The Knight's Endless Journey

It is recommended that there should be no more slender descriptions. The tall knight is masculine and handsome, which is more suitable for the profession of knight. The telegraph pole knight in Japanese comics is very unconventional. How can he exert his strength without any flesh on his body? The absence of a general's belly is already a beautification of the knight, and there is no need for more.

How can I put it this way? It's a very well written novel. The protagonist is a true knight, even a saint, not in a derogatory sense. Although many of Qidian's novels are relatively violent, it is good to have some positive energy. I just hope that the protagonist can know how to adapt, not be too pedantic, and also know basic common sense of life and the principles of dealing with others. After all, he also has the memory of a time traveler, especially a teacher. As for fairness, I think it is impossible for civilians to achieve true fairness without transcendence. They can only improve productivity and make civilians more useful. Even in real society, fairness cannot be achieved, let alone in a different world. I don't think you should get too entangled in this aspect. It is difficult to write well if you don't have enough writing skills. Come on, author!

Apart from the fact that the protagonist has a bit of a Madonna tendency, he likes to be a subordinate everywhere, and his brain is a bit weak. As a noble, he doesn't understand any common sense. Do noble parents normally have such stupid parents? My family is an aristocrat, and I don't teach the protagonist any aristocratic methods or how to control his subordinates. The protagonist behaves like a novice. Is this treating the protagonist like a waste?

The protagonist's behavior is very strange In the game world, there is selfless chivalry But I have never tried to teach the people in that world how to gain strength The settings of the knight method say that without blood, you cannot condense the life seeds to become a knight, but it does not seem to say that you can't forcefully train a knight apprentice (maybe you read too quickly and skipped important settings) In addition, I also got the local fighting method later, and I didn't think about teaching it at all According to the last time I left, that The land is already very dangerous The protagonist has left and is not sure how long it will take to come back According to the character of the protagonist in the book, even if he may not be able to learn the knight method, I think it is impossible not to try to teach it. Anyway, a dead horse is a living horse doctor, right? What's more, I got the local fighting method later According to the protagonist's personality, he will definitely teach it (I think the author takes the blame here) This feels a little buggy and the behavior is completely inconsistent with the protagonist's personality

It's better if the protagonist is a pure time traveler. The natives who have the memories of time travelers don't like this.

Can my slender hands become thicker? Who would be better off practicing riding or fighting? What was your thinking about writing ten years ago? I just like to write about strawweight, and I can beat heavyweights. It looks very awkward, just like the previous novels, where the handsome young man is thin and thin. But it can draw the hardest bow, the one without finger guards. Just like someone boasts that he doesn't use bait when fishing, doesn't need to make nests, and the hook is still straight, and then he goes crazy fishing for giant things. You see, the fishing guy doesn't scold him until he goes to see Jiang Taigong. . . These days, it's not fashionable to have a small body, but it's to have big muscles.

After reading the latest chapter, about the protagonist's Madonna character Qidian is indeed more popular with the protagonist having a darker character, but I have read a lot of novels with righteous protagonists. This type is closest to the traditional Western fantasy adventure stories of kings, similar to the brave and the devil. But the protagonist in this book feels weird no matter how I look at it. First of all, the protagonist turns out to be a third-rate dandy knight. How can he directly transform into a Virgin because of the fusion of past life memories? Brother, is your span too big? And if you want to think about some righteous and passionate non-sexy articles, what do you want readers to watch, and where is the growth of the protagonist? This is a whole novel to be written, a complete life of the protagonist. You, the protagonist, started out sacrificing yourself for others, risking your own life and death, and even risked your life for a small town in the game. I just want to say that the author must have been very happy when writing, and he would have been moved by his own passion for justice, "Wow, this is my ideal knight of justice!" But the author, you have to think about it. What did you let the readers see? As the reader sees it, the protagonist just gives in without thinking. You can write about justice if you want, but isn't it a bit unreasonable to write like this directly from the beginning? The protagonist starts off as a playboy, should you make him realize the cruelty of life little by little? Slowly growing and starting to protect humans? From an aristocratic dandy, he begins to realize the value of life, slowly discovers his true heart, and awakens his will to protect others. Then, due to the collision between the ideal of justice and the cruel reality, he finally understands what true justice is in life, completing the growth and transformation from a dandy to a saint. Is this more of a recognition of chivalry and admiration for saints? Instead of the story feeling tepid and holy like it does now? The protagonist of the Righteous Saint is a bit niche now. He starts out as a saint directly without the growth and transformation of the protagonist. In the eyes of most people, it will just be a holy book. Does it make people feel a little too dull?

Madonna, do you know what Madonna is? This is the true spirit of chivalry, being able to help others to the best of your ability. Is this society already so cold and dark? A group of people chanted the Holy Mother. Can't there even be a truly good person in the novel?

I saw Chapter 70 The protagonist and the demon species exchanged lives for lives, and I felt that the writing was not very good. Sacrifice for the collective is admirable, but the subsequent handling of the problem is problematic. It stands to reason that in that situation, all the experience points should have been used up, and the role of the talent of flesh and blood activity should have been known early on, and then the choice was to exchange injuries for lives, and then use the regression feature to escape. This is more reasonable, rather than the protagonist thinking that he was going to die, the author added a setting and then lived, which felt very abrupt.

When I saw Chapter 69, I didn't want to read it at first, but I decided to read it because I knew someone who wasn't very relevant would die. I originally wanted to be the main character who dies, and I finish the whole book here. Later on in Chapter 73, the protagonist wants to use his own blood to exchange blood for someone who is not related to him, and he does not hesitate. I don't really like dark literature, and I'm happy to help people within my ability. But we cannot agree with the value of benefiting others at the expense of ourselves. Withdrawn