The Immortal Path of Dharma Forms

Before telling another story. First of all, let's talk about the time traveler Zhang Zhiping. I think of this person and sing about him in a story. Death is painful and sad. These things are difficult to resist, but they are inevitable in life. All we have to do is accept it and face it. "Qianqian said that you are a person who will never be sad."

I have a suggestion for the author: please stop using "damn it!" As the protagonist's catchphrase. Before, whenever something happened, he'd immediately say, "Damn it, I was careless!" It's a bit better now, shortened to "damn it!", But in this chapter, you use "damn it!" At the beginning of every paragraph, which really feels awkward.

This book is a rare gem! It's hard to believe this is the author's first book. Aside from a few minor flaws at the beginning, the subsequent plot arrangement, fight scenes, and overall structure have the potential to become masterpieces.

I've been subscribing to your book since the beginning, and I hope you can continue to maintain such a vibrant and imaginative mind. Also, I think that for the Golden Core stage, the protagonist should follow the path of a Celestial Immortal.

I gave up when I saw those women. The beginning was well written, and I read a few pages, but when I saw that they wanted to take responsibility for that woman's illness, I just couldn't take it anymore. Are there any colleagues here?

I couldn't continue reading from chapters 22 to 23. The beginning was alright, but the character of that woman and Zheng Changfa was utterly disgusting, with the added twist of fate and self-inflicted misfortune. It's far worse than the 10-year-old "A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality." The characters, plot, and personalities read like a typical urban or fantasy tale of a protagonist showing off and getting revenge. I wonder how many people dropped the book from this point.

This book is terrible because of its fatalistic plot! What era are we living in? Still writing about the protagonist and antagonist being destined to meet and be enemies? So everything is predetermined. Does anyone still enjoy this outdated storytelling style?

Commemorating the first anniversary of the death of the eunuch Xia Faxiang After being criticized countless times for its outrageous anti-theft system, Faxiang finally abandoned the book. I don't know what the author's mindset was when writing it, but this book has always been one of my favorites.

Having read up to Chapter 34, the poison has taken hold. Even if a bunch of people say the later chapters are better, what's the use? I've endured one poisonous point after another, and then you just go and kiss her, unable to move at the sight of a woman (knowing that you'll definitely be cured later is a huge benefit, no doubt about it).

Originally, the third to last chapter was readable, but now even the fifth to last chapter is unreadable. With anti-piracy measures this good, you're unbeatable. You're the king of anti-piracy on Qidian. No one in heaven or on earth can compare to you.