Online Game: Barbarism and Civilization

I have to finish the book I wrote with tears in my eyes. I still feel very good after reading more than a hundred chapters. There are really not many articles about online game lords fighting for hegemony. Well-written articles are even rarer. Apart from Lords of Civilized Worlds, this book is the second good book I have seen.

After reading more than seventy chapters, if you don't climb the technology tree or farm, the protagonist will be useless except for fighting. Isn't the fun of playing this kind of game just farming and then fighting? If you don't farm, the fun will be half as much. The protagonist's character is exactly the same as Yuan Shao's evaluation. He cherishes his life when doing big things, and forgets his life when he sees small profits. So far, I don't know why I want to join a guild. It's completely useless. I said it was for girls, but I didn't write anything.

Why is it so difficult for simple online game novels to become popular nowadays? Except for games like League of Legends, which have many fans in reality. The most important thing is that the protagonist is successful in the game, but in reality he is just an ordinary person. Everything is like a dream, and a lot of excitement and sense of substitution are lost in an instant. So most of the more famous online game novels in the past two years either have the protagonist travel into the game, or the game world is actually a real world. This avoids the embarrassing scene where the protagonist is the king of the game and the reality is ordinary. Of course, there are also some good novels about pure online games, such as Rebirth of Thieves and Full-time Master, which I read a few years ago. This is a test of the author's writing skills. I haven't seen many similar novels in the past two years. Pure online game novels are still relatively unpopular. After reading the first thirty or forty chapters, although there are many flaws, if the author treats this book as a real world and writes it in another category, the performance of this book should be far more than this.

The protagonist's character is very bad... Since you agree to attack together, don't be timid, conserve your strength, do big things without sacrificing your own life, see small profits and forget the big life. Yuan Shao is a reality after all. It's too much for you to be so bad in a game.

