Don't Mess with That Turtle

This novel is not a novel about exotic beasts, or should be said to be a different kind of fairy tale. However, it is criticized because of the reader group. In other words, as a fairy tale or a fantasy novel, it is good. The characters are very three-dimensional and interesting, even if there are some comparisons in the middle. It's a more common micro-master plot, but his purpose is to fill holes, which is understandable. Personally, I think the meaning of the alien beast novel itself is to be unruly, and it should have a kind of pleasure brought by barbaric destruction, which has been a special feature in the early years. This is a very cool novel, with no intrigues, just savage desires and destruction. Therefore, many authors who want to write in this way have a misunderstanding that they make the protagonist too like a human being. This does not mean that the book is not good-looking. As a traditional upgrade novel and a fantasy system of cultivating immortals, he has There are many advantages, but as his core theme, the alien beasts themselves have conflicts. I have said before that the protagonist is too human-like, and the entanglements caused by people will always bring about conflicts in the theme. It is not that there is no way to solve it, but that way of handling will lead to harmony.

First of all, this book can introduce that the mythical beast is the ceiling of combat power, and then introduce the harmony between humans and beasts, how to protect the transformed monster, and then how important the mythical beast is to the sect Then, trying to enslave the mythical beast... Let's not talk about anything else. After enslaving the hybrid beast, you are still thinking about the mythical beast becoming a god. Are you afraid that the mythical beast will destroy your whole family... Besides, enslaving the mythical beast? How do you let the mythical beasts from the top ten immortal sects look at you? They are all monsters, so they are inherently weak, and is it possible that you can quietly let the enslaved hybrids grow until the mythical beasts come out? Slavery of mythical beasts, is there any difference between this and killing people to sacrifice souls to the mythical beasts? Su Mounian's combat power is close to that of an elder. To see the protagonist's talent, you have to use a demon mirror to see. Isn't this pure Tamar taking off his pants and farting? 😓 Also, it is even more funny to directly use a magic weapon to detect the demon fruit in an area. You can check the outside but you can't check your own home. Why, there is no electricity in the village? For example, I have been monitoring the demon-transforming fruit and why there are no red fruits. It is also very interesting. There is always a process of turning red. Even the ordinary ones are guarded by monsters. Where did the red fruits that have grown for 3,600 years come from? What's more, if it is found that the green ones can't be guarded to turn red? The strength of the mythical beast is transcendent, but those who plot against the mythical beast are a bunch of chickens and dogs. I think you might as well just enslave them directly in the first fifty chapters and then in a twist, the sect is pressured to rescue the protagonist. Okay, I will just talk about the calculations of a few disciple-level little people. The people in the sect are not decisive at all. They dare not love or hate. If you say you want to be enslaved, you will be enslaved. I can't hold it in for a long time

I saw the updated parts from the beginning in one breath. So far, although some parts have not been polished well, it is not a big deal. If I can keep writing in this state, and then fill in all the holes dug with reason and evidence, it will definitely be regarded as a rare first-class novel😏 I really doubt that the author is the vest of a big author🤭

The writing is quite good, but I don't know if it is a shortcoming, because many books have this arrangement. The plot always likes to swing left and right. It is also good at suppressing the protagonist's training time and getting involved in whirlpools at every turn. I don't think it is necessary. The protagonist has always had no sense of security and has been competing at the top level.

Author, do you understand what I mean😁

I finally understood that this kind of novel about strange beasts cannot touch on human beings. When it comes to human beings, it feels like a fantasy novel with a deformed protagonist, except that the protagonist is physically disabled and looks like an animal. Looking back, I have indeed read a lot of books on alien beasts. Some of the better ones dealt with beasts from beginning to end, and the humans they encountered were either villains or sidekicks. As for those alien beasts who hang out with people and can't wait to turn back into human bodies even a hundred chapters ago, they always drive and enjoy themselves while writing, and then collapse. Of course this is my own reading experience. Maybe I am short-sighted and made a mistake.

The leader's wife died, the leader faked his death and escaped, and the shadow was behind the scenes. The little girl recognized the turtle as her father, and the journey of being a daddy turtle officially started. A few years later... (The little girl) the empress unified the world! In the post-federal era, does the era of magic, magic, and empress exist? Keep arguing! Until the Empress Monument appeared, the world knew that her achievements were all related to the Treasure of the Divine Turtle. The whole federation is in a state of excitement, and this begins the era of turtle hunting in the universe...

For me, the biggest poisonous point is the wife. No matter how you fill the gap behind, but in the front, you know that they are a family, but you are still kind to you, and you still have unreasonable thoughts. I really can't stand the three views. Even if you set it to be pregnant before marriage, it's okay to have no father. Everyone has one father, and you still want to be his father!

