Hunting in the Mountains: I Became a God by Changing My Hounds' Class

I've noticed something strange: if the protagonist possesses the treasure, someone will inevitably kill to steal it; but if the villain does, they'll use the treasure to curry favor with a powerful figure! ...

If you write more about hunting in the mountains and develop in this direction, you might attract a lot of people. But you're just wearing the guise of dog-raising and hunting; you're actually still a martial arts master. Furthermore, he's just a nobody, yet he's already acting all high and mighty.

The author's left and right brains are working in cahoots; earlier, it says, "Are kings and generals born with a special destiny to be promoted?", But later it becomes, "Only those with talent can be promoted."

Why is the first chapter so clichéd? Why insist on writing such a formulaic book?

Why not choose birds of prey as pets? They offer a wide field of vision and the advantage of being air-to-ground.

Are there no original ideas in these kinds of novels? They're all the same formula.

Too bland; rough in detail; lacks any real writing style.

After the dog completes its job advancement, it could consider becoming a falcon, after all, it's like having a yellow dog on one side and a hawk on the other! Add a fine steed, and it would be perfect! Unfortunately, this can't be achieved in reality, so we can only imagine it in novels.

I'll add it to my favorites first, but looking at the table of contents, it seems to be starting to deviate from the title. I hope I'm just overthinking it. I'll keep it for a while and see how it goes. I came here for "Hunting Mountain Hounds," so I hope it doesn't stray from the title and synopsis and become like other books!

Taming beasts is fine, why focus so much on martial arts training? Doesn't that blur the lines between primary and secondary points? Why dedicate so many words to a martial arts scene that's only briefly mentioned?