Although this is a 19-year-old book, the author is still a novice and shouldn't be too demanding. However, it feels like a pity that you didn't write well on such a good subject matter!          ，，，，It is very clear and understandable, so that everyone can understand it, and the writing is also very fluent, which is very good for a novice author. I really need to praise this. I believe that after you write more, you should make great progress, and you should learn better in the future. But I just read it, and it seems that you only have one book behind it, and it doesn't have many words, so I probably haven't written it in the past few years. It's a pity, after all, the author still has great potential. Let's get down to the main topic, let's talk about this book. From my own perspective, the subject matter is really good. Among the farming books, it can be regarded as a pretty good book. After all, I have read a lot of farming books, and I have also read a little about various modes, so this is the first time I see a subject like yours. I have only played Civilization 6 in the Civilization series. I played it at the beginning of this year. I played it briefly because I often couldn't find anyone to play with. It was too boring to play single-player, so I stopped playing it later. So I can probably understand some of the jokes about Civilization 5 you mentioned in your book. But in your book, Civilization is mentioned too many times, which is too disturbing and irritating. Especially a few chapters, which seem to be two or three chapters, actually talk about this thing specifically. At that time, it was from the perspective of the protagonist, talking about the Civilization series games he had experienced before playing Nuwa. Who don't know that the author is talking about your own experience in previous games? I originally wanted to just say a few sentences to let everyone get familiar with your game style, but you ended up talking in a long way, and kept talking, and kept talking, and actually talked for several chapters. At that time, all my patience was exhausted in an instant, and I endured the discomfort and continued reading. Later, when I saw more than 200 chapters, I really couldn't stand it anymore, so I stopped reading. So, your storytelling in those chapters is really a very, very big problem. Otherwise, I should have been a little more patient and continued to read hundreds of chapters. This is the first problem, that is, you go off topic too much, and bring in all the nonsense and nonsense, which makes everyone frown. You must know that you are writing a game or a game novel. When you introduce the background, you introduce the background, and when you introduce the elements, you introduce the elements. You talk about so many irrelevant things and consume the readers' patience. It is really a failure. Let's talk about the second question, I think it is also the most important question, that is, it is cool. If you put it in an online game, it is a surprise. Even if this is an online game about farming, it is no exception. What is a surprise? For online games, it is equipment, skills, attributes, etc., This is a surprise, and for you For this article, surprises should be props, wonders, resource points and generals. However, I didn't feel any surprise at all. On the contrary, it felt very dull. Do you know why? You clearly gave the protagonist so many wonders, so many props, and powerful generals and resources, but why don't we feel happy or surprised? Because there are none. You haven't taken advantage of them at all. Although data confusion is a common problem in online games, and everyone is very stubborn, others are not as obvious or exaggerated as you. Their key data is still very well written and very accurate. You can't write it well even if it is key. You just follow your mood and what you think is needed. Just write how you want to write, regardless of the context. Take the simplest food as an example. In the earliest days, you took dozens of people to catch fish in the lake. It only took a while. In an hour or two, you caught thousands of kilograms of fish with your bare hands, more than you could eat. Then you arranged for women, the elderly, and children to catch fish. You didn't have to worry about food, but what happened later? You also said that you can't catch it with your bare hands, it's too difficult, and you need tools. Then you made some simple tools, and it became easier again. Later, you said that even with tools, you can't catch fish. You need better tools, and you made better tools, and then you can catch fish. After a while, when the Swan people came, they said that no matter how good the tools are, they can't catch fish. No, you need a swan tribe that can swim and the best tools to catch fish. I really laughed out loud when I saw it. Just write whatever you really need. Just write it regardless of what you have done before. No, I won't even mention your junior fishing technology production craftsmanship that you ordered as soon as you left Novice Village 800 years ago. Tools, intermediate fishing technology production tools, let's talk about your Hundred Techniques Contest with a Thousand Tech Points. It looks like such an awesome skill. Talents from all walks of life, automatic development, automatic learning, automatic upgrade and advancement, etc. In the end, it was just an introduction at that time, and it was never mentioned again. It was just that one skill introduction, and later it faced the territory. Development, promotion of various industries, etc., Nothing is said. The human race in your territory, from the first dozens, hundreds, thousands, to tens of thousands, is now hundreds of thousands, probably three to four hundred thousand, because you are too chaotic, so I don't know how many there are. Tell me, what are they doing in the territory, just sleeping? Taking care of children? Do nothing else and just wait to eat? Hundreds of thousands of civilians open their eyes and close their eyes every day waiting for food? There are no talents in any industry? You build cities, cut trees, pave roads, build houses, etc., All of which are done by human armies, orcs, dwarves and the like. As for other people, they can't do anything, right? You have to say, because all of your men are soldiers. After all, all your men are soldiers, and there is not one more. The number of troops there is wrong. Your army is too small. Although you have avoided introducing these specific data, your army is still too small. There are always not enough people. If you want to go out and invade your home, there will be no one. If you don't invade, you will not develop at home. Anyway, it's just all kinds of ignoring, ignoring and ignoring again, and not talking about them all. According to your approximate data, before the open world dungeon, you had at least 150,000 to 200,000 troops. Even if I only calculated based on your lowest ratio of 1:3, taking all your races into account, you should have at least 500,000 civilians. You said that with so many people, they should not go fishing, farming, vegetable farming, herding, being fishermen, farmers, etc.? But no, why do you feel this way? Because you said that you are short of food and can't feed so many people at all times. I won't talk about your natural wonders, such as the Golden Mountain with one million kilograms of food in a month, the Tree of Life with 10 million fruits in a month, and three fruits in one day. I don't even dare to think about these things, for fear