Let me tell you what I think of these recent chapters. The story in the fantasy world is not much to say, it is very well written. It just happened at the wrong time. The battle was at its climax, and suddenly a heartwarming personal trial came. To be honest, it was very uncomfortable (especially since the trial was still very long). Finally, I want to complain, Guigui has been plotted by his own people again, so he might as well rebel against the sect!

The protagonist's sense of presence in this book is really low. Every time the protagonist and the villain are pecking each other, there are a bunch of big guys around them every day. How do you ask the readers to take on the role? The most important thing is that the protagonist is a time-traveler with a cheating device, and his training route is actually arranged. Can you believe it? Even if this is the author's foreshadowing, you are writing a fantasy novel. Fantasy novels must first highlight the word "cool". I have not seen this at all, and how many readers can stick to it. The protagonist was a waste before it was released. After reading it, it is still the same (mainly because the boss appears too frequently). It feels like the author is deliberately suppressing the protagonist. There is also the issue of female protagonists. No matter what type of novel, I do not reject multiple female protagonists, but one of the female protagonists in this book, Ji Feixue, appears so suddenly (does the author mean that this is foreshadowing and there is an arrangement later?). The key is that "Ji Feixue" makes me feel like a brothel girl. Like this, the main reason is that the author wrote Su Huanian very well (mainly because of the contrast), and there should be a Bai Ling who did not appear in the back... The author dug a bit too many holes, but these are okay, as long as the protagonist cannot be written as such a waste, this is a fantasy novel, and "coolness" is the first priority.

Faster and faster! I hope the author can write well and not turn it into a pornographic article. I'd better forget about Yaya's mother. I think it's a bit poisonous

I read it in one go, what can I say? There is a reversal, but maybe the protagonist is too weak and the existence of the protagonist is not strong. When a Qing Yuan fights, it feels like the protagonist is being pressured too hard. The supporting characters are well drawn and quite interesting. It's not your ordinary fast food.

The writing is good, but the father figure should be removed.

I have caught up with the update now. Overall, I think it is a good book. Although the author is a bit green in design, the writing style is passable for me. Currently, book reviews are a mirror, but it does not mean that every mirror can correctly reflect the real problems of the book. I hope that while paying attention to the comments, the author will stick to his core and not suddenly change the general direction. In other words, the author can regard writing this book as an upgrade, and the criticized parts in the book as experience. No one can eat a big fat man in one sitting. The author writes according to his own style, learns lessons, and will naturally write more mature books in the future To put it simply, the author needs to write down-to-earth, and don't overdo it because of book reviews. At the same time, as the author's first book, the author should expose his own problems. It will be better to make a reflection and summary after writing.

After reading the first volume, I feel that the author did not handle it very well in some places. The author also said about the true biography that the writing was a bit poisonous, so I will not go into it. What is another point for screening readers? The leader has gone to the extreme level of forbearance and calculation for the survival of the sect. Just to get out of Xuantianmen's control and become stronger. To prevent the sect from ending up like the previous Buddhist sect being destroyed. In the process, the daughter's origin was sacrificed (which can be replenished later). But here comes the twist. While the leader is fighting life and death for the sect, the protagonist is stealing the leader's wife. . . . . . In fact, everyone should like to watch plots such as the protagonist taking someone else's wife. After all, everyone is Cao's thief, but can you tolerate someone like the leader? People are fighting life and death on the front line, and you are dating other people's wives in the back. This plot is really unacceptable to anyone with normal views. So a large group of people were screened. I think the author will make patches later and make the leader a villain. Then the protagonist can kill him openly and get together with his wife. But I think it's really disgusting no matter how you patch it. The character of the leader has already been established. Wouldn't it be better if you had already made the leader a villain in the early stage? Really, this is full of flaws. I felt like I had a lump in my throat after watching it

I've read Chapter 37 so far. Are these intrigues and intrigues something you, a beast-like person, should write about? The protagonist is so weak that a mythical beast has no inheritance of its own and cannot use plug-ins in human territory. What the author thinks makes me feel extremely frustrated. And is this heroine serious? Not to mention that other people have children and their husbands are still there. The protagonist should not be able to transform into a mythical beast. Even if he can, it will be in the later stages. Even if the woman is dead, how can the husband fall in love with a big turtle?

