The Talisman Cube

Skip to read and read all the poisonous points. What is the purpose of this sect? It targets you at every turn, and you even wholeheartedly send treasures to the sect. In the end, all the sects are enemies. The author has a serious masochistic tendency.

The golden finger appeared too late. It could have appeared in the first three chapters. It would be good to appear together with those memories. It directly shows that a strange Rubik's Cube has appeared in the mind since birth. It can be deduced, arranged and combined based on the runes mastered by the protagonist. In this way, if the protagonist has some modern actions, it will not be out of the ordinary. Just treat him as a reincarnation and be dominated by the current world view. In addition, the author is a newcomer after all, so the first five or six chapters should be able to grab readers who come in to read. Those old authors like Platinum Master have a fixed audience, so it doesn't matter even if they tell the story slowly. Authors should not think that their subject matter and imaginative stories are special. Writing slowly can attract people. This is a common problem for novice authors. In fact, the first few chapters of a novice's work cannot attract readers, and readers will basically have no expectations after that. They usually delete the book and leave. For an experienced author, people may think that the current situation is not good, but it will gradually get better later. Chapter 14 could have been a highlight. After all, compared to others, the protagonist's handling method was better and the result was the least loss. It just makes no sense to punish for no reason. It is a little poisonous point. In fact, it does not necessarily have to be the intervention of the commandment soup. It can completely be the intervention of the affairs office to inquire about the damage during the mission and provide certain compensation for the unreasonable disaster. And then because other teams are The eldest brother (the seed of the inner sect) led the team, and received favoritism and more rewards. The eldest brother of the Fuyuan where the protagonist was located went to fight for it, and exposed the protagonist's deeds. He was favored by an elder and felt that this child Yingguo was like me. He waited for the protagonist to successfully build the foundation and accept him as a disciple. Of course, this is what I said casually, and it may not be very rigorous. In short, in addition to the above shortcomings, there are also some bright spots, so I won't list them one by one. This book is just for practice. I hope the author can write better and better!

The plot from the beginning to the end of revenge for Bai Youan is a bit awkward, but it takes off directly after that, completing the leap from dry food to fairy grass.

The writing was very good at the beginning, very pure and very detailed. The character growth is also very delicate. The emotional handling is not good. You can refer to mortals. It would be better if there are no games and the addition of subsequent games will cause the protagonist's information to change The follow-up digitization is too serious. The golden finger is too powerful. The growth of the protagonist is not reflected. It feels very relaxed. It does not have the spirit of hard work and specialization at the beginning. It just feels very relaxed and casual. Come on the author. The story is well written. Too many elements affect the perception.

Seeing Chapter 14, it's so ridiculous! The protagonist led the brothers to go out to cut down trees, and encountered a fight with three Yuanshen Lords. After the protagonist's many efforts, 10 people died. When he returned to the sect, the sect did not ask anything, but first expelled the three leaders from the Taoist temple. The reason was that they were dead. Ridiculous! Does this kind of irresistible factor also count? If the sect does this, it will only lead to the absence of people who dare to do things, because the more people do it, the more likely it is to cause trouble. It is simply ridiculous that the leader should be treated like this when something happens due to irresistible factors like this. Look at who will bother to organize others to do things in the future. In this way, people in the sect will only think about whether they have responsibilities before doing things, instead of thinking about the rewards for doing things well. In a world like cultivating immortals, this way of handling things is simply ridiculous!

The previous article is very good. It is really incomprehensible that the sect must find a scapegoat. In reality, there is indeed such a situation of finding a deputy to take the blame. But this plot does not fit with yours. You are like on earth. Suddenly aliens come and beat a lot of people to death in a certain area. Then you find a local person responsible for road construction to take the blame. Let's not talk about whether it is necessary to find someone to take the blame. Just say that you have to follow the Basic Law when looking for someone to take the blame. At least find someone from the local garrison to take the blame. To be honest, there is no need to find someone to take the blame in this situation. If you do, it won't appease people's hearts.

The protagonist is a stupid pig who is disgusting to pure people.

This book is one of the most unique and imaginative fairy tale novels I have read in the past few years. It can even be said that since I started reading online articles in 2006, there are not many fairy tales that can compare with this book.

It's really interesting to invent a clock in the world of immortality. I have been practicing immortality for hundreds of years, and I can fly in the sky, move mountains and fill the sea. But I can't figure out what time it is and I have to look at the watch. This immortal cultivation is really amazing. What kind of patents are there? Are the people of the Immortal Sect free? When I don't do anything every day, I just watch others produce a few watches. What kind of immortality is this? It would be great to be in business. Let's build a WTO and break down the trade barriers in the world of immortality. Create a United Nations to pay attention to human rights issues in the world of immortality, and condemn others for nothing.

I was poisoned to death when I saw the protagonist's natal talisman with its bullshit rules and opposites, the opposite professions, and the unique profession. Are you, the author, a fake immortal?