The Ultimate Dao of Dutian

Cheng Yuan's face was cold, with blood flowing down half of his face. He looked at the overwhelming enemies, and his face gradually became twisted and ferocious; "You forced me!" He roared, then stretched out his hand to grab his lower body, and his palms suddenly clenched tightly! "Poof" An inaudible sound sounded, and he squeezed his fragile Gao Wan to burst! "Pain value +999999999999999999999999999999"

To be honest, the author's writing style is still good. The plot is also pretty good

So far: spiritual grass, non-toxic, investment-friendly. Don't rush to criticize when reading this book. Be patient when you see suspected poison spots. You will be detoxified after a few chapters. July 1, 2019

Story background: Fantasy world (partially historical fairy tale). Story style: traditional fantasy + passionate battle + friendship. Brief comment: My name is Cheng Yuan, a time traveler who came to this world at the age of six when his parents passed away. In this world, there are ghosts and monsters, and people live in fear. So in this world, if you want to survive, you want to protect the people you want to protect! You can only get stronger... Keep getting stronger. When he was sixteen years old, he awakened from the system and relied on the system's unique methods to become the village's number one genius. But I found that it was not enough, because I am still a mortal and the system is stuck at this moment. Fortunately, in that year, in the midst of life and death, I became a heavenly being and began to walk towards the true path in this world. He picked up the sword in his hand and chanted Guan Gong's words. Cut into the sky with one knife, destroying everything that wants to hinder me! In this world, you can only survive by becoming stronger! Summary of advantages: 1. In terms of writing style: "cool" is just one word. Generally speaking, the writing style is traditional fantasy, more serious than playful. But the advantage lies in the combat scenes created under this writing style. It has the kind of scene where cold weapons collide and the overall fighting feeling of the protagonist is perfect, and it's very enjoyable to watch. Coupled with the background settings in this book, there are many battle scenes, which is great. 2. Plot control: power limitation. According to the script setting, the protagonist should be able to become an invincible protagonist in the early stage, punching the instructor and flying away the villain with one kick. But in the story, the author feels that he is aware of this and limits the protagonist's strength. Although the feeling of invincibility is gone, at least when fighting, it becomes more passionate. 3. An author who gets better and better the more he writes. At the beginning of the story, the author said that he is a new author. In terms of description, it can actually be seen that although he has written a book before, he must be a new author. As a new author, I can honestly say that there are quite a few faults in the early stage, and the settings are not perfect either.
But! The author is making progress. If you keep reading, you will find that the more you write, the plot will be perfected, some poisonous points will disappear, and the protagonist will feel more and more interesting. Disadvantages; As for the shortcomings, first of all, the third point is combined with the advantages. The author is a newcomer, so some disadvantages in the early stage are inevitable, such as old routines. As a book fan, I can guess the subsequent development in some plots. Secondly, the protagonist has the issue of time travel. I suddenly discovered that if the protagonist travels to a different world as a child and then grows up, the character will basically not match the setting of the time traveler. This was true for the last book I read, and the same is true for this book. The character after the time travel will not feel like the person who traveled through time. Finally, there are actually some problems in some settings. It will be quite tangled to combine the upper and lower connections, such as the problem of exercises. But after all, the setting system is a supplement, and the battle in this book is the top priority. Story direction: As for the story direction, the existence of "underworld" is revealed in the story, and the story also lays out the foreshadowing of some characters and villains. In the later stage, the protagonist should return to the place where he started to solve some things as his strength improves, and then start the plot of the battle against the underworld. The protagonist is currently a low-level soldier, and the follow-up should be quite long. Recommended audience: As for the reader group, in terms of writing style, it is recommended to readers who like battle scenes and use traditional fantasy and romance. As for the subject matter, some ancient character backgrounds and fantasy underworld and fairyland. Final summary: After reading it, I ran to the book review section and saw that a commenter said it right: "This book should be a steady stream, don't pay too much attention to the present." After all, I am a newcomer, and if I take it more seriously, I will really lose. Overall, although the previous text and settings are not perfect, the author has been making progress. Moreover, the subsequent plot and character creation are becoming more and more combat-oriented. The image of Guan Gong, the protagonist holding a big sword, suddenly made me feel very comfortable. In addition, this story is basically a hand-to-hand combat in the cold weapon era, and the battle scenes are really exciting to watch. If you add that the background theme of the story is mainly about combat. I think this book should be a paradise for readers who like to watch battle scenes! So here I strongly recommend a book for readers who like to read combat fantasy. Don't mind the details! When we come on stage, we just draw our swords and strike. Finally, I would like to emphasize that the pain in the introduction belongs to the character creation in the early stage, and the pain in the later stage has been replaced by something.

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