feizi, Ying Fei (Qin Ying), 888 BC - 858 BC. 2. Qin Hou, whose name is not specified, 857 BC - 848 BC. 3. Qin Gongbo, Ying Gongbo, 847 BC - 845 BC. 4. Qin Zhong, Ying Qin Zhong, 844 BC - 822 BC. 5. Duke Zhuang of Qin, Ying Qi, 821 BC - 778 BC. 6. Qin Xianggong (established as a prince), defeated Qin Kai, 777 BC - 766 BC. 7. Duke Wen of Qin, whose name is unknown. 8. Duke Jing of Qin (Dong Qin) has not yet ascended the throne. 9. Qin Xian Gong (Qin Ning Gong), Ying Li, 715 BC - 704 BC. 10. Qin gave birth to a son, Ying Man, from 703 BC to 698 BC. 11. Qin Wu Gong, Ying Shuo, 697 BC - 678 BC. 12. Qin Degong, Ying Jia, 677 BC - 676 ​​BC. 13. Qin Xuangong, Ying Tian, ​​675 BC - 664 BC. 14. Qin Chenggong, Ying Zai, 663 BC - 660 BC. 15. Qin Mugong (Qin Mugong), Ying Renhao, 659 BC - 621 BC. 16. Qin Kanggong, Ying Feng, 620 BC - 609 BC. 17. Qin Gonggong, Yingdao/Yingba, 608 BC - 605 BC. 18. Qin Huan Gong, Ying Rong, 604 BC - 577 BC. 19. Qin Jinggong, Ying Shi, 576 BC - 537 BC. 20. Qin Aigong (Qin Bi Gong/Qin Er Gong), Ying Ji, 536 BC - 501 BC. 21. Qin Yigong has not yet ascended the throne. 22. Duke Hui of Qin, Ying Ning, 500 BC - 492 BC. 23. Qin Daogong, Yingpan, 491 BC - 477 BC. 24. Qin Li Gonggong (Qin Li Gonggong/Qin Li Gonggong), Yingci, 476 BC - 443 BC. 25. Qin Cao Gong (Qin Zhu Gong), Ying Xin, 442 BC - 429 BC. 26. Qin Huai Gong, Ying Feng, 428 BC - 425 BC. 27. Qin Linggong (Qinsu Linggong), Yingsu, 424 BC - 415 BC. 28. Qin Jian Gong, Ying Daozi, 414 BC - 400 BC. 29. Qin Hui Gong, Ying Ren, 399 BC - 387 BC. 30. Qin Chugong (young master of Qin), Yingchang, 386 BC - 385 BC. 31. Duke Xiang of Qin (Gong Xiang of Qin Yuan/King Qin Yuan), Ying Shixi/Ying Lian, 384 BC - 362 BC. 32. Qin Xiaogong (King Ping of Qin), Ying Quliang, 361 BC - 338 BC. 33. King Huiwen of Qin (King Hui of Qin), Ying Si, 337 BC - 311 BC (changed to Yuan Dynasty in 324 BC). 34. King Wu of Qin (King Qin Wuwu/King Wulie of Qin), Yingdang, 310 BC - 307 BC. 35. King Zhaoxiang of Qin (King Zhao of Qin), Ying Ze/Ying Ji, 306 BC - 251 BC. 36. King Xiaowen of Qin, Ying Zhu/Zhao Zhu, 250 BC. 37. King Zhuangxiang of Qin (King Zhuang of Qin), Qin Yiren/Ying Chu, 249 BC - 247 BC. 38. Qin Shihuang, (Qin Shihuang), Ying Zheng/Zhao Zheng (zheng) 246 BC - 221 BC. 39. Qin II, Hu Hai, 210 BC - 207 BC.

After reading dozens of chapters, I have a very average impression of the Warring States Period, an era of great struggle, where the strong are strong and the weak are destroyed. The author writes it very plainly, and the performance of the ancient sages whose names have been passed down to this day is not outstanding at all in the book. Furthermore, this kind of historical fictional novel has the existence of spiritual practice, and the writing is also very separated. Common people and spiritual practitioners seem to be two worlds And the author's history is not very good. Anyway, he can get over it with just a fictional thought

At the saint level, it takes one hundred miles at a breath, but it takes several hours to make a thousand miles. Although the map is larger than in the previous life, it is written in black and white that it takes several hours to make a thousand miles at a breath. This is quite poisonous.

This book only has more than 370 chapters. At present, including the fairyland part that has not yet been released, the written world view feels relatively small. The book should be finished too early, at least no one wants to finish it so soon, so I personally hope to see the author add the thinking methods of this world to the development of that world. It's not about "Das Kapital" or "Ma Yuan", but mathematical methods and scientific methods. I saw a saying last time, and I just remembered that the modern research method is actually the "inductive and deductive method". In other aspects, a high level of mathematics is of great benefit to both technological development and spell learning. Not to mention technological development. For spell learning. Traditional learning methods require too high an individual's talent in high-end spell learning. However, if those spells can be expressed using mathematics and expressed simply and clearly using formulas or models, then this will greatly reduce the threshold for advancement and at the same time greatly improve national strength. In addition, the achievements that the protagonist has achieved now are nothing more than the achievements that the original "First Emperor" should have achieved. It is normal for the protagonist to do better with the support of plug-ins. But if the protagonist can directly express the spell using a mathematical model, that should be the greatest wealth that the protagonist brings to the world. As a world with the ability to practice, I believe that the people in this world will far exceed our understanding of the world in some aspects, such as space technology, but these technologies are beyond ordinary people. In other words, if one day, a few people at the top of the current practice disappear, then the information they left behind cannot even be understood by others. This is also why technology is "lost". Finally, I want to say that it is still early to finish this book. If the author has the ability, he can add it. If not, forget it. It doesn't matter.

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This book is very exciting. As a long-time book fan, I have been following it and look forward to the update. Come on! ! !

The last book was replenished and fully ordered, 😁

After some recommendations, the author can add the Qin Army's war hymn to it, which will be more powerful. "How can I say that I have no clothes? I wear the same robe as my son. When the king raised his army, he repaired my spear and spear." Feng

One thing to say, this book is indeed well written. If nothing else, there is no problem in reading it with peace of mind.