The Talisman Cube

Skipping around reveals numerous flaws. What is the purpose of this sect? They target you at every turn, yet you wholeheartedly send them treasures, only to find the sect full of enemies in the end. The author seems to have a severe masochistic tendency.

The protagonist's cheat ability appeared too late. It would have been better if it had appeared in the first three chapters, alongside the memories. It could have directly explained that a strange Rubik's Cube existed in his mind from birth, allowing him to deduce and combine it based on the runes he possessed.

The plot from the beginning to the end, when the protagonist avenges Bai Youan, is a bit weak, but after that it takes off, leaping from mere sustenance to divine bliss.

The initial writing was excellent—pure and detailed; the character development was also very nuanced. However, the emotional handling was somewhat lacking. One could refer to *A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality*. It would have been even better if there hadn't been a game, and if subsequent additions to the game had altered the protagonist's character profile.

Chapter 14 is utterly ridiculous! The protagonist leads his fellow disciples on a tree-cutting mission, only to encounter three Nascent Soul True Monarchs fighting. After much effort, ten people die. Upon returning to the sect, without asking any questions, the sect immediately expels the three team leaders from the academy, citing the deaths as the reason. How laughable!

The earlier description was quite good, but the sect's insistence on finding a scapegoat is truly incomprehensible. While it's true that some sects do find deputies to take the blame in reality, it doesn't fit your scenario at all. It's like aliens suddenly arriving on Earth, killing many people, and then you find some local road repairman to take the fall.

The protagonist is a completely stupid pig that everyone and even dogs hate.

This book is the most unique and imaginative Xianxia (fantasy/martial arts) novel I've read in recent years, bar none. In fact, I can say that since I started reading online novels in 2006, there aren't many Xianxia works that can compare to this one.

Inventing a clock in the cultivation world is truly fascinating. Someone has cultivated for hundreds of years, capable of flying, teleporting, moving mountains, and filling seas, yet still can't calculate the current time and has to look at a watch. This cultivation is truly remarkable. And what's with the patents?

Seeing the protagonist's natal talisman with its bullshit about opposing laws and professions, and the claim that there's only one profession, I was poisoned to death. Author, did you cultivate a fake immortality?