The Path to Longevity Begins with Inner Alchemy

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Generally speaking, the author is not very good at writing stories and prefers to write settings.

Come on, author, I like to see such self-sufficient and stable ones.

Like this kind of golden finger, no matter whether it is true or not, you can succeed in anything you practice. You have practiced this😒 and you don't need any local secrets? It all depends on "I am thinking" about some things that I don't know whether they are useful or useless before traveling? Still successful? With such a big skill, what kind of martial arts can you practice? You can get it right in one step. Not to mention the Eight-nine Mysterious Skills and Tiangang Disha, just practice swords and Qi to become a swordsman. In the future, you can fly with a sword and take people's heads from thousands of miles away. Why bother to use the skin of inner alchemy? In fact, "I'm thinking"

Update time post, one chapter at 12 noon, two chapters in the afternoon

The practice and golden fingers of this book are really amazing, and the various foreshadowings and worldview are also eye-catching. It can be said that the biggest elements of an excellent work are already fully present. But a good hand cannot play cards, and the upper limit is strictly limited by the author's own ability. cheats can add a progress bar to any thing/skill and can break through the limitations of the skill itself. Generally speaking, as long as there is theory, it can be practiced! The practice system is the inner alchemy method with infinite possibilities. The source of the golden elixir avenue is more original than the qi-building foundation elixir Yuan Ying. And all steps have detailed breakthrough training. The key is that the protagonist is a man of his own, and he also perfectly integrates the Qi, blood and martial arts of this world, which is very enjoyable. But! What did the author write? Character description - very little, except for the protagonist, there is basically no description of the appearance of the characters; Environment description - none, there are no characteristics of each country and region, all are mentioned in one stroke; Language dialogue - slow, the first two are actually okay, not important, but this character dialogue is an AI question and answer, two emotionless robots are talking to each other, and the various dialogues are basically without any nutrition, "What should we do?" Really, you call that fighting? In the battle where the protagonist is crushed, he just shoots and punches. In the middle period, when the B block is blocked, it is a movement of his mind. In evenly matched battles, he still punches. In the middle period, the description is "a spear thrust, various magical powers, and flying sword thrusts." The author wrote a battle to destroy a country in two lines. It is extremely unsatisfactory. Let alone the special effects of skills, a little sound effect can be said to be a huge scene. Emotional description - Taishang Wangqing, the author emphasized time and time again in the early stage that becoming stronger is for better enjoyment! You can never be an emotionless person! Then what does the actual description make people feel? The character in the book said it very well, "Sometimes it feels like you are not a heartless person, but in fact you won't feel anything even if everyone else is dead." The protagonist's actual performance is that he has no emotional communication with others. His expression does not change at all in dozens of chapters, and there is no entertainment activities. He is not too sad when his elders die. When communicating with friends, he only exchanges information and practice. He does not talk about his own affairs at all. He is always doing things and practicing, and leaves the house once a year. Family, friendship, and love are inseparable. The author writes that what the protagonist hates the most is the Riddler. In fact, it was the boss who said it and was blocked, and the protagonist is the biggest Riddler. The protagonist has become a big boss. He doesn't say a word to his subordinates and relatives. He just sends a message: "You do it. You don't need to know anything. I'm not sure about it." So this book is divided into two parts: cultivation and others. A novel reads like an expository text. Except for the Golden Finger and the Cultivation System, which are a little bit of meat, the rest are all steamed buns. When encountering a scene where you are pretending to be B, you can barely drink it like water and take a few bites. The only thing left is to look forward to seeing the meat in the middle of the steamed buns...

This book. First, I'm too nervous, I'm busy all the time, and I'm too tired. Second, the golden finger is broken. You have so many martial arts skills. How can you remember them in time? Third, I feel that the enemy is very smart and my own people are very stupid. Is this to highlight the protagonist? I personally don't like watching it, but I hope others enjoy watching it.

The subject matter is okay, but the writing is terrible. Reading these after seeing good writing is simply a pain.

As an upgrading online novel, there is a big problem, that is, in the early stage, the path of seclusion and upgrading lasted for a hundred chapters, and the upgrading speed was very fast, similar to the top-notch luck of Let Me Laugh, so it attracted a wave of readers who liked this type of writing, and also discouraged some readers who did not like this aspect. However, after a hundred chapters, the author began to level up, and the protagonist no longer lived in seclusion.

Brother, please let that village go. The old man who was farming today is an unparalleled genius. Tomorrow, with the help of pig's feet, a large number of top masters will emerge in the village. It makes me sick.