Grinding My Way to Mastery, Starting with the One Qi Art

Within the first thirty chapters, this book is considered good food; from thirty to two hundred chapters, it's dry grass; from two hundred to two hundred and thirty-five chapters, it's tasteless but a pity to throw away; after that, it's tasteless but not a pity to throw away. This book has two major flaws. First, there are logical problems after joining Mr.

I'm truly speechless. The author is frantically adding narration and explanatory text: three exchanges in one chapter, the audience's disdain described twice, and every exchange requires a description of expressions and inner thoughts. If there are facial expressions, they're described; if not, "astonishment," "ferocity," or "disbelief." Battle details? Is the battle exciting? I don't know.

Women's snow-white thighs, the ocean is all water. It's impossible not to drink water, but drinking it constantly will make you nauseous.

The story has been dragging on for over ten chapters, but it's neither interesting nor captivating. There are some bright spots in the descriptions, but they're drowned out by the numerous nonsensical exclamations of passersby and bystanders. It's easy to think that removing these wouldn't affect the plot, and that's actually true.

I can't take it anymore! Eighty percent of a chapter is just the second-generation character mocking and looking down on the protagonist? The actual plot barely progresses. It's pure nonsense. Even if you insist on mocking, fine, but the same event doesn't develop, and you keep showing five or six different characters with various inner monologues looking down on the protagonist over five or six consecutive chapters.

When it comes to hydrology, I admire the author on Qidian.com.

Author, could you please explain why the previous book was abandoned? It's like the story suddenly stops there; how can readers who read that book feel comfortable reading this one?

Why do you always write about him as if he's nothing without martial arts skills? Modern fighting techniques are useful to anyone in that human form, okay? Things like chokeholds and armbars—how could they be useless? Many techniques are useful, okay? Even if you haven't learned them, you've at least heard of them.

This is the first time I've read a book by this author, and I feel like this author writes novels without any outline. I've only written 104 chapters so far, which isn't many, yet I've been adding new settings frequently. Almost every ten or so chapters, a new setting is added, sometimes multiple times. I'm only on chapter sixty-six now, but this has happened at least five or six times already.

It was deleted; after being published, it started to become padded, with over ten chapters dedicated to a single hundred-household arena battle.