that if I think too much, the data will collapse and I can't stand it anymore, so I insist on watching it. Forget it, I digressed, the talk was a bit rambling, but the example given above should make it very clear, it is about surprises, about having fun, everything you give to the protagonist is not used, it is all wasted. When I first saw Wei Wuzu and Longquan Sword, I was really happy, thinking that good things were coming, about to take off, but as a result, they basically never played, and I never saw any of their highlight moments until the opening. It was like this before in the world. You Wei soldiers were useless, and you hired a white heavy infantry. I really felt like I was going to lose my brain at the time. There were too many and so on. With the Tree of Life, they said there was no shortage of food, but then they said they were short of food every day. They robbed countless seeds, countless vegetables, and then there were countless resources. As a result, they never planted the land. Everyone in the family was sleeping, and the seeds were all moldy in the warehouse. Why, because you said there was a food shortage. If you planted the land, would you be short of food? The fish in Lake Victoria cannot be caught because of the lack of food. The previous example makes it very clear. All kinds of capricious operations will be overturned immediately as long as the plot needs to be written. The same is true for military commanders. In addition to a civil servant Shiraishi Hai, he has six and a half stars in intelligence and six stars in politics, because he is equivalent to I have written a few more about the general manager, the prime minister, etc., And then Bai Ze fought one or two battles. Others have not been mentioned at all, and they have disappeared. Then don't write down their attributes or star ratings in the first place. With your seven-star force, China will be invincible. In a country with billions of people, there is no one No one can compare to you. There is only one Jiang Youwei who got to Seven Stars a day after tomorrow. Originally, you wanted to express that the protagonist is awesome and rare in the world. Seven Stars is too difficult. We can understand it and this is normal. But in the end, you got yourself a bunch of Seven Stars subordinates, such as Seven Stars of Strength, Seven Stars of Agility, Seven Stars of Endurance, Seven Stars of Intelligence, and so on. There is more than one, several, all like this. The key is that you write it when you write it. Next, the protagonist should be awesome, but no, then they basically have no role, and they are basically lost in the crowd. There is no highlight moment, and there is no one. So, why do you make them so awesome? Playing tricks on us? Did you create a cool thing and then forget about it? It's good that you have at least one or two in your early years, but you have forgotten all the props, and they are all rubbish. You have bought 10,000 props, and none of them are useful. They are all gathering dust in the warehouse. One of them has not been used. You said that the protagonist is a poor guy who is very stingy and loves money. You said that even if he sells all the props, you can contact a big guild to contact them and sell them all, and then Rip off other people's meals, and then get a lot of money yourself, enjoy yourself in the real world, buy a car and a house, and pretend to be a bit embarrassed. Although it is very tacky, it is also a bit of fun. No, just put the things in the warehouse to eat dust, leave so many things alone, anyway, everything, all the good things, all the adventures, all the surprises, all slowly faded away, and in the end not a word was mentioned. Of course, it is not mentioned at all, but at most it is mentioned. The comparison of strength has never been about how other players have developed, what level the protagonist is, what level he is, how he compares to others. He never knows. Think of us as the author, and you know everything in your mind. Well, this is the level at this time, no problem. Is that so? To be honest, although the main theme of the novel you want to express is fighting, you have fought too many times, and your writing on fighting is not very good. Your level is so-so. Starting from the primitive tribe, you have been reckless, and you are still reckless until now. Except for the time when you dug a hole in the ground to attack the city, there are basically no times when you are not reckless. The routine is to lead people into the formation, break through the formation, and then the battle ends. You want to say that ordinary people all have two-star force, and powerful three-star force. You, who has seven-star force, are really awesome and unstoppable. As a result, ordinary people basically have four, five, five or six stars. You say, they are all like this. In the era of cold weapons, how can you be so invincible by yourself? Especially those from the orc race, and when I look at it carefully, I really feel that the data you wrote is too loose. You said that everyone has the same data, but you said that this one runs fast and that one has good endurance. Let me ask you, why is this, and why are you the author? If you set all human beings as two-star qualified adult males, then the wolf tribe will have four-star endurance and three-star agility, the tiger tribe will have five-star force and five-star agility, the elephant tribe will have six-star strength and one-star agility, the rat tribe will have one-star strength and four-star agility for digging holes and stealing things. You can see the differences between the various races and the advantages and disadvantages of each race. The result is good for you. They are all four stars, five stars, and six stars, and all attributes are like this. The gap is not big at all. Then what is the point of setting these attributes? Wouldn't it be better if you just don't write them down and just write the characteristics? Shooting yourself in the foot? I want everyone to have a clear understanding, but in the end they are all confused, and especially the three attributes of intelligence, spirit, and politics. Except for the Druid intelligence and spirit, which is useful for other races, I don't see any use at all. You will write about it later, but I'm sorry, I really can't stand it. It's too bland and not exciting. It's full of various small flaws. I can't stick to it. To sum up, the subject matter is good, the creativity is also very good, and the elements are very rich, but it is a pity that the author is a novice and his level is not good. He cannot complete the logical closed loop in many places and is a bit contradictory. The character of the protagonist is also the same. He is not a villain, but he is capricious and has no clear personality. Then the most important issue is to make it cool. Although you say this is not a cool article, but Yes, you also need to have a climax, but many of your climax parts are not satisfactory, and there is always a little bit of a feeling. The joy of victory every time, and the good results it brings, are not that strong, and then slowly it becomes more and more dull, and you are less and less looking forward to it. Even if there are new adventures later, you will feel that the final result is just like that, there is nothing better, and then you can't keep watching, that's the feeling. But maybe it's my own problem. After all, this is a novel written in 19 years, and the author is also a novice. Maybe the requirements are too high!

