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The first time I came across novels in junior high school was the book "Skeleton". I borrowed the physical book "Temple" from a classmate. At that time, I didn't know why this book was so popular in school. I have read a few books in the Holy Temple, but the plots are not complete. The first chapter I read is Zhongqian World. I don't understand why, but it is very interesting to read. Later I got a set of "The Dragon Crossing the River" and couldn't put it down. At that time, I had actually started to read some online novels, but the ones I read were mostly gangster novels, and I couldn't figure out what the difference between physical books and online novels was. After reading "The Way of the Dragon", I thought that I had not finished "Temple" yet, so I searched online and found out that these physical novels are essentially online novels. "Temple" is my first contact with the fantasy genre in online novels. After reading it, I couldn't stop myself. I read all the Skeleton novels from beginning to end, including Mobile Storm, Armed Storm, Neptune Festival, King of Kai, and Domination of the World. Of course, except for the Three-Eyed Love Spell, this book seemed too paper-consuming. I'm not trying to hide it. I was a junior high school student when I read these books and stayed up all night reading pirated copies. Now that I've gone back and refinished my tickets, I think I haven't finished them either. Armed Storm and the Temple must have been reprinted at the starting point. "Star Wars Storm" is the first novel that I follow every day, and it is also the first novel that I switched from pirated copies to genuine ones. Although some people say it is a routine work, I feel that it is also a truly mature work of Skeleton. The routine is very stable and steady. Later, in "Battle Frenzy", I was also very energetic in the beginning. The plot of the cross wheel made me feel déjà vu, but I didn't care about the routine when I was watching it. It was just fun. I don't know what happened. I was busy for a while, so I left the novel unread for a few days. Then I came to my senses and finished it. I said that neither the plot nor the realm of the protagonist can reach the end, then the book is considered to be unfinished. Okay, it's just a bad ending. In fact, Skeleton's books were a bit bad in the past, but not so exaggerated. Until now, I don't dare to read the ending of Fighting Frenzy. In fact, from the beginning of "Fighting Frenzy", you can also feel that Skull is a little bit wanting to change. The heroine of the love at first sight series at the beginning was separated later, and the female companion who accompanied the route in the previous routine was replaced by the heroine. This didn't seem like a big deal at the time, but looking back, thinking about it, it has already begun to look like this in writing. After "Battle Frenzy" ended, Skull turned around and wrote an advertisement for League of Legends. I was not interested, so I stayed away for the time being. Later, I read "Yu Jiutian", and found that it was a book about skeletons. I buried my head and read it again, but I felt uncomfortable reading it. I opened and closed my mouth and said it was the Wang brothers, Lao Wang, and he was looking for a change in style, but this book made me uncomfortable when I read it. I didn't read much, so I abandoned the book the first time. Of course I said I threw it away, but actually I didn't really throw it away, I just put it on the bookshelf. After a long period of time, Skeleton started writing "Mechanical Storm" again. I had a good impression of this book, and it was back to Skull's comfort zone. However, I didn't finish it, and I kept up with it for a while. Maybe I was busy, so I put it down for the time being. Later, I didn't know when it would end, so I didn't read it again, so I just kept putting it away. The last one is the current book "Gods". I don't want to complain about it. When I first discovered this book, the first volume had just been completed, and I started to pick it up immediately. Although the beginning was not good, I felt very good until the end of the first volume. It was a reversal, touching, and it broke out of the previous routine, but it was not written blindly. The second volume is a follow-up read. When I read it, I felt it was okay to be honest. There are many twists and turns. It seems that Skeleton wants to combine the suspense route in depth. I am also a fan of suspense and mystery novels. I also support Skull's transformation in this direction. Of course, there are still a lot of embarrassments. I know very little about the skeleton of the Tianli School. Is this supposed to correspond to the physics in the previous Storm series routines? The cool thing about non-combat professions. But in physics, you can use nouns, and others won't be embarrassed. In the humanities and social sciences, you still make such surprising flattery, which makes others laugh; and in "The Count of Monte Cristo", I can certainly understand that the old-school master Skeleton can't bear to say that the protagonist Gang Wen copied another author's novel, but is "The Count of Monte Cristo" really suitable? You serialized "The Count of Monte Cristo" in a newspaper, and it caused a sensation just one chapter away. I would say that it would be more suitable to replace it with "Sherlock Holmes", and it can also tie in with the suspense route of the plot. However, no matter what, it felt at the time that the flaws were not concealed, and everything was developing in a good direction. Although I want to complain a bit, at least I won't feel uncomfortable. But unfortunately, things had to turn out not to be that smooth. I was slow to catch up. When I got bored, I turned around and wanted to review old books. But there were unread books on the bookshelf, so I stopped reading old books and read "Yu Jiutian". If you can endure the endless description of Lao Wang, you can still watch the first half of "Yu Jiutian". The anti-routine point is that the protagonist is no longer an invincible style based on strength, but has a bit of a misunderstanding style. This book is a bit like a skeleton carnival, with elements of the Kaio, Neptune Festival, and the Holy Temple all stuffed into it. The taste of the book at the beginning is also obviously that of a harem. The older pseudo-heroine first falls in love with the protagonist, and that's how the writing of "Martial Storm" began. As a result, problems started to appear in the middle. The female orc and the stupid guy had the intention of pairing up. In the second half, the game started to end crazily, and it jumped into a big realm. Because of the bad ending, the descriptions of many female characters are not good or bad, which is understandable, but it is really incomprehensible that you can chase the protagonist all the time, and even give him away to the ambiguously written female principal in the middle. How many years have you been writing novels? In your previous novels and dramas, you always had one or two female protagonists, but you always kept your confidante? Sending a Girl, this newbie writer knows the poisonous points and you can actually write them. Are you brainwashed by feminists or female videos? Now that I think about it, there seems to be a plot in "Yu Jiutian" that shows off women's