When can I have a human body? Watching two beauties flirting with a turtle is so eye-catching

I saw a comment in another novel that I think is more in line with the current situation of this novel. After the protagonist can transform into a human being, he spends most of his time in a human body. When he is with the heroine, he is a human body, and when fighting, he is also a human body. It basically abandons the fan group of alien beast literature, but the first 1.7 Million words or so of this article are all about alien beast literature. I know that when the author wrote this article, the outline was almost complete and the protagonist became a human being. This shows that the author did not consider the target group of his article when he conceived it.

In fact, I think it would be better not to have a female protagonist, just look at the mystery of the fire. It's not a romance. It's actually a deductible for having some romance and coveting a wife, which is not in line with universal views.

I'm not going to vomit, I feel so uncomfortable watching it, let's talk about the clip first Before and after the protagonist enters the trial, three low-level disciples of the sect can blatantly kill the sect's sacred beasts in the sect. No one noticed in the middle, and then by coincidence, the protagonist thought it was part of the trial, which was to forcibly subdue his intelligence. Then they entered the trial. The trial was the ancestor's forbidden area to increase the disciple's strength. The protagonist was chased all the way in and still didn't find it. Do you think it was because the protagonist had superb magical powers? ? 😰 The intelligence is not reduced much, right? Then, when you enter the second level, the three enemies feed the protagonist the elixir, and the protagonist eats it? ? You said earlier that he thought it was a trial content. Why, the first level of trial content also increases your strength to help you pass the second level? ? The other one is to feed you something and you eat it? ? How dare you eat everything in the world of cultivating immortals? Not to mention the three people who just chased you. It makes me sad to see it. OK, that's all I want to say. You can discuss the plot, but there's no need to talk nonsense. What I'm talking about is what's in the article.

To comment, this book has collapsed. According to the setting of this book, the entire dragon turtle race only has 7 dragon turtles, including Bai Ling who died without any real meaning, and there are only 8. The protagonist is special because he is hanging on the wall. Why did Feng Yaya become a dragon turtle? All mythical beasts have their own fixed technology. What you wrote is about mythical beasts. Brother, if you accept a woman when you see one, I can bear it, but what the hell did you write? If it is so easy to create a dragon turtle, is it still called a dragon turtle? Your book also makes it very clear that the more unnatural a race is, the smaller its number of people will be. Are you going to mass-produce it? Is it possible to edit the animal transformation chapter given by Dragon Turtle with anything in the future? After giving some essence and blood, it will be Dragon Turtle. It's really funny. I've been chasing you for so long in vain.

I just found out about this... Please give me some follow-up readings, and Zhang Ping and so on. I always thought that I just need to do my best to write well quietly. It turns out that the recommendation is not based on whether my writing is good or not, but on the support of my brothers 😂😂😂 😜This is a picture stolen from other authors

Why isn't it popular? How can it not be popular? The author's writing style, his imagination, he is such a great talent, why isn't it popular? I have been a book fan for 20 years and I highly recommend this book. It is really worth reading! I'm wondering, why isn't it popular? Just because the turtle depicted at the beginning is the protagonist? Transforming into a human body too slowly? But it's really worth seeing! ! ! Highly recommended! !

This book is indeed very good, good in all aspects. The only and biggest shortcoming is that it is too hasty and false. The lifespans of the four spirits of mythical beasts are incalculable. The lifespan of humans in the Heavenly Realm is measured in ten thousand years. However, the protagonist does things on a day-by-day and month-by-month basis. One thing after another is completely trivial. It originally requires both beasts and humans to meditate for thousands of years or more. For the protagonist, even if it is not measured in hundreds of years, it should be counted in ten years. But the protagonist basically only practices for about a month, and then he goes crazy and does things. He is either on the road or fighting. How can he practice? But the cultivation level is increasing unreasonably, and it takes time to absorb the treasures of heaven and earth. After the protagonist did something wrong, it originally took hundreds and thousands of years for a mythical beast to fall asleep, let alone evolve. However, it was completed in a hurry in one year because it was to help the protagonist fight. And forget it, the most important thing is that the time issue has to suppress the protagonist's level, but also highlight the importance of the protagonist. Therefore, every event, no matter how powerful the opponent is, is a stage for the protagonist to perform alone. Without the protagonist, it is like losing. They are all old antiques who don't know how old they are. How could they not have any trump cards?