I found a bug. The setting in the game is that billions of players around the world are playing this game, and each player has his own plane. It seems that each plane is not small. So the question is, after the global hegemony begins, how big will the earth be after the fusion of these planes? The real earth is more than 500 million square kilometers, and each of these player planes is at least 100 square kilometers. Assuming there are 5 billion lords, then the fused earth will also be 500 billion square kilometers, which is 1,000 times that of the real earth. However, it is found in the game that the map is not that big in fact, and 100 times is not bad. Then it was discovered in the game that the author easily reached the level of all players, or all players in a certain area. To be honest, if there were so many lords and players who wanted to gather to kill someone, there would have to be tens of millions of players, not to mention hundreds of millions. With so many lords, the number of soldiers contributed by one person is a lot, but it was not shown in the game. Whether this is a bug or not, the writing is okay, but the big data is not organized well, which is a bit of a pity.

The subject matter of this book is quite good, but why is it so frustrating to read? A diamond treasure chest item can be sold for tens or even millions. The main character is an orphan and poor. Because he is afraid that a player who invades his territory will hack him online and ruin the reputation of a small guild he just joined, he not only lets him go, but also coaxes him with good food and drinks and asks him to leave. What if someone else posts a hack? I don't know if it's true or not. It's strange that this type of game territory has been wiped out. Tens of millions of people are hating each other. Who will care about you, a newcomer with nothing. Moreover, it is not a powerful self-media. It is difficult for you to search for his posts. The key is that from a diamond treasure chest to a gold treasure chest, you have lost millions in one go. What kind of family can tolerate this?

How many people have been able to get through this in the beginning?

Veteran Civilization 6 players should reward and comment first before reading the book. I have seen "Civilized Lords of All Realms" before, and it seems to be a similar work. But the lord of all realms collapsed after rushing out of the earth

I think this book is better because of its novel setting, the character of the protagonist, the settings of the troops, the spectacles, props, etc., Which I find interesting. The shortcomings are that the writing is indeed a bit poor, some fights are over in a flash, the war scenes are not exciting enough, and some of the spectacles are just like a joke. I can feed hundreds of thousands or millions at once. Oh my god, the author, you know how many people this is. Spectacles can't be better than nb. . Because the wonders in Civilization 5 are mainly auxiliary types, many of them cannot play a big role. After reading the first two hundred chapters, I still feel that I hope the author writes more supporting characters. The characters are not full enough, and the settings are good but a bit sloppy, such as the elves' war trees and tree shepherds in the first few chapters. I was very excited when I read it because I have played Warhammer too much. There are also some aliens, such as dragons, and these settings are written out and cannot be seen. Moreover, some general data under the protagonist are really sloppy. 6 Stars out of 7 stars. Feelings are everywhere. Although it is useless to say these words now, the author has written so many words, but I still want to say that if the author writes another book, he must fulfill my little wish 😍