rights. I'm afraid they haven't really been brainwashed. Thinking about it, it seems that the current "Gods" also has this description, thinking about fear. Normally I shouldn't read Skull's books anymore after Skull was poisoned like this, but I had already read "Gods" before reading "Yu Jiutian", and I felt good about it, so I tolerated it. What if Skull repented after reading the scoldings in the reviews of that book? I didn't dare to watch "Army Storm", so I went back and played "Temple" again, which was a bit of a recovery. In "Temple", Wang Meng became a god and married a wife, slept with several female demons, and in "Yu Jiutian" he became a super stallion. I complained about this but did not criticize it. Then how come Wang Meng can sow seeds in Yu Jiutian, and Wang Feng has to be a 🐢🐢? Oh, it turns out I thought he was a loser. After reading so many books, he is the only magical protagonist who does not rely on himself at all. What do you think this book is like? In short, the church looks good, which shows me my confidence. The setting is fresh, the brothers are passionate, and the female characters are attractive. I could write a novel like this back then, but why has it fallen to this point now? Looking back at Gods again, I felt good by the end of the second volume, okay, and then I entered the third volume and it was over. First of all, water, crazy water, do you remember how many times you wrote "warm family dinner"? Then there is procrastination. How long have you been grinding on the Count of Monte Cristo line without even telling your family? Do you remember this line? And is this thing necessary in any way? I even said that there is no need to hide your strength from family members like Lin Fei. What is the logic of this action? You were not afraid of trouble when you were alone in the second volume, showed yourself to others with Simmons and the second prince, and showed your strength at home to make people feel at ease. It is still related to the plot of the newspaper. The reason for the beauty pageant is unknown. This suggestion itself is very embarrassing. I have never heard of any newspaper becoming popular because of the beauty pageant. The follow-up promotion is completely inconsistent with the main line. Of course, this is biased. After all, who knows what the main plot is until the third volume? To be honest, the third volume till now has not left out the main plot, and the cool points are basically zero. Counting the so-called cool points, the Count of Monte Cristo has disappeared; the Celestial School chose the protagonist for the protagonist, and no one knows about it. Then, no one knows it, and later accepted the protagonist's sister as a disciple. The principal can't figure out how close the protagonist is to the Tianli School. It's cool, it's a bit contrived, but in the end the targets are just a few low-ranking characters from the Round Table. He turned around and gave the medicine to Ying Xiao. Oh, he said that he had misjudged the wrong person before, and then pushed a case over, but the person disappeared again. What kind of medicine can cure the disease? You After providing the medicine, they must do the rest, but in the end, there was a long scene where Lu Shuai went to ask for medicine. It was pure rubbish. Today's latest episode, buying a house and asking for medicine to pick up girls was really "touching". Laugh, why didn't you say that the brothers sold it together? Is this money comparable to the value of the two medicinal materials? Show me here. When it comes to Tang and Lu Shuai, Zhen Ji is not happy about it. What kind of role is Lu Shuai? The brother of the protagonist in the previous routine? The brothers are all childhood sweethearts. Can Lu Shuai and the protagonist live in the same dormitory for more than a month and become brothers here? You said you wanted to write an anti-routine. Lu Shuai takes advantage of the protagonist. He is a smart man and not a pure cliché brother. So does the protagonist's attitude towards him reflect this? Then Tang Danchen is even more abstract. There is a test at the beginning. After the test, the protagonist's ability is confirmed and he is accepted. Then suddenly, he refuses to accept because the protagonist is not satisfied with the fact that he has entered the Order Academy. He gave the potion and said he approved it. However, it turns out that the protagonist is doing the case investigation alone, and he is looking for the magician there. How much pen and ink did you spend writing about these two incredible love affairs? Did you talk so much nonsense when Zhang Xiaojiang and Liu Mei talked? For a character like Tang, if you plan to cast her as a supporting role, shouldn't you focus on her ability? Why did you write so many repetitions of her attitude towards the protagonist? Does the protagonist seem useless? The actual effect is obviously more, but the charm is not as good as Lu Shuai? There is also the written test that just ended, pretending to be a pig to hide your strength, okay, okay? Then you have to act anyway, so why do you want others to avoid it? Cutting off a chapter makes the reader think that he is trying to show off, but when he comes back he is still acting, even acting as if he is injured, but the injury is not fake. After so many years of experience in invincible novels, I can't write a plot well. You can hide your strength, but can't you write that the main character's injuries disappear immediately after he leaves the house? You were originally going to write that the protagonist's disguise could not deceive the referee, but if you wrote that after the protagonist betrayed and failed, the referee immediately told him not to leave, why not recycle this foreshadowing earlier? Isn't it also a good way to let the princess not know the truth, but she can see from the sidelines that the referee pays more attention to the defeated protagonist and has doubts? What on earth are you writing about? What are you thinking about? Now I look back at the first two volumes of this book, and the problems are revealed. The protagonist is busy and desperate, but actually achieves nothing. The first volume is not in-depth, but it is just a failure. The second volume is an investigation, and most of the truth is that the relevant teammates are unwilling to share information. I'm actually curious about how the protagonist's ability to use the Nine-Character Mantra was calculated. Without the protagonist, the prince would have died? What nonsense did you say? I can understand that the old author wants to break out of his own routine and seek change. Shuangwen breaks out of the routine and becomes a writer of 🐢. Except for you, you are probably 🥔, awesome, and on an equal footing with 🥔, progress. I just want to ask Skull, do you think that cool stories and harem stories are particularly unpopular and are just dirty? Is writing this kind of book not worthy of your status? If you think so, then it's really time for us "low-grade" book fans to leave. If your answer is no, then I sincerely give you a suggestion. Go back and read your previous novels to get a feel for them. Then, you can clearly code the outline and details of the book, understand the combat system, and arrange the rhythm smoothly so that the target readers can read it clearly. After finishing these, it is not too late to start writing the book.