This book is hard to describe in one word. Rating (out of five points) Plot: three points Characters: five points Setting: four points Complaint Point 1: The protagonist Goldfinger has a low presence. Why is it so low? The protagonist obviously has a cheat that gives bonuses to grabbing things. However, after the early stage, the direct presence of the cheat is so low that it is weak. Use it occasionally. The development of Goldfinger is not perfect either. For example, you can grab a small world, but if you grab it, it will directly turn into four small worlds or the quality of the small worlds will be improved. This kind of improvement is unreasonable. The second thing is that after I went to the Emperor to rob it once in the mid-term, there was no classic item-ordering link, which was uncomfortable. Also, since you can gain bonuses by secretly learning dice, why not secretly learn it? You have to keep practicing the skills and magical powers. The protagonist's weak cultivation skills were only solved by swallowing the Feng Chaotian fruit later. Complaint Point 2: Too Holy Mother I won't go into details about this. Fenghuang Palace did a lot of things in the early and middle stages. Although he joined the Thai side in the later stage, the protagonist let them go in the finale. This is the most difficult part. There is a saying that goes well,In a battle of positions, regardless of right or wrong, the winner will be the king and the loser. If you do not advance, you will retreat. Just like Qingyuan and Wuxiang in the early stage, although Wuxiang temporarily surrendered later, he also developed a rebellious attitude. In the early and middle stages of tmd, there were so many attacks and killings and so many conspiracies in the Imperial Palace, but in the finale, you just let them go because they were on the right side. It was difficult to deal with. Whitewashing and being crowned emperor is the most uncomfortable part. Fenghuang and Xuanhuang are fighting for their positions. They have been fighting for countless years and either you die or I die. Even if they are transferred to the inner world, sooner or later they will fight because of the past. The protagonist really protects all the people of Fenghuang without thinking about anything. If you don't kill them, at least you have to erase their memories and inheritance. The result is that there are no winners or losers, both winners and losers are kings, so what's the point of fighting? Originally, the emperor was prepared to die, so why not give him a free and easy ending? As a result, the protagonist let go, which made me feel unsatisfied all of a sudden. Because there are many deficiencies other than the above two points, but they are innocuous, I only gave it a three-point rating. In the early stage, I originally thought it would be about robbing families and causing trouble everywhere, just like bullying the mud at the beginning. But later on, I ate the demon fruit and became a mythical beast. After that, the plot took a turn for the worse. Changed to another style, which is completely inconsistent with the title of the book. Instead of calling "Don't mess with that turtle", it would be better to call it "Second Ancestor of the Dragon Turtle". The protagonist Goldfinger has the ability to acquire a large number of resources, but the overall plot has been deliberately weakening this Goldfinger and turning it into fatalism. This book has a touch of ancient times but it is not completely copied. The characters are perfect. It can be said that this book has established the characters perfectly. Except for Ji Feixue, this character is the most failed in the book. It is too crazy. Not everyone likes Gotham, and it is the most uncomfortable thing I have ever seen to just flirt with him and bury him. The setting is four points, because many plot settings will be messed up if time is used. Many authors never write time when writing books, because the past cannot be changed and the future cannot be pursued. This is not just a reflection on life, but a taboo in writing. Although it looks nb across time, such a setting can easily cause confusion. For example, if someone killed you in the past, where are you now? For example, in books that get back to the point, those who cannot achieve detachment will not be able to do things about time, and even changing the past will require a big price or even one's own life. Generally, those who have detached themselves will even have an ending. The cost of traveling through time in this book is so small that it can almost be said that the protagonist can travel through time but still not go back to earth. Summary: It's a book that doesn't feel complete enough to read. Although the writing is online, many things really need to be improved.

I didn't read the rest of the story, I only watched the beginning of the story where the Qingyuan Clan and the Xuantian Clan fight. The ending was pretty good, but I had to forcefully write a scholar who is disgusting. The previous sect leader was very impressed by the scholar's ​​idea of ​​using emotional bonds to retain the protagonist, and then backstabbed the male protagonist. Don't talk to me about character traits or other miscellaneous things. You are the author and you can write whatever you want, but you are deliberately disgusting when you write this. It's really your own fault that the book is not popular.

As the title states, friends who have read the entire book, please leave the gaps you feel you have not filled in in this post. Because it has been so long, many people may have blurred memories of some plots. As for the pitfalls in everyone's minds, if they can explain it, they will explain it to each other. If they can't explain it, I will go to the author with a mace to explain it. What the author can't explain is undoubtedly a trap, so let him fill it in! Finally, thank you all, Shun Song Changqi😊

I want to be more refined

Catch up on the update, don't let me feed you to death, come on

The book is actually quite good, but later on I have to marry the young widow and have a daughter. It's okay to kill her husband, but do I have to marry her? What I wrote before is from the perspective of beasts. Jackie Chan and Turtle actually wrote all about human thinking and human perspective. In order not to go off topic, I kept mentioning the difference between humans and mythical beasts, but it was superfluous. What you wrote was purely human. You can just create some accidents so that she has to turn into a turtle.