Time Loop: Arrested by the Six Fan Bureau from the Start

The world view and setting of this book are excellent. It is not popular because it has a big poisonous point. The Huang Xiaoxiao part poisoned me to death. I didn't dare to read it at all and just skipped over it before I recovered. Now that I have seen Jin Shangjing, it is much better.

If there are new friends coming, I can explain a few points here. First, the world view will be relatively new. I have put a lot of effort into the training system and martial arts design. It is suitable for those who like high martial arts and interesting martial arts. Second, time loop system The protagonist will not really suffer, it is just a dilemma designed at the beginning. Third, the layout is still carefully designed Friends who like to see the layout can also watch it. Fourth, the overall story is quite innovative. I ask myself that the writing is quite serious, and every setting is taken seriously. Fifth, I am quite diligent in updating, usually three times a day. 8am, 12pm, and 6pm. So every reader is welcome to come and watch Finally, if you think the writing is good, please support it, such as giving a subscription or something. This is the only assessment standard to measure the author's work. This way the work will have a chance to gain more exposure. Thank you to every reader for your support

Write about emotions and development, don't listen to those eunuchs

There are too many wives. If you see a girl, just accept it. Regardless of whether you are a widow or a married woman, the children are older than the protagonist. It is too heavy.

After Chapter 150, the level plummets, abandon

First of all, I still like works with this theme, so I would like to comment on it and give it up. The bugs in this work are: |. The male protagonist reaches a level every day, and no one suspects it? No one went to investigate? 2. Didn't the male protagonist use this time to make a comeback (author Goldfinger) and not think twice about doubting it? Isn't there a price? , The villain in this game has a low IQ, and a dynasty in Daxia is now purely a background. Just ask, at the beginning, the male protagonist killed a dragon guard, but he was not sent to investigate or anything like that. He did not commit any self-destruction. To talk about a relationship with you, let the male protagonist run errands to send a message to the author Shui Zhang? There is almost no description of Da Xia in the back, and it is all about the martial arts. For example, in the beginning of the martial arts hall, why is the identity revealed? Later on, the male protagonist can even shrink and pretend to be martial arts, wouldn't the villain not be able to? Can't you pretend to be something else? What's written in the back is so awesome, and what's written in the front is so cool. I don't know how to expose it to the male protagonist. Others are doing things secretly, why can't they use dirty methods? Others are a big sect, and they also send a Dragon Guard from the Dynasty. You don't even have a male protagonist in the beginning. What are you thinking? And the male protagonist uses so many crossbows later on, why can't they use them in the beginning? This work is based on a popular female protagonist, and the relationship line is hasty. It can be seen that the author is overthinking and basically rushing to catch up with the plot. Now the latest chapter is like rushing. I don't understand how the female protagonist fell in love with the male protagonist? . There are still many questions that I don't want to talk about. To sum up, the subject matter is good, but the plot is overwhelming. It generally revolves around the key points of the writing time. Basically, it will be mentioned every few chapters. It is annoying to watch. There are mixed reviews. I can watch it but I can't use my brain to read it. It costs 500 to write a book review, which is 5 yuan. If I didn't like this kind of subject, I feel like I would have lost money.

It's really not easy. I can say that I have written a few books that are not unfinished and have no eunuchs. They echo the previous books. After reading online articles for so many years, I really haven't seen a few of them.

The protagonist now directly looks for an opportunity to kill all the emperors, and then casually makes up the lost royal family, matching the protagonist's current strength and his adoptive father, and then directly arrives at his loyal palace 🙂

I didn't expect to meet the author on Zhihu 😂

1. I didn't want to read this book after reading the title and introduction. It was too vulgar and cliched, and I didn't see any skill from the author. The title and introduction were completely copied from others. Although such straightforward introduction and title have the advantage of pointing out the main elements of the novel, they are really bad 2. Read later There were so many good reviews that I couldn't help but click on it. It's true as the reviews said, you can't read the first part, it's very bad. Not to mention the eight chapters in the review, I couldn't survive three chapters. Maybe this is also one of my shortcomings. When I first read a novel, I like to read it carefully. When I read it carefully, many problems with the novel came out. First of all, the writing style is not good. The author thought he had written everything he wanted to write, but in fact he had not written it at all. 3. For example, if the old beggar dies and the protagonist is angry, the author may want to show the protagonist's disregard for human life towards the Six Gates, which breaks his original understanding, so the protagonist is angry, which leads to the conflict between the protagonist and Qianhu reaching the extreme, so after the protagonist is resurrected again, he says he wants to kill the Six Gates. But please, please let the author clearly understand the plot at that time. The protagonist was powerless to resist at that time and allowed that person to manipulate him. If the protagonist didn't have a golden finger and could do it all over again, he would have died long ago, so most people will be frightened now. 4. But now that the protagonist has a golden finger, when he sees the beggar being killed at will, he should think more about how to get out of the current crisis and how to survive until the end of the twenty-four hours 5. Furthermore, if the protagonist is because of Liumen Kusuga If one is angry about human life and breaks one's inherent cognition, one should not shout out, because at this time the protagonist's original cognition has been completely shattered, and it is no longer angry, but something on a higher level. At this time, the protagonist's external performance will not shout, but will freeze. 6. The last point is the most ridiculous. The protagonist has already heard the habit of the Six Doors during the first reopening, which is to disregard human life and turn right and wrong, so the protagonist will not be angry at all. At the same time, in this critical situation, the protagonist can only think about how to escape. 7. I have only read a few chapters of this book. I jumped to the front and I don't know which chapter saw Huang Xiaoxiao discovering that the protagonist is not himself. I really couldn't read anymore. I didn't read the cause and effect. Judging from this plot alone, the author's plot arrangement is unreasonable. To put it bluntly, it is not likable. If the author is the time-travel protagonist, would the author want to be discovered that he is not himself? I don't think so, so this directly filters out some of the substitute readers. 8. Finally, to summarize this novel, it may be like the review. The story at the end of the first volume is enough. It may be like the book "Master of Secrets". After reading the previous ones, read it without thinking, only read the main information, and wait for the exciting parts to bring your brain.