Hope it's not a formula storm🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻

Brother, can you write well this time? I read your first novel, and I have read every one of your novels. Starting from the end of Star Wars Storm, the stories have become more and more clumsy, and the routines are the same. Can you make a breakthrough this time? Come on 🙂🙂

It seems that my brother is short of money and spent it. Just to make fun of you, I have been reading his books since the 6th grade, and now I am a graduate student.

The skeleton elf is back to write a book!

Brother, we are the first Silver League after all. I won't say whether we will join or not, but you can at least give us a word and show your face 😅

Ancient things should retire and stop annoying readers.

I just found out it's this author. I remember he wrote a heroine who was too pushy but ended up getting along with someone else. Unfortunately, I only read half of that book.

Let me put it bluntly, who can write an online novel with a sense of intelligence? Every time I read a novel about Zhi Dou, I want to laugh. The great gods rely on their elder brothers to survive, while the little author relies on fantasy to write. 😂

It is not yet in an ideal state, and I feel that there is still a lot of worldview that has not been written. The reversal of one person and one city in the first volume is a little surprising, and it can be said that the worm has been written into the bones. However, in the second volume, the worm seems to have been diluted, and the pseudo-god relics appear. I feel that there are still surprises, twists, or shocks. (O_O;) Skeletons shouldn't disappoint me in this aspect. After all, there won't be any big problems with the plots carefully crafted by the old authors. Many new authors are amazing, but then they can make me sick of stupidity. The old authors don't have this problem, and they are not at the level of stupidity. I hope the old platinum writers will work harder!

I just want to laugh when I read the introduction. Is your IQ high? Just fill up the toilet, silly

After reading the latest chapter, I feel good that it is no longer about the poor boy and the princess. The previous novels were all the same and boring. You don't have to guess the heroine. The most beautiful and noble one is the heroine. Then there is the poor boy who kills the whole world for the princess and becomes a man who dominates everything. It has no meaning, this is very novel. Finally, there is a way to find out who is the heroine, what is the story behind this heroine, etc. The mystery is revealed bit by bit, which is the most wonderful. This is also the reason why the sword comes in the snow and the fire is great, including the thief that the spiritual walker sees is interesting, and the unknown has the fatal gravity.

Your books are really good-looking, such as Mobile Storm and Forever Blade, which are really passionate. The rest of your books are just a bunch of counter-conventions, such as girlfriend betrayal, which are of no use to readers other than disgusting readers.

As mentioned earlier, the protagonist is so awesome. He ranks first in that secret castle. Will he be able to hunt in the mountains after he comes out? Not even a star. What on earth was done in that secret fortress? It was so watery. Ugly.

When I saw it on the shelves, I didn't find it exciting. The writing was not interesting, and the main plot was not visible at all. The protagonist swam aimlessly in the sea for more than 70 chapters. I didn't see any progress in these 70 chapters. There were skipped chapters, which should not have happened. Then it was right not to be popular. If you want to challenge yourself to write a different story, it is not to abandon the advantages that have made you stand out in the past, but to innovate on the basis of those advantages. Personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it.

This b's novel is a template,

The opening is very confusing. The protagonist is so strong, but he ends up not doing well, saying he has been around for three years.

It's 40 chapters, and I just wrote about adding two organizations. And these villains or supporting characters are like they don't have brains. It's outrageous. With the development of science and technology, people's brains don't grow, right?

The first chapter got me hooked. What does it mean that after you climb to a higher place, your family will have a bad life? What kind of magical logic is this? To be honest, you are not suitable for writing books when you are older. The content is completely divorced from reality. Even if this is a novel, you can't write it like this. It is simply treating the readers as cerebral palsy.

This can be called platinum, but the writing is not as good as some new authors.

This thing is actually said to be brain-burning and IQ-improving

Lin Fei is a wife!

If you don't write about school competitions or anything else, I will report you.

I have to stand up and speak out. I feel that there are too many black people! This book is very good-looking, with ups and downs. Compared with those formulaic upgrades and monsters, this book has many unique features! Very very interesting!

The new book "Skeleton" really wants to be both a watch and a memorial. It can't be any fun in one million words, but it is probably the worst book this time. It is very likely to be a eunuch, and the stickers will prove it!

We can still see unrelated sisters in 2025👍👍👍

After reading today's latest chapter, I was disgusted. They are basically all evil people. For their own vulgar kindness, they bully and sacrifice a person who is good to you to this point. Then what is the meaning of your "goodwill"? I feel that these people are all vampires and have no use at all. Especially the night watchers, they are all scum. It really disgusts me. I feel that the only person who is good to the protagonist is the princess. They support each other, unlike other people. It really disgusted me! If I need to sacrifice so much to help you with your little kindness, then maybe your non-existence is the best arrangement!

This language organization ability is amazing, basically two words in one sentence. If we are not writers, then there is nothing to ask for, but if you are a writer, can't you feel whether this basic language is fluent or not? I just started reading it, and it was mentioned in many places in the front. The language organization ability is simply amazing.

The author's writing is too jumpy. He doesn't explain the background at the beginning and hides it all at the back. While reading, I came up with a story about escaping from the castle. I had a background of dice in my body. I suddenly entered the parliament and then a potion and a mysterious place popped up. The potion was okay. When I came out of this mysterious place, I didn't explain how to get in and what I was doing. Later, when I entered the school, I suddenly said that I had traveled through time. On the first day of school, I was chatting with three roommates and the three elements started to add background. As they chatted, they suddenly said that the club was awesome, and then they went directly to recruit new students without any introduction. The president of the club was a fellow from the old castle, and another old castle experiment similar to practical teaching came up? By the way, after the mysterious land was introduced in the middle, the protagonist entered the parliament for the second time and chatted with Aries, and suddenly said that entering the mysterious land was worry-free. I didn't remember where it was mentioned that it couldn't be entered. Was it because I was too jumpy? There is a new setting within a few chapters, and then additional settings within a few chapters. Do everyone understand this worldview by default? I don't watch LOL. Hex suddenly appears mysteriously and there is no explanation for the magic potion. Do you understand?

Li Xin easily thinks of the king, the relics of gods are similar to Genshin Impact, and the classics are similar to the opening of (Orphanage). There is no innovation, only stitching, and stitching elements like Genshin Impact